Whether or Not?- A short story - Page 5

Originally posted by: Veena..

Yar riya first of all i'm really very sorry for being so late on reading and giving fb on ur story😔 bcz I only get enough time on weekends to read few of stories here😒

Now about the story yar its just superb I can't explain that what i'm feeling after reading this one. Aditya sir attachment with the character of abhijeet sir is a obvious thing and same goes with narendra sir, shivaji sir and daya sir. Being attached with on thing one character for the last 17 years is not at all a small thing, they have a special bonding with their characters with the show and with eachother and the popularity of the show which may be day by day is now weakening, hurts them alot😭poor state of the show😭

I don't know when they will understand that how badly they are ruining the show and their best characters without whom they are nothing

Aditya sir's feelings in ur story are depicted really well even the other's too and aditya sir's and narendra sir's conversation at the end is really awesome and so genuine na👍🏼

We so love CID and these people (actors/characters) that we can't see ruining their roles in the show but may be fw have a different set of minds😡 or I don't know what the production house is thinking about the show, are they really pulling it to an end😲 sigh it really pinch my heart whenever I read something like this that the show will end🥺 awe no plz even reading the line in ur story that everything has an ending and the show will ends someday, really yar pata nai ajeeb sa duhk hota hai but yes its a matter of fact that everything whether good or bad, long or short have to comes to an end

U r such a superb writer dear, u wrote it so beautifully👏. You showed us the pain of aditya sir

Really fabolous job dear, thanx for such a beautiful story riya dear

hugs for u for this🤗🤗

Pata nai uper mene kya kya likha hai, bari baat hai agr tumhe samaj ah jaye😛sorry dear

But its really a perfect one😳

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

Yaar riya
Aditya sir's feelings in ur story are depicted really well👏
bt dnt say smthng like that the show will end😲 i knw its true bt still it hurts...😭
we can't see ruining their roles in the show so think about the actors there...we lve them thinks...wow they have so many fans..wow he is superb and all wow wow...then critisice and itr ends fr us...we are vry much attached to the show bt still...bt the actors?they have to live heir role...they get bashing fr this...they get fans fr this...how should they have been felt????? u shwd that well⭐️⭐️
chalo keep going...waiting fr mre stries frm u

Originally posted by: uhs313

beautiful story... felt so nostalgic i had smile on my lips and tears in ny eyes while reading it

wonderful piece of work 😊

Originally posted by: visrom

I read this last night Riya...nice one...😊 I wonder how Aditya sir and Narendra sir will react when they read this. 😆

We usually make the characters seem real...but here you made the real people the characters in your story...a very different approach. Keep writing. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Beautifully written Riya 👏

This was such a unique concept... I loved it!

Looking forward to more stories from you... 😊

And so sorry for the late reply... 😳