Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 58

Originally posted by: ...Nyx...

Ab kya??!!
again tension deney ka irada hai?
Daya sir becharey kya kya sahenge?
Ab angry young man ko kon manayega?
Etc etc etc OMG so many questions.
Chalo kuch bhi ho kuch had tak toh theek huwa sab😃.. Daya sir theek hai sab plan tha iss baat sey hi mera toh Dil Garden garden hogaya 😃😆 Baki sab bhi theek ho jayega HAULEY HAULEY..
haina??...
Very good explanation of all points and kaafi dimaag kharch kiya hai boss👏 dikhta hai mehnat👍🏼.
NEEME & DEVIL amazing fantastic fabulous awesome great.. etc etc 😃😃 ab baki words dusre readers keleya chor diya 😆..
Apna feedback hogaya lol. Tum dono ko jhhappis 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Wow wow wow & Just Wow...!!!!!
Eee...M so so so happy after reading this part..😃😃
litrelly cried during Abhi beating Daya scene..❤️
I just lovved ur work as usual guys..⭐️⭐️
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The grey shade of Daya..ufff...☺️
The way whole plan was brought up too amazingly..⭐️
Team's spc Abhi & Acp sir's emotions,anger,hurt..All portrayed vry beautifully..
Ab aur kya bolu..lafz hi nhi hay tareef k liye..

Please please jldi se ise pura complete kro..tell us AB KYA HOGA??????

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Btw...Time fr sum bone breaking of both of you fr making making me wait so much..😉
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Keep writing togethor..
Take care..Lovve you😃❤️

Originally posted by: anjaan_anjaani

i knew it!! this was a plan of daya...in the first part he raised his hand on abhi but didnt actually slap him. there you go.amazing plot, amazing dialogues and amazingly presented. I loved it

but i feel that it need one last chapter to round everthing off

neemedi and dada a big 🤗 to the both of you and a big 👏👏

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Haww a plan of Daya sir's?!! Well that makes sense! After all he couldn't raise his hand on Abhijeet sir like that ever!

Must say that was an awesome last chapter! Suspense end tak barkar tha! Every moment made me want more!!!

Neeme and GD you two were awesome!

Originally posted by: pinky118

Awesome Dada n Neeme👍🏼...i really luv it❤️

it was so emotional😭😭...

i m very happy after reading this part...

ahh..it is a plan of Daya sir...😊

Hats off to u both👏🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Tera Wiyaah...🤣

Ye AGARMACH (brother of MAGARMACH) yahan kis Hisab mein Phir raha hay BH...😉😉

Picture abhi Buht baaqi hay BH...😳🤗

Originally posted by: start1234

Sorry for late review and this part was sooo goood👏 I LOVED IT⭐️ but ye kya last part mein bhi suspence bole tu suspence ka baap Haaee ab intazar rahe ga and thank u for liking my dp