ANNIVERSARY SPECIAl Combine Project of VISROM and GD.!(PG:3/4) - Page 8

Don't say sorry GD. It's easy to find loopholes and very difficult to write something. Aur mujhe kuch likhna aata toh nahi so i shall not criticize beyond a limit.

GD dear really an awesome and full on investigative story... 👏
Maira tou srr hi ghoom gaya, hahaha... 😆
Seriously yar bara maza aaya... especially DUO moments, lovely... 👏
Yar I really want to shot that DCP, jb daikho hamary innocent DUO k peechy para rehta hai... 😡
Wasey Daya sir bohut cute lagty hain Abhijeet sir ko tang kerty huey, hehe... 😉
Thanks dear and keep giving us such very well written and beautifully handled stories... ⭐️
Take care dear and stay blessed... 😊

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

GD dear really an awesome and full on investigative story... 👏
Maira tou srr hi ghoom gaya, hahaha... 😆
Seriously yar bara maza aaya... especially DUO moments, lovely... 👏
Yar I really want to shot that DCP, jb daikho hamary innocent DUO k peechy para rehta hai... 😡
Wasey Daya sir bohut cute lagty hain Abhijeet sir ko tang kerty huey, hehe... 😉
Thanks dear and keep giving us such very well written and beautifully handled stories... ⭐️
Take care dear and stay blessed... 😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

I still keep HI. In early 30's in My Stories...😆

😆 Arry is Small Investigation ko PARH kr Sar Ghoom Gaya... Then U must Read some Real Investigation like ODD ONE OUT, NATURAL N ARTIFICIAL, STIFF IN RIFT, DARKEST HOURS...

Tab pata chaly ga Sar Ghoomna KIsy boltay HAIN...😉

Boss, PLOT was Awesome so Story Automatically Awesome...👏👏

thank You so much Yaar...😳😳

Originally posted by: snehal.

Fantastic story!!

And that too on Anniversary occasion to remind everyone this is how CID had worked previously and not like some stupid episodes that we saw last week n before that.

Fantastic plot visrom! 👏 I liked the technique of making people drug addict! Very unique.

And as usual awesome job GD. Loved the DUO, Abhijeet- Rajat, Abhijeet- ACP sir bond. And i always admire the leadership quality abhijeet has, of taking everyone along with him. Thank you for portraying this very nicely!

One question. If they were making any person who wins in the game drug addict with giving gifts, how come none went to police? Or doctor. When someone takes drugs unknowingly he/she will see Dr naa for what all they were feeling. Also how does these people got the address of bar? And if bar was clean why they used to come there?

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Bars having Play Zones area now a days na...😉

Originally posted by: visrom

Thanks Snehal...for whatever.

Actually I gave GD only a vague outline. 95% of it is her own effort. So I think she deserves the credit. What I did was to only pull her out from her writers block, when she posted that she's not going to write any more stories.

Originally posted by: visrom

'Tumhe kaise pata'???? 😈 (In your bade bhai's style)

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Hahaha yeah yar maira tou itny mein hi ghoom gaya, hehe... 😳

I have read all those too... 😊 And the darkest hour I think I have read that more than 4 times... Gosh just love that one... ⭐️ Especially the ending, that was just WAOW... 👏 I think I have learnt by heart that story... 😆

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Hehe... DARKEST HOURS is the Story, where Reader love Bhai, DEVIL AVTAR and whole Credit goes to NEEME cz it's Her Idea...👏

Buht achy say Us ny Mujhy Brief bhi kiya THA Yaar...😳

Khair Thank You Once again...😳