** Poems thread # 2 ** - Page 65

Originally posted by: cutie006

few lines from my side😛just trying😉

😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi

apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi

hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me

raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi

likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane

apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane

dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri

shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭

Really nice Cutie..
Wonderful attempt..
Loved the whole thing..

Originally posted by: cutie006

few lines from my side😛just trying😉

😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi

apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi

hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me

raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi

likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane

apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane

dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri

shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭

I wanted to wrote more but couldn't due to health issues😳...However posting it atlast. Hope u'll like it esp Rajat fans😳😳😳

Originally posted by: saman0

I wanted to wrote more but couldn't due to health issues😳...However posting it atlast. Hope u'll like it esp Rajat fans😳😳😳

Senior Inspector Rajat❤️❤️❤️

On 29 june 2012, entered the personable character

He won my heart and left their a small nuclear reactor😆

Just then started some chain reactions

It at once generated electricity that produced heat sensations

That heat produced a warmth feeling

I started flying and touched the ceiling

Some fission particles produced kinetic energy in a portion of heart

This energy accelerated my body and then a process start

Kinetic energy was transformed to thermal energy by the nuclear reactor

A temperature was formed as a result that burnt a heart sector

But no pains and no agony, though it filled me with satisfaction

Then i realized that i was suffering from a disease of addiction😳

Slowly a part of my heart started making a portrait

Which was given energy from fast neutrons gate

The picture became clear after the whole process was done

When i saw it clearly, inspector Rajat was standing with a gun😳😆

Thank u sooo much🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

awww Cutie Baccha...😳

Buht Umda, Buht he aala...👏

Zabardast Kalam...⭐️

Thank you so much...🤗

Thank u sooo much dada🤗 u always encourage me😊

Excelent poems cutie, saman and others..👏👏👏

Fantastic poem Saman... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏