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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

My ratings :

Plot 1 Story 1

Positives : Nice and crisp. Ending had a feel good factor.👏

Negatives : A little too short.😆 (I wonder who wrote this??😆)

Marks : 7/10

Plot 1 Story 2

Positives : Nice and detailed. Very vivid. Felt like watching it unfold on video.👏

Negatives : Writing style could be improved on a little bit. 😊

Marks : 7.5/10

👍🏼

Plot 1 Story 3

Positives : Everything. The best story of the lot.👏

Negatives: Nothing.

Marks : 10/10

Plot 1 Story 4

Positives : Nice construction of the story. Makes for an Interesting and entertaining read.

Negatives : The English writing part has to be improved a lot.😊

Marks : 6/10😊

Plot 2 Story 1

Positives : Very nicely written. The way you used the given plot to make it into an interesting story is a sight to behold indeed.

Negatives : Not too many.

Marks : 9/10.👏

Edited by swagatamghosh94 - 11 years ago

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Binod don't be upset.. You are doing this first time na.. Next time Iam sure you will open a beautiful thread 👍🏼.. Dada thank you so much for making it a lovely thread 👏😳🤗. 5 stories.. Great.. Will read and review as soon as possible 😛.

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unknown

@sheroo9000

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

will there only be a winner??

no runner ups???😕

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 44

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sheroo9000
will there only be a winner??
no runner ups???😕

Well the rating will decide that. 😊

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 44

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

My ratings (I'll edit this post as I read each story):

Story 1: It was a lovely story. Short and sweet. But maybe just a bit too short. 😉 And I felt that there was very little of Daya sir in the story. The ending "Shreya: Sorry Shreya". 🤣 Overall a good feeling story. And I have a guess as to who wrote this. 😉 But not saying anything.

Rating: 7/10

Story 2: This one was awesome. The way everything was written I could see it almost unfolding on my screen. True CID style. Nothing against your story whatsoever. 👏

Rating: 8.5/10

Story 3: AWESOME!!! Fast-paced, suspense, action, and a lot of Daya sir! Loved it! Like totally. 😃

Rating: 9.5/10 (I'm a stickler from being a TA. Never give perfect. The first mantra of our profs. 😆)

Story 4: The story is quite good and well written. I know who wrote this as well. 😉 I don't know why you were complaining along with everyone else. The story was great! 😃

Rating: 8/10

Story 5: And of course I know who wrote this. The story seemed a bit rushed, but overall good.

Rating: 7.5/10

Edited by KS_Shreya - 11 years ago

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Binod Uprety

@binod.abhijeet

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Binod don't be upset.. You are doing this first time na.. Next time Iam sure you will open a beautiful thread 👍🏼.. Dada thank you so much for making it a lovely thread 👏😳🤗. 5 stories.. Great.. Will read and review as soon as possible 😛.

thank u very much for this suggestion...thanks a lot...

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Binod Uprety

@binod.abhijeet

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

@shreya di, thanks for vote.
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Edited by binod.abhijeet - 11 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet
@shreya di, u r first to vote for this contest. ..so congrat...

no Baccha, SWAGATAM already gave the Votes...

Checked previous pages...

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Binod Uprety

@binod.abhijeet

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: gadhadada

<font color="#6633ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">no Baccha, SWAGATAM already gave the Votes...</font>
<font color="#6633ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">Checked previous pages...</font>

oh so sorry for that as i didn't check the pages...so now i have edited it...have a look dada...