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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

btw nice theme snehal
gud job..👏
gud luck to both
bel ji kitkat ka break lo😉
araam karo..

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: snehal.
Daya in hospital is completely GD's idea. I had nothing like that in my mind till the story came out 😛

yaar Story barhani bhi tou thi na...

I m So Sorry...

tum kehti tou Main Delete kr deta Boss...

owner Ka Satisfied hona Zaruri hay...

Mazdor Ka Nahi...

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: gadhadada

yaar Story barhani bhi tou thi na...
I m So Sorry...
tum kehti tou Main Delete kr deta Boss...
owner Ka Satisfied hona Zaruri hay...
Mazdor Ka Nahi...

Oh common GD!

Take a chill pill..

And mazdor? 😲 Hey bhagwan ab toh story likhwana tumse matlab tumhare fans toh jaan se maar denge mujhe, tumse mazdoori karwane keliye 🤣

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

its ok GD...no problem.

Shall I try one on this theme? I want to write one of that era... 😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

mazdoor... 😔 I think even I should rethink my plan ..kyon GD... if it's a trouble leave it... 😔

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: visrom
its ok GD...no problem.

Shall I try one on this theme? I want to write one of that era... 😳

Oh yes! Please do. 😃

And could you complete that Do saal baad story of yours? I really wanted to read it.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

I wrote a different one related to that... What was the name? The missing link. check the story archive.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

@SNEHAL... No, I mean as being a Plot Owner, U made Sketch about the Story... U are the Archetact here, so if the Labor did not Work according to the Sketch, its Your Responsibility to Point Out that and make Changes on it till the Execution coming out according to Ur Mind...😊

I already send it to all those Stories first to their Plot Owners just to satisfy them and tell them to Ceck their Prodects or if got any Loopholes, give back to Me with their Suggestion as well so I can Improve it...👍🏼

@VIS DII, Sure, its really a Nice Theme and we all Anxiously waiting to read it according to Ur aspect...😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: visrom
mazdoor... 😔 I think even I should rethink my plan ..kyon GD... if it's a trouble leave it... 😔

again its Owner Interest either satisfied about giving Works to Mazdoor or Not...😉😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: rosepink.
simple, sober and cute story with very straight investigation, i really lyk it..lovely friendshp developmnt betwn duo..
nice knowledgefull science lecture, mjhe toh laga k koi session attend kr rhi hu..good googling i must say..
some dialogues really nice nd yup wo codes mai ne initially hi first go me break kr liye the..
sharper dn duo na😉

😆 Yes, Google Helped Me alot on that Memorry Loss Clearification...

Obviously GUY is GUY na...😉

BTW, wo Sharpner kafi Sharp hee hoga...😆😆

Thank you so very much as the Plot given by SNEHAL already Classy tou Story ko tou Hona hee tha ...😳

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago