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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

You are most welcome Di 😳.

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Will read it and definitely comment..😊

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet
Will read it and definitely comment..😊

Take your time sweetie 😃

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Take your time sweetie 😃

Thanks dear..😃

Will read all the previous ones too...😃

Edited by Raaz_sweet - 12 years ago

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Not much only one story before this 😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

SONALI, First I want to ask when I start Ur Story there was a BG music played at that Page then I stopped it after clicking the Stop Button posted by any Newbie in Ur Thread... Plz yaar Us ka tou kuch karo... it Irritates na...😉

Now back to Story... Ok as I dunt compere it with Ur Previous One so giving my FB as a Sepatate Story...😛

I really Enjoyed the Plot, its was Nice with Proper Pros and Cons with some Loopholes I already Discussed with U...😊

I really Admired ACP Sir approach either the way He backed those Officers sent by DCP for His Security...👏

I also Love the Idea which U put up after giving abt why ASHA left CID Mumbai...👏

Somehow I did not Satisfying the way U move Three Storiies as U lost so many Focuses to Connects them...😊

I really really Enjoyed that Hotel Part where ASHA puts that Plan of Ganesh Gift with Wrist Stamp👏👏... That was the Bestest Part either I imagines it Smoothly...⭐️

I also like the Casual Chit Chat😳, the way Bhai say her "Yaar" 😉and FREDDIE Sir casual way of Talking...😃

I like the Team Distribution...👏

I must say that U really gives Us a Good Dose of Investigation/Interrogation with a Proper way...👏

U really include Police, PUNE CID, Petrolling Police... Excillent Yaar...👏

Thank you so much SONALI...🤗

Recent FW must need to learn so many things from U...😉

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Writing my comments as I am reading.

Nice to see Asha coming back after many years...again another good approach, rather than showing a 2002 era story. 😊

I wish it were on a more happy occasion, though. You didn't mention what Asha was doing now...

It was nice to see Rajat offering to let the landlady know of anyone who needs PG accomodation.

Nice contribution by Freddie, 😊

This scene...exchange of glances...very well written. 👏

Daya: Sir, Aap ko hum ghar chod de?

ACP: Mera ghar tumse opposite direction mein hain Main chala jaunga Rajat ke saath.

Daya: magar sir

ACP: (annoyed) Daya

Daya: Okay sir

Abhijeet: (giving him a reassuring look) Chalo Daya

Next, ok...you have explained the reason for Asha's return. 😳

Nice girly convo...😆 Wait!!! Asha got married???? 😛😉

After this it was all action, action, so I couldn't pause to write comments. 😆

You added our famous bomb defusing scene...😆Never mind, though...at least Abhijeet didn't do inky pinky ponky...he sent a pic to his friend...this was good use of techology.

And you brought Sudhakar back too...wow...nice to imagine old buddies together. 👏

Chalo a depressing, tiring day has got a silver lining now. Thanks for the story. Do write more. 😛

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Gamayun

@Minionite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Okay finally read it!

I mus say the case was awesome!!! To see Asha after so long was lovely. And Freddy was lovely.

It was really nice to read.

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Thank You so much GD, VIS and Sri (as you dont like being called Shreya these days 😉) for the feedback 😃

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Anjali

@anjali_mahajan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Wow...wt a story sonali 👏
specialy Asha was there thats a wow factor ... 😳
it remind me of the Golden era of Asha 😊
i like
1. Abhi,Daya,Asha convo,talks n all
2. in Poorvi house ,whole scene...chit-chat, excitement...dn the most women power ..freddy praising 👏
3. investigation was too gud 👏
4. U show Asha bravery very well 👏
5. Duo nd Asha's tension for Acp's life
6. Actualy i like to read the whole hospital part
7. dn Asha was a human bomb...nd her brave step 👏
8. Abhijeet sir click the picture dn defuse the bomb...nice to imagine 😊
9. ACP sir gave treat to all the team member...kya baat h 😉😃...sir ko salary cheque mil gya kya 😆
10. Salukhe entry
11. Sudhakar back too...arey wah oldie goldie officers back
Great time for all 😉

overall i want to say its a fantastic story
full investigation
Well written
realy u have wonderful writting skill 👏👏

keep writting ...nd aise hi hmein entertain krte rho 😉
God Bless U
🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by anjali_mahajan - 12 years ago