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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
My ratings :
Plot 1 Story 1

Positives : Nice and crisp. Ending had a feel good factor.👏
Negatives : A little too short.😆 (I wonder who wrote this??😆)
Marks : 7/10

Plot 1 Story 2

Positives : Nice and detailed. Very vivid. Felt like watching it unfold on video.👏
Negatives : Writing style could be improved on a little bit. 😊
Marks : 7.5/10
👍🏼
Plot 1 Story 3

Positives : Everything. The best story of the lot.👏
Negatives: Nothing.
Marks : 10/10

Plot 1 Story 4

Positives : Nice construction of the story. Makes for an Interesting and entertaining read.
Negatives : The English writing part has to be improved a lot.😊
Marks : 6/10😊

Plot 2 Story 1

Positives : Very nicely written. The way you used the given plot to make it into an interesting story is a sight to behold indeed.
Negatives : Not too many.
Marks : 9/10.👏


Edited by swagatamghosh94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Binod don't be upset.. You are doing this first time na.. Next time Iam sure you will open a beautiful thread 👍🏼.. Dada thank you so much for making it a lovely thread 👏😳🤗. 5 stories.. Great.. Will read and review as soon as possible 😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
will there only be a winner??
no runner ups???😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sheroo9000

will there only be a winner??

no runner ups???😕



Well the rating will decide that. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
My ratings (I'll edit this post as I read each story):

Story 1: It was a lovely story. Short and sweet. But maybe just a bit too short. 😉 And I felt that there was very little of Daya sir in the story. The ending "Shreya: Sorry Shreya". 🤣 Overall a good feeling story. And I have a guess as to who wrote this. 😉 But not saying anything.
Rating: 7/10


Story 2: This one was awesome. The way everything was written I could see it almost unfolding on my screen. True CID style. Nothing against your story whatsoever. 👏
Rating: 8.5/10

Story 3: AWESOME!!! Fast-paced, suspense, action, and a lot of Daya sir! Loved it! Like totally. 😃
Rating: 9.5/10 (I'm a stickler from being a TA. Never give perfect. The first mantra of our profs. 😆)

Story 4: The story is quite good and well written. I know who wrote this as well. 😉 I don't know why you were complaining along with everyone else. The story was great! 😃
Rating: 8/10

Story 5: And of course I know who wrote this. The story seemed a bit rushed, but overall good.
Rating: 7.5/10
Edited by KS_Shreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Binod don't be upset.. You are doing this first time na.. Next time Iam sure you will open a beautiful thread 👍🏼.. Dada thank you so much for making it a lovely thread 👏😳🤗. 5 stories.. Great.. Will read and review as soon as possible 😛.

thank u very much for this suggestion...thanks a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@shreya di, thanks for vote.
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Edited by binod.abhijeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet

@shreya di, u r first to vote for this contest. ..so congrat...



no Baccha, SWAGATAM already gave the Votes...
Checked previous pages...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gadhadada




<font color="#6633ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">no Baccha, SWAGATAM already gave the Votes...</font>
<font color="#6633ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">Checked previous pages...</font>


oh so sorry for that as i didn't check the pages...so now i have edited it...have a look dada...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet


oh so sorry for that as i didn't check the pages...so now i have edited it...have a look dada...



Yup, Good...😊
BINOD, check HP Story Entried thread, I asked a Query there...
Plz Reply Me about that...😊

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