Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 55

Originally posted by: rosepink.

kaha tha na daya kisi ka lollypop nhi h
are abhi k shouldr pe shoot kiya
mai toh dil pe xpct kiya tha😈
coz d 1 who luvs u d most knows how to hurt u d most

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Okay for part 5. Yes! The suspense is finally out! An action-packed part. Jagya helped in looting? Haww! That was something I was so not ready for. 😲 Ah and of course the students get their little bit of fun as well! Lekin duo ko chot kyun pauncha di. 😭 Nahi! Mere duo! 😭 Daya sir wapas bureau aa jayenge naa?!!

And Neeme that evil smile is my copyright. You're totally sued for using it. 😈 😆 Lekin ab aage kya hona hai? Jaldi batao! Yeh suspense bardasht nahi hota hai!

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice update. Fully action packd hollywood movie with indian cid offices :-)
sound weird? Ab kya karen, mujhe to aisa hi laga B-)
this is nt the end. Waiting for duo moments in cid.

Originally posted by: nickkr

👏👏

AUR KYA BOLUN.SO FINALLY DAYA SIR IS BACK.HURRAY!!

BUT YE KYA ,ITNA SAD CONCLUSION HUA PART 5 KA😭

AND WO LAST WAALI DEVILNESS KYON 😈KUCHH TOH GADBAD HAI !😉

AAGE AAGE DEKHTE HAIN HOTA HAI KYA!!😊

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Wow.. I saw it coming..!!
I had this mere feeling since starting that the end of this case will be like this.. Daya can't betray like this.. there is some plan... there is something hidden.. Well that's that. Overall a really applaudable chapter.
It was really nice to see Daya in this new touch. And seeing him investigate and enjoying everything in it was really really soothing.
Though Daya shooting Abhijeet seemed really shocking but till then the story had reached the limits of infinity and I said loudly This is a plan.. and so it was..
I loved each and eveything..
I liked the fact that Daya didn't let anyone feel that all this is planned up.
But this last line is quite disturbing...!! And it is urging me to think on it.. and so do I am doing since I completed reading this.. lol.
anyways can't wait for the next chapter.. and let's see what future brings for us..
Hats off to you Bhaijaan and Neeme di.!!
Thank you for this great masterpiece.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
God bless you both.

Originally posted by: vermamegha

very nice dada

Originally posted by: start1234

WOW Daya sir is Back😊. Ek dum Dahsu Part Tha Aur aap dono ne tu KAMAL hi ker diya Hats off to both of you 😊 mein tu iss chapter ke bare mein kehna chahu gi k KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT 👍🏼 🤗 but last line ne hosh-o-hawas hi uda diye Ab bas agle part ke liye WAITING WAITING WAITING

Originally posted by: pinky118

part 4:

Chalo jo reh gya tha wo b ho gya...bank b loot Iiya 😲

It was awesome...the u express the feeling of the team members 4 Daya sir was amazing👍🏼...

Originally posted by: pinky118

Now part 5:

This part was amazing😉

finally finally the suspense released...and my Daya sir is there😃

the last part was so emotional😭...

I really luv it❤️...pr Kia ab Daya sir wapis CID mein a sakey get???

Aur DUO ka bond phir se wasey hi strong ho sakey ga???

Originally posted by: Soni.

Neeme and GD just read the first 2 parts of your story Darkest hours and i am already saying its very chilling and grilling. What a story this is yaar, I read 2 parts only and i am already saying its a masterclass. Kya likha hai tum dona ne. I have no words to express myself. Kya hungama kara kardiya hai tum dona ne. Literally speechless you know. I am already getting an heart attack with suspense and Daya's planning. Its superb just superb...Ek dam mast concept and plot Neeme. I was missing your combine productions and was reminding myself of your other stories espically masterpiece Truth behind the scene. Is story ne to sab stories ko peeche hiladiya. Loved DIG and DCP million dollor question Who will be the next ACP? His attempt to confront Abhijeet..anger..tension about his sons' career...when needed scold to them..all were shown perfectly and brilliantly. Bechare Abhi ko apne bachpan ka coat nikala na para. Bahat dukh hua yaar..lol. he way you have shown Daya sir..simply awesome..I love it to the core. Sharp, dangerous and daredevil super cop. I was missing this type of stuff from Daya. Really liked the secret investigation part. Daya sir's plan..disguise..alertness..giving instructions to his gang members..connection with the informer..plan to escape Jagya from jail..using liquid fluoride to burn jail..everything was just fabulous. Were do you 2 get such ideas from its amazing. Yaar itna heart attack dene wale chijein mat likho. Tension ho jati hai, Coming to the second part ab uske bare mein kya kahu...Daya sir's behaviour towards Abhi sir, Acp sir and teammates not unacceptable but chalta hai since i know this is all Daya sirs some sort of plan but killing a little cute girl just because a guy told him is seriously shocking. Daya sir is not the type of person to do this even though he is a heartless criminal in the eyes of CID. So many questions are raising in mind i am totally confused right now...I mean Daya wasnt the type to grab ACP's postion. He can't be doing all this to get rid of ACP sir... Its was really nice to see the bond between Freddy sir and Daya sir Loved it to the core. I missing Daya's keechai on Freddy. ACP sir's mental struggle, pain of a father is really heart touching and over whelming. Loving how ACP keep getting flashbacks of Nakul and the gunshot. Good that you both reminded about him to us...I am so feeling bad for Abhi sir. He has turned into a zinda laash. His condition is totally worse then ACP sir's. I just want him to get back into his supercop job so he get the matter into his own hands and solve the case instantly. Funny element of your story was that Tony. Simply awesome attitude... Now i am definitive not liking this new Daya speaking nonsence against his own team members especially ACP sir. Daya is hurting me as well.. I mean it is going too far.. with the abuses and stuff,,,You brought back Rahul and Aman in your combine productions. Excellent loved their scenes. You written how they would feel perfectly. Both of the chapters were excellent and very well written. Both of you deserve an standing ovation for this as it's a masterpiece ab dekhte hai agye kya hota hai. Chapter 3 and 4 ka review agle hafte...