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Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Sorry Dada jara late ho gayi iss bar😛..
The story is totally fantastic⭐️⭐️.. A serious investigation case with lovely expression of emotions is always a treat to watch.. I lost in the classic era completely while reading😳😳.. Wish Asha was there too😛.. The Duo⭐️⭐️..amazing as always😳.. Pata nahi onscreen kab aisa dekhne ko milega😒.. Simply loved ACP sir's fatherly attitude😳.. A new year gift to me😛.. Thank you so much Dada and Snehal di🤗 and as I said you before repeating again waiting for a blastic comeback🤗.

Originally posted by: visrom

nice story Snehal and GD. I really feel inspired to write one on this theme now. .. 😛


I didn't like one dialogue by acp... When he says Nakul ke saath something something. .it was too hurting. .😔


The real acp is not emotionally fragile.


Second. .Why Daya in hospital is it Snehal's idea or GD's??? 😈

I feel Abhijeet those days was more reserved...here Abhi is his usual naughty self like he is now. But that's ok .. This is your interpretation. its nice ...This theme has inspired me once again.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

@SNEHAL... No, I mean as being a Plot Owner, U made Sketch about the Story... U are the Archetact here, so if the Labor did not Work according to the Sketch, its Your Responsibility to Point Out that and make Changes on it till the Execution coming out according to Ur Mind...😊

I already send it to all those Stories first to their Plot Owners just to satisfy them and tell them to Ceck their Prodects or if got any Loopholes, give back to Me with their Suggestion as well so I can Improve it...👍🏼

@VIS DII, Sure, its really a Nice Theme and we all Anxiously waiting to read it according to Ur aspect...😃

Originally posted by: snehal.

Ohkk.. I am sorry then, as i couldn't give much time to the final version.

And sorry for not pointing out mistakes, i was busy with personal issues and still didn't get time to read this version.

Chao thik hai. It was my first time, hope will earn from this experience next time. 😊

Originally posted by: visrom

Come on GD it's not criticism. Just my POV. If I had written I might have kept Abhijeet very very serious...I don't know...this is just experimentation. We don't know much about Abhijeet's personal life back then. I had an idea to revisit and write a story long ago. But someone said it's a pathetic idea. There were many ppl who don't like meddling with Abhijeet's past.

But I don't think any of them will read my story now. 😉..so I am free to give it a shot...maybe next time I get some time. For now...I have loads of work. I have no time to write, so I thought I'll give you an idea.. Please don't take it as mazdoori...it's just a piece of combined work. You had a writer's block and I had an idea, so there we are. 😊

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

First a big congratulations dear for your production house... I know I am tooo late to wish you dear but I came to know about your this beautifull success yesterday and really happy to see your efforts and journey... 🤗

And now coming to you Red Signal... awesome story dear just like your ALL OTHER BEAUTIFULL stories... I really anjoyed the whole and Love the way you interpretated DUO's relationship...👏

Wish you lots and lots of success and best wishes... May Allah Almighty protect you dear... Take care... 😊