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Wow wow wow & Just Wow...!!!!!
Eee...M so so so happy after reading this part..😃😃
litrelly cried during Abhi beating Daya scene..❤️
I just lovved ur work as usual guys..⭐️⭐️
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The grey shade of Daya..ufff...☺️
The way whole plan was brought up too amazingly..⭐️
Team's spc Abhi & Acp sir's emotions,anger,hurt..All portrayed vry beautifully..
Ab aur kya bolu..lafz hi nhi hay tareef k liye..

Please please jldi se ise pura complete kro..tell us AB KYA HOGA??????

Btw...Time fr sum bone breaking of both of you fr making making me wait so much..😉
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Keep writing togethor..
Take care..Lovve you😃❤️

i knew it!! this was a plan of daya...in the first part he raised his hand on abhi but didnt actually slap him. there you go.amazing plot, amazing dialogues and amazingly presented. I loved it

Awesome Dada n Neeme👍🏼...i really luv it❤️

Originally posted by: vermamegha

DADA I HAVE NO WORD TO APPRICIATE U BUT I CAN GIVE U ONE THING 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Forfriend

AB KYA HOGA...

haan sach me ab mera kya hoga... ita acha lag raha tha ki chalo tension khatam... per nahi tum logo ne toh tension badha di...

Last part me ending ki jagah bigning laga di...

ohhh my poor Daya... bichare ko kitani mar padi...

and Abhijeet angry young man again... ufff...

waise BH and Neeme yeh story puri saas thama ne wali thi... good explanation of all points... good moto...

and ya woh old jhakaham... I think Daya ne khud se kiya thana Tarika ki uss halat ke baad... upps... kitana saha hoga mere Daya ne...

but all the end very noce to see a different shade of Daya...

or behoshise uthane ke baad gana complete kiya... had ho gayi yeh toh... 😆

Lovely concept... and lovely execution 👏

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Originally posted by: duoa

Thank God all is well

Abhijeet sir with fiery attitude just great to imagine all the events 😊

Every thing is almost clear now except Ab kia ho ga????

waiting for next part to know answer of this question

Love u GD and Neemee di for such wonderful stories👏👏👏

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice update. Par tension to abhi tak khatam nhi hua! Ab kya hoga??? I hope we ll gt answr of ths q soon. Waiting fr nxt updt. Thanks fr NO PM.

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

join fireworks 😉 B P sir ll b happy 😉😃