** Poems thread # 2 ** - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow great attempt.. Loved the whole poem...
esp. third sher is my favorite..
It's so deep..
Lovely..
keep it up.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks every one for encouraging😳
@Iklover: Tareef kertay kertay khud shair keh dala. Wah!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@IkLover,loved ur prayer 4 ur dear frnd👏
well done😊
@saman,fantastic poem yaar as always👏
gr8 work😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

This is another poetry from my side...😛

Chaha tujhe hazaroon say,,,
Manga tujhe darbaroon say...

Halka sa bhi shak nhe hai humain tujhe kho dene ka,,,
Akhir hum nai duayain li hain aksar baray mazaroon say...

Sheeshay ki dukaoon main saja rakhay hain khilonay kyun?
Sehmay huay guzartay hain masoom bachay bazaroon say...
Saaloon say ik hasrat thi, un kay ilfaaz sun'nay ki,,,
Khamoosh ker diya keh bhool jaoon, woh bhi apne isharoon say...

Jawab manga tha hum nay suraj ki sirf aik kirn say,,,
Kaeen kirnay bicha keh us ne khud aaghaz kia sawaloon say...

Maidaan main hum peh peechay say tum he nay waar kia tha?
Poochtay hain hum yeh sawal kayeen dafa apnay yaaroon say




fanstic poem saman...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

This is another poetry from my side...😛

Chaha tujhe hazaroon say,,,
Manga tujhe darbaroon say...

Halka sa bhi shak nhe hai humain tujhe kho dene ka,,,
Akhir hum nai duayain li hain aksar baray mazaroon say...

Sheeshay ki dukaoon main saja rakhay hain khilonay kyun?
Sehmay huay guzartay hain masoom bachay bazaroon say...
Saaloon say ik hasrat thi, un kay ilfaaz sun'nay ki,,,
Khamoosh ker diya keh bhool jaoon, woh bhi apne isharoon say...

Jawab manga tha hum nay suraj ki sirf aik kirn say,,,
Kaeen kirnay bicha keh us ne khud aaghaz kia sawaloon say...

Maidaan main hum peh peechay say tum he nay waar kia tha?
Poochtay hain hum yeh sawal kayeen dafa apnay yaaroon say


wahTonguewahTonguesaman⭐️ LAJABAB👏👏👏 thanks 4 sharing dearTongue
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Posted: 12 years ago
few lines from my side😛just trying😉
😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi
apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi
hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me
raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi
likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane
apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane
dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri
shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

few lines from my side😛just trying😉

😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi
apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi
hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me
raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi
likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane
apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane
dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri
shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭


Outstanding poem👏...esp the last two lines...Thanks cutiee😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful cuite... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Saman that was another extraordinary poem! 😃

And lovely Cutie. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

Thanks every one for encouraging😳

@Iklover: Tareef kertay kertay khud shair keh dala. Wah!


No dear. I m just a dumb between great poets here😳

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