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Sonali.

@Sonali.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

OMG Nishi... You read the entire story?? in such a short span... Thanks dear for the compliments... I will try to continue writing😃

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Finally read it😃!!! Again a fabulous story with classy touch⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Thank God finally ACP sir is safe😆. As usual lovely character portrayal and nice writing style👏. Liked how you connect Asha mam with current team👍🏼. Duo together 😳, casual ladies chat 😛..loved it. Girls fight scene was really impressive ⭐️. Duo and Asha's concern for Acp sir⭐️. Appreciable work by Fredy sir, Rajat sir and Sachin👍🏼. You showed Duo-Fredy interaction with Asha is literally wonderful⭐️⭐️. Climax I felt could have been a lil more action packed personally 😛. But overall a superb story ⭐️ ⭐️. Keep writing more Di 🤗. Thank you so much 🤗.

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SofiyaSam

@SofiyaSam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sonali.
OMG Nishi... You read the entire story?? in such a short span... Thanks dear for the compliments... I will try to continue writing😃

Actually yesterday I visit on the forum at night and saw the story was posted. So I save the page in my mbl and start reading. I really enjoy it. And sleep with amazing ur story. So morning mein comment to banta hai na. And one thing I forget to post that u end the very well with whole team in ACP house for dinner.
I wish we see this moment in the episode. But FW ka koi bharosa nahi. Hame story se hi kam chalana parega.

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Aww thanks Angelic... I am so glad you liked it.. Par likhte likhte pata hi nahi chala and the story became so lengthy... i hope its not dragged

Anyways... Thank you so much for your valuable feedback 😃

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Sonali.
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Aww thanks Angelic... I am so glad you liked it.. Par likhte likhte pata hi nahi chala and the story became so lengthy... i hope its not dragged</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Anyways... Thank you so much for yourvaluablefeedback😃</font>

I love reading long stories 😉. Di feedback khatam nahi hua😆. Have to cut it in midway. I am editing it. Please check it.

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Oh! Nishi... I am so obliged with your kind words... 😃 Well regarding what you said about dinner... hmm we can only think of it aur kya! 😕

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I am waiting Angelic 😃

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SofiyaSam

@SofiyaSam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Oh! Nishi... I am so obliged with your kind words... 😃 Well regarding what
you said about dinner... hmm we can only think of it aur kya! 😕

I mean khaas ye FW wale cid mein yese sncens dekhate, jaise U write in ur story. I love the last part.

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

I mean khaas ye FW wale cid mein yese sncens dekhate, jaise U write in ur story. I love the last part.

Aww thank you thank you thank you 😆

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Finally read it😃!!! Again a fabulous story with classy touch⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Thank God finally ACP sir is safe😆. As usual lovely character portrayal and nice writing style👏. Liked how you connect Asha mam with current team👍🏼. Duo together 😳, casual ladies chat 😛..loved it. Girls fight scene was really impressive ⭐️. Duo and Asha's concern for Acp sir⭐️. Appreciable work by Fredy sir, Rajat sir and Sachin👍🏼. You showed Duo-Fredy interaction with Asha is literally wonderful⭐️⭐️. Climax I felt could have been a lil more action packed personally 😛. But overall a superb story ⭐️ ⭐️. Keep writing more Di 🤗. Thank you so much 🤗.

This feedback means a lot to me... Thanks dear 😃