Whether or Not?- A short story

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nsapo

😆
No Pluto lady...u asked us to suggest title na 😛

Kahe i akwenza, futhi BT wanika ezinye izihloko nice ngempela futhi, ingabe kukhona?😉

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: anam_cid
Beautiful update Dear :-)
😊 👏 👏

Thank you anam...😊

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Souj-
Enjoyed it 👏
Good job yaar👏👏⭐️

Thank you Souj..😊

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nsapo

@nsapo

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

Kahe i akwenza, futhi BT wanika ezinye izihloko nice ngempela futhi, ingabe kukhona?😉

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English translation pls😛

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: nsapo

English translation pls😛

Kyun apoorva,

tumhe toh meri language aati thi na..😎

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Debasree

@debasree04

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Just wonderfully expressed !!! Love it ❤️
Though I have strong doubt Aditya sir & Narendra sir would think this way...par hum to aise hi sochte hei...very well written 👏

Keep writing more...

I m adding it CID story archive...😊

Edited by debasree04 - 11 years ago

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

You're an amazing writer, Riya 👏👏 Just loved the style of your writing. And the way you brought it out was simply too good 👏

Looking forward to more of such amazing stories..😊 Best of Luck 😃

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@ANGELICEYES

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Excellent Ria..
I really liked the way you expressed Aditya sir and Narendra sir's feelings..

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Woow Riya! Just Woow!!

Exactly what we think/ feel Aditya sir must be feeling. Very well written n totally from heart. Really appreciate you for taking the initiative in putting the pain we all felt into words and making it a brilliant story.

Loved the Aditya sir - Narendra sir scene too.

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

This is one of a kind story Riya... Thank you so much for such a courageous and out of the box attempt... It is actually worth thinking what the actors would feel after such degradation of their characters when we the fans are hurt so much... Thanks a ton for writing this... Thanks for the pm...

Waiting for more from you...