As being a Writer and Reader, I m totally Hopeless after seeing the Participation on this Contest, Obviously its really Painful...
I am little Critical about Entries including this Contest as well the Plot Makers...
yes, those who given Plot mostly did not make Plot much Intresting and Intriguing as in Both Plots DAYA SIR WAS MISSING, either in Mostly Story Contest, if its Celebraty Story Contest, there the Character must be Centric na...😊
its the First Experience of Both as Plot maker so as a Writer, I was avoiding to Create Issues but Next Time, plz Think about it...👍🏼
Next because of this the Writers really Bearing Difficulties in Writing the Story cz the main Character would be in Vanashing acts...
Story 1: The Story was too much Short, the Few Lines are Exact as in Plot🤔, but I like the Fire on ACP Sir, Apt from any Villian..👏👏
if its Writer First attempt, I'll appreciated as Writer really Showed Courage to Write for a Contest Story, Brave Attempt.👏👏
Thank You...😳
Rate: 6/10
Story 2: Refreshing in the Sense that Investigation is much more Minimum than Usual😊, Somehow Very Simple and Straight😉, Story missing the Flavour of Intrest, I really Enjoyed Two Punch Phases of Story, The Cuprit bring back after 7 Years
with Apt Introduction, Cant think that the writer really Awesomely wrapped out something Unbelieble and the second thing as GTALK, Excillently well Execution of that Information, Loved it...⭐️⭐️⭐️
ABHIJEET Sir Last Fire missed was again a Peak Punch Attempt👏👏... Lovely and enjoyable... Thank You...😳😳
Rate: 7.5/10
Story 3: its really the Bestest Story in whole bunch of Entries either Writer not touch the Bench Mark of own work but tried to coverup till 70%👏... The Start and Information was Lovely till the Dumb Girl come across DAYA Sir and Exchanged
the DEAL paper, but the way it came Out from His Jacket at Bureau Parking was Filmy... itrs Nice when DAYA Sir taking out something or checking His Pockets for Searching Something and then get it... DAYA Sir did not went upstairs for Buckup atleast He did not Call anyone either He was inside Bureau...😲
He went inside the Minister Room easily without Hurdles, easily Killed His Nephew and taken out His Uncle safely from House to hideout althought He very much knew about the Security Cameras na...😕😕
The call got by ABHIJEET Sir after DAYA Sir proposely Death in that Blast was somehow absolutely Breathtaking Scene...⭐️⭐️
the AK-47 also Not Defining Well... End was too much Rushy and somehow Lost the Interest in Story too...
Obviously as a Writer, the Loop holes understandable but all and all, its really the Best Attempt of this Contest👏⭐️👏... Thank you...😳😳
Rate: 8.5/10
Story 4: its really a Fantastic Attempt with Images and lots of new Information, I Love the AK-47 Idea, the Code Breaking and that Silver Wolvareian Issue, Mind Blowing⭐️⭐️ but after that when DAYA Sir went to that Junkyard, the whole Story
lose the Grip, somehow Writer tried to Grip it but Failed that till End, Story completely lost the Balance of Interest and Investigative touch... a Nice Try but could be better if take it in Crisp manner... Thank You...😳😳
Rate: 7/10
Story 5: Very Nice Attempt, A Good way of using Two Number plates of Cars and that the Lose Wire in Bomb and the Code👏👏... But again the Story hotch potched in a Manner to completely Confuse the Reader😕😕... I felt that in Writer Story some paras were Missing so the Confusion created...
How the Team track to break Code by Number Plate Idea was completely Missing and I think there was a Para Missing by the Writer as the Number Plate got the Incorrect Order of Number Plates but obviously when any gang done it, they would be take care of that😕😕, I m little Confuse there, might be I missed something or What... Somehow Interest was Minimum too... but a Well Written story... Thank you...😳😳
Rate: 8/10
I m extremelly Sorry to the Plot Makers, Writers and the Fans of Writers as its only GD Point of View and it did not mean to Hurt and one and Insulted the Writers, reders Views, Writer Creative Works and Plot Makers too, just a Simple Suggestion to Better Our Own Work and come up in Future with Improved Work... Thank You...😳😳
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