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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: swagatamghosh94
Brilliant story GD. Loved how you built up the plot. Very nice indeed Popat ma'am.👏

SWAGATAM its really Honor for Me to have Your FB...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: pappais
awesome story dada👏👏
the investigative part was superb and the way u showed the trios relationship was really nice❤️

😆😆i didnt hack into ur brain system😆😆

awww SNEHAL Plot was Awesome na Baccha...😳👏

oops Thank You for Leaving My Munna Brain...😆😆

Thank You again,...😳😳

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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Gossshhh... Extemely sorry for the delay in my reivew bhaijaan... it just slipped from my mind... really sorry for that..
now coming towards the story that was a masterpiece... another story which I can read whenever i will feel low. Thank you for this wonderful piece of work.
though this story took place at the initial stages but I loved the tad bit of concern you showed of Abhijeet for Daya... that was little but yet deep... Really enjoyed that.. and loved the whole underline wala part... the way Daya made Abhijeet say Hamari waja se hua h na ke tmhari waja se..
lovely investigative shot from you...
and ya will mention those New Story In PH pm.. but anyways praying to see you back in your form ASAP.. am sure you will comeback with another masterpiece of yours.
God bless you.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: DUOlover123
Gossshhh... Extemely sorry for the delay in my reivew bhaijaan... it just slipped from my mind... really sorry for that..
now coming towards the story that was a masterpiece... another story which I can read whenever i will feel low. Thank you for this wonderful piece of work.
though this story took place at the initial stages but I loved the tad bit of concern you showed of Abhijeet for Daya... that was little but yet deep... Really enjoyed that.. and loved the whole underline wala part... the way Daya made Abhijeet say Hamari waja se hua h na ke tmhari waja se..
lovely investigative shot from you...
and ya will mention those New Story In PH pm.. but anyways praying to see you back in your form ASAP.. am sure you will comeback with another masterpiece of yours.
God bless you.

BHALOO, as Everything mentioned in Plot so I just take it in Progressive way so these Praise for SNEHAL only...👏👏

Yes the Initial Relations od Duo little but Deep as I cant show it like FW showed it that ibn one Epi we saw DAYA Sir calling ABHIJEET Sir as Sir and in another Boss or ABHIJEET...😆😆

I tried to Show DAYA Sir Sensitivity in Diffenrt manner and its True as in this case ABHIJEET Sir is the Hero and DAYA Sir only playing a role of CHOTA...😉🤣

Thank You so very much for such Lovely and Long Feedback...😳😃

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Finally got a story after long time...❤️

Loved the story as usual..
A well mixture of Daya sir's Innocence,Abhijeet sir's Intellegence & ACP sir's fatherly emotions...❤️

Investigation part was also very good..but for me Abhi-Daya took over it n made the Story so special..
Well written Dada n Nice plot Snehal dii...🤗🤗

Sad to know that no stories for sometime...But take a nice break..
Sukun se rho..thats more imp..🤗

Take care

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: ..Candy..
Finally got a story after long time...❤️

Loved the story as usual..
A well mixture of Daya sir's Innocence,Abhijeet sir's Intellegence & ACP sir's fatherly emotions...❤️

Investigation part was also very good..but for me Abhi-Daya took over it n made the Story so special..
Well written Dada n Nice plot Snehal dii...🤗🤗

Sad to know that no stories for sometime...But take a nice break..
Sukun se rho..thats more imp..🤗

Take care

Hmmm, Extremelly Thankful for UR Comments and really for UR Cute Wish...😳👍🏼

thank You...😳

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

simple, sober and cute story with very straight investigation, i really lyk it..lovely friendshp developmnt betwn duo..
nice knowledgefull science lecture, mjhe toh laga k koi session attend kr rhi hu..good googling i must say..
some dialogues really nice nd yup wo codes mai ne initially hi first go me break kr liye the..
sharper dn duo na😉

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Sorry Dada jara late ho gayi iss bar😛..
The story is totally fantastic⭐️⭐️.. A serious investigation case with lovely expression of emotions is always a treat to watch.. I lost in the classic era completely while reading😳😳.. Wish Asha was there too😛.. The Duo⭐️⭐️..amazing as always😳.. Pata nahi onscreen kab aisa dekhne ko milega😒.. Simply loved ACP sir's fatherly attitude😳.. A new year gift to me😛.. Thank you so much Dada and Snehal di🤗 and as I said you before repeating again waiting for a blastic comeback🤗.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

nice story Snehal and GD. I really feel inspired to write one on this theme now. .. 😛

I didn't like one dialogue by acp... When he says Nakul ke saath something something. .it was too hurting. .😔

The real acp is not emotionally fragile.

Second. .Why Daya in hospital is it Snehal's idea or GD's??? 😈

I feel Abhijeet those days was more reserved...here Abhi is his usual naughty self like he is now. But that's ok .. This is your interpretation. its nice ...This theme has inspired me once again.