ANNIVERSARY SPECIAl Combine Project of VISROM and GD.!(PG:3/4) - Page 5

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Hmmm.. good attempt..
nice idea Vis di.. 😊
total FW style.. thappad pd ke chair pr gire bhi honge.. aur robot ki tarha fat fat bolna bhi start kr diya hog hena😆
nice investigation.. liked the way your tried to make everyone indulge in this .
And ya.. title ki daad deni padegi.. 😆 Waah...
Really liked the way Badey Bhai took everything in his command... and wow nice googling.. you did a very impressive job..
and oh DCP.. *jb jb ata h kuch na kuch krke jata h* 😆 Hr baar poora utarta h... but chalen atleast he apologized this time... otherwise uski shaan ke khilaaf h na😡
and Bhai.. ooh.. hahahahaha love that Devil emotion.. n Badey bhai's reply seengh kaat dunga.. *something like that* 😆 but liked that part very much.. Bhaiii.. nice thinking hmmm... 😉
You did a really great job Bhaijaan...
hope to see mannyyy more stories from you in near future...
good luck..
ese hi dhamake phodte raha kariye.. 😆
God bless 🤗

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

GD Parrot dhokha dene wali cheez hai isli. 🤣

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Firstly title kuch lamba nahi FW ishtyle ke liye? I mean FW ke titles toh aaj kal zada se zada teen yah chaar shabd ke hote hain. It would have better if you wrote Daya Aur ACP Ka Raaz. 🤣

Yaar, Mujhy VIS DII nay PM pr yehi Title diya tha, halanky unhun nay bhi ROFLING ka Emo daala tha, but I m such Pagal kay Main samjha Un ko Khud ye Funny laga hay...

Shagnika ki story baad main parongi pehle toh yeh parna zaroori tha. 🤣

Kyun...😉😉

Waise idea bhadiya tha Vis di.

True Boss...👍🏼

GD ka FW ishtyle ko copy kiya hai. Thappad maara aur fatak se chair pe gira. 🤣

aby, tou Wo Maartay samy Haddi thori Gintay hain, bus Daantun say bajny wala Piano suntay hain...😆😆

Google...grr...actually I mean awesome!!!

Yes, again True...👏

Badey bhai aur bhai ka mast the!

BIG BOSSES...😈🤣

DCP ko kyun laaye? Woh naa aata toh acha hota. 😡

tou ACP Sir ko Suspend kaun krta...😉😛

And here you were saying ke tum ab stories nahi likhoge. Agli baar aisa kaha toh jaise bhai ke saath katti hai waise tumhare saath bhi kar loongi main. 😡 🤣

hawww, kr lay KATTI kyunky ab main VM bhi nahi banaon ga...😈

Originally posted by: Forfriend

the title of the story is too much comedy BH 😆

the the sing kat dunga tunhare was the punch line 😉

story overall very nice per yaar aap ka punch nahi tha... haan but I know its ur and Visrom story toh ypu written according to her...

full of Investigation... and you really write it too well... Abhijeet as second in Command and Daya doing all investigation and all things... just too good... and ya nice research for the story too...

About the Plot... Visrom really nice and interesting Plot...👏

and Ya thank god it did not turn like a FW episode... jinke promo unnkkee epi se jada ache hote hai...

your Story is much better that your PRomo ⭐️

Originally posted by: -Shruti

Omg! What an amazing story !! ⭐️
Hacking wala plot...wow I loved it.
Aur kya title diya hai 😛
The start was awesome...with cartoon DCP in the bureau 😆
Wonderfully written part..loved it a lot..and rest of the story was awesome too. FW style...but 100000000 times better...and the hacking plot plus missing Daya reminded me of the 'Killer lake' episode.