Story Contest 9 Rating: 'No Murder Story' (Rating Closed)

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moni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

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i liked all the stories😊but i will give a👏👏for first one because i like that story in a funny manner

but i think the story is taken as an episode in cid before itself...do u guys remeber?

and the story 2 was nice but it was in small letters so that it was difficult to read

same for the 3rd story also

sorry no comments for bakki stories

all the best for all👍🏼

Edited by monishasri - 11 years ago

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: monishasri
reviews:
i liked all the stories😊but i will give a👏👏for first one because i like that story in a funny manner
but i think the story is taken as an episode in cid before itself...do u guys remeber?

and the story 2 was nice but it was in small letters so that it was difficult to read

same for the 3rd story also

sorry no comments for bakki stories

all the best for all👍🏼

We'll be pleased if all stories are reviewed😳

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moni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

guys i will be posting the reviews of bakki stories when i have time...bit busy now sorry for the delay

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Neela-khan

@Neela-khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

acchi hein di.1st is funny.mein sab acchi se nehi padhi abhi tak.padhke mein review dungi fir se.😃

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Debasree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Soon i will read all stories & will rate along with review 😊

Yahan par meri story vi ho sakti thi 😒 Ufff !!! I cant digest my own blunder !!!

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: debasree04
Soon i will read all stories & will rate along with review 😊

Yahan par meri story vi ho sakti thi 😒 Ufff !!! I cant digest my own blunder !!!

😔 Its okay we still get it to read it😃

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-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Story 1: Read 1st story and totally agree with visrom review. I felt exactly the same.

It is great if seen as a funny scene in EDT or WAS contest. But for a proper story contest... I don't want the writer to feel hurt so no more on this.

Rating - 5/10

Story 2 : First the negative point - the rules say previous officer must have important role in it, which i don't think they had. And spelling mistakes of cops names. Please check that too next time. About positives - Ek haar keliye itna dimag lagaya criminal ne aur story likhne keliye writer ne ke mera dimag end mein ghumne laga. 😆 Thanks for clarifying all the things. And whole team reviewing the case in front of criminal to make him realize he is badly caught is very nice. The writer had changed many things from her usual stories but still it feels that it was written keeping duo and daya in mind at the places of vivek-freddy and Abhijeet. 😉 Am i right or am i right. Bura mat manana, mujhe maloom hai u must be laughing while reading this.

Rating - 8.5/10

Story 3 : The explanation of finger prints on bank door was cool . I also liked the human touches of team you included, like their efforts to find the minute details. And the plot was great. You really used a lot of brain but again vivek and tasha appeared from nowhere and they were there like they are part of the team. So little away from plot for the contest.

Rating - 8/10

Story 4 : Starting is fantastic.. Choron ka kya nasib hai, itne planning ke baad wohi din chuna jab duo waha pe they Oh n Abhijeet got injured.Simple and straight forward story. I liked the presentation. But like in story 3 vivek n tasha are there as part of the team. From plot i thought shreya meant you have to bring them back for some reason.

Rating - 8/10

Story 5 : Starting was good. Can imagine two handsome guys in casuals and people staring them 😉. Asha and vivek came out of nowhere so that's a minus point. But the plot was ingenious. Lots of brain is used. Again i feel if instead of putting so many things in limited words story, you have made it simple it would be better to read and understand.

Rating - 8.2/10

Story 6 : Totally loved this not just because it is fantastically written but also the way writer honestly stuck to the plot. Vivek and Asha's entry was brilliant also the reason behind their getting invloved in plot. Also love Abhijeet - Fredricks duo you chose. Purvi touching Asha's feet was little to dramatic. But the overall story is what we expect from this writer.

Rating - 9.5/10

Edited by -SNEHAL- - 11 years ago

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: monishasri
reviews:
i liked all the stories😊but i will give a👏👏for first one because i like that story in a funny manner
but i think the story is taken as an episode in cid before itself...do u guys remeber?

and the story 2 was nice but it was in small letters so that it was difficult to read

same for the 3rd story also

sorry no comments for bakki stories

all the best for all👍🏼

This is the Rule so All Writers send their Stories according to that...

Page limit of 20 pages, Times New Roman, size 11. No minimum.

plz Tell SHERYA abt that Small Font Size/Small Letters Issue..😊

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: monishasri
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and the story 2 was nice but it was in small letters so that it was difficult to read

same for the 3rd story also

I've increased the font size for all the stories except the first. For some reason when I copied them over from Word, IF automatically decreased the font size. Let me know if you need it to be bigger. I can probably make it one size bigger.

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: debasree04
Soon i will read all stories & will rate along with review 😊

Yahan par meri story vi ho sakti thi 😒 Ufff !!! I cant digest my own blunder !!!

Koi nahi hota hai Sree. Aur waise bhi tumhari story abhi bhi hum par sakte hain. 😊

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