Story Contest 9 Rating: 'No Murder Story' (Rating Closed) - Page 5

A big round of applause for all the participants 👏👏Good job.Great efforts.Do keep writing all the writers👍🏼

My Review and Rating:
Story 1: Rating 8/10
The manner in which the story has been written is very nice👏It is easily understandable in the first reading itself.The use of smileys is very nicely done😊But the inclusion of the funny scenes wasn't needed.But still, a nice attempt 👍🏼
Story 2: Rating 10/10
Excellent and unique concept⭐️👏 Very nicely written.The manner in which past officers,Vivek,Rajat and Niyati were introduced in the story is very good👏Liked the hospital scene where Abhijeet and Sachin comes to meet Vivek😳The team was well used and everyone played an important part.The whole investigation part and a different type of ending with the officers reviewing the case thereby,making the culprit realize that he has been caught is a very good idea⭐️👏The writer has chosen a very good motive for the crime by the mastermind ⭐️ ⭐️.

Story 3: Rating 10/10

Superb story,which is easily understandable in the first reading itself👏The plot was very well used.I could feel the scenes being played out before my eyes⭐️ Liked the disguise part⭐️👏👏The introduction and conclusion has been nicely written👏.Vivek and Tasha have been given very nice roles.Liked the interrogation scene by duo😊 The idea of using words indicating different gender by the masterminds,to create confusion regarding their identity was good⭐️.

Story 4:Rating 10/10

A very nice and sweet story👏😊The fighting scenes have been very nicely described with good dialogues👏The part regarding the blood group and information of how it was discovered that the person had donated blood recently was very nice⭐️The whole investigation part was very good👏The dialogues throughout the story and the description of the story is very nice👏The role of each officers was very well written👏.

Story 5: Rating 9/10

Very nice story😊👏The choice of the officers was nice.The introduction has been well written.The investigation has been very nicely described.Liked the disguise scences👏The writer has chosen a very good motive for the crime by the mastermind.Good job by the writer.👏

Story 6: Rating 9/10

Liked the story and the style of writing👏😊Very good plot👏Vivek and Asha has been very nicely included in the story.The investigation part has been excellently written👏Freddy-Purvi scene is really nice and sweet😊The scenes between Abhijeet,Freddy-Vivek and Asha-Purvi is superb and excellently described👏⭐️ The reunion is really sweet.

Finally read all the stories so going to give my
reviews now...


Story No 1, Rating : 7/10

This was very entertaining, more like a
funny story. I enjoyed reading it...


Story No 2, Rating : 8/10

Good investigation. The plot was good, it was nice to see Vivek, Rajat and Dr. Niyati back... Some scenes were really cool. Very well written too...


Story No 3, Rating : 8.5/10

I liked the investigation.. the explanation
was really good as well.. Everyone had good
role in your story...I really enjoyed reading this..


Story No 4, Rating : 9/10

One of the best of the lot. Very well written...A super nice story with some really fabulous dialogues...


Story No 5, Rating: 8.5/10

I liked this story as well, It was a short nice
story...
Nice attempt...


Story No 6, Rating : 9.5/10

I enjoyed this one the most...Beautifully written...
It was nice to see Asha and Vivek back. ...
very good investigation, really enjoyed reading this...
Great job...



Good luck to all the participants. You all did a
great job...

Read all the stories and rated and reviewed them too. All the writers you did a really good job and the reviews are on page 3. Hope no one takes offense.

A big round of applause for all writers thank you for writing brilliant stories and also thanks to organizer for organizing such a wonderful contest 👏👏👏

Story 1 - Its not funny scene contest rather investigative cid story. You must keep this in mind. In some part, you sarcastically write on theme of the contest. Its not appreciated. Lastly, you wrote this is the first 'no murder' case in the history of 16 yrs...totally wrong !! There are few cases in golden era where there is no murder.

5/10


Story 2 - Plot is really good. Innovative one.
Please use correct spellings...its really difficult in reading.
Another question - Vivek & Rajat come to meet with the team then how they involve in the case directly? There should be some official order or some strong reason like how you added Dr Niyati...its missing.
I like Freddy-Vivek scenes, Anandi Sharma'a feelings for Abhijeet (is it Anandi's feelings or author's feelings😉), duo & trio scenes.
Why you avoided Nari shakti totally? 😕
Overall good attempt !!!

7/10

Story 3 - Please don't mind but my personal opinion is that when i read any story with dead officer like Tasha, i cant relate that with present CID...I know its not in rules rather its just my personal view. You wrote the story not with present team rather totally past team of 2009-2010 before biweekly, which I don't like. Otherwise Story is good.
And what a disclaimer !!! 😆

7.5/10


Story 4 - Lagta hei Daya sir don't like ATMs but i like bank scene specially duo with robbers. Again Tasha...already said my point of view in Story 3 regarding Tasha. How Vivek worked with the present team, it was not clear. Otherwise story is good.

7/10


Story 5 - Again DUO went bank to withdraw cash, lagta hei they don't like ATM 😛. But their dress is too good (Kash aisa kavi dikh jaate woh). How Asha & Vivek worked together though they left CID...its not clear. Otherwise good attempt.

7/10


Story 6 - Wonderful. Specially which I want to read but could not find other stories - you included Asha & Vivek in proper way. It makes more sense to your story. I like Freddy-Purvi scenes a lot. Purvi touches Asha's feet...little bit difficult to accept but if i consider the writer & as I know both are the favorite so its the imagination of the writer 😉, so its okay.

9/10

All the best participants !!!

My reviews here. Sorry for being brief as I'm short on time and late already. Great work by everyone, enjoyed all the stories. 👏 👏 All the best to the participants!

Story 1 - Like has already been mentioned, this was more like what we're used to seeing in WAS and not story contests. Emphasis on the no-murder part was not really needed. The story itself was alright though, good attempt.

Rating - 6.5/10

Story 2 - Cool plot and nice to see Vivek, Rajat and Dr. Niyati back. Freddy sir's scenes with Vivek were great as were Dr. Niyati's parts in the lab, really reminded me of the good old 2005-06 days. They could've had a more prominent role, though. Duo parts were cool as well. Anandi Sharma's character was intriguing and nicely implemented in the plot. The climactic exposition scene was nicely described. The narration was hard to follow, though, and some parts went into a bit of unnecessary detail which added to the bulk. Great work.

Rating - 8/10

Story 3 - Simple, nice plot and very smoothly narrated for a breeze of a read. Very nice. It was great to see Tasha and Vivek back and the entire teamwork was very will handled with everyone getting a nice role. The Nilesh-Armaan interrogation scene was particularly well-described and I really liked the disguise scenes. The story was rather missing the thrill element, though of course that's not strictly necessary. Cool job!

Rating - 8/10

Story 4 - Special mention goes out first to the selected witty dialogues, which I really loved. The story and investigation was fairly straightforward, easy to follow and presented in an engaging manner. Great to see Tasha and Vivek back once again, and I really liked your "best of both worlds" approach as I loved their trio with Purvi. Again excellent work by everyone in the team, though Vivek could've been given a bigger role. The action scenes are a highlight as well.

Rating - 8.5/10

Story 5 - Short but nice story. Nice duo scenes throughout and Asha had a cool role, though her and Vivek's exact involvement in the plot could've been clearer. The narration was crisp and enjoyable to follow, very nice. For some reason, the title of your story made the Pink Panther theme play in my head! Hehe. Good work overall!

Rating - 7.5/10

Story 6 - Good attempt. Liked all the Freddy-Vivek scenes and the climax. Narration was rather confusing, though, and you should've given duo/trio a more prominent role.

Rating - 8/10