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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

few lines from my side😛just trying😉

😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi
apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi
hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me
raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi
likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane
apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane
dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri
shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭


Spellbound👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice Cutie..
Wonderful attempt..
Loved the whole thing..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

few lines from my side😛just trying😉

😛Aaj kuchh likhne ka dil kiya mera bhi
apna kuchh yaad aaya, kuchh yaad kiya tera bhi
hum kho gaye kuchh es qadar yaadon ki bhid me
raat aayee chali gayee, ho gaya savera bhi
likh dale the un lamhon me shayad, jane kitne afsaane
apne se lag rahe the kuchh, kuchh shabad the jaise anjaane
dekha jo samne apne,hairan thi ye nigahein meri
shayahi bhri padi thi aur kaagaz tha mera kora hi😭


awww Cutie Baccha...😳
Buht Umda, Buht he aala...👏
Zabardast Kalam...⭐️
Thank you so much...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wanted to wrote more but couldn't due to health issues😳...However posting it atlast. Hope u'll like it esp Rajat fans😳😳😳
Senior Inspector Rajat❤️❤️❤️

On 29 june 2012, entered the personable character
He won my heart and left their a small nuclear reactor😆
Just then started some chain reactions
It at once generated electricity that produced heat sensations
That heat produced a warmth feeling
I started flying and touched the ceiling
Some fission particles produced kinetic energy in a portion of heart
This energy accelerated my body and then a process start
Kinetic energy was transformed to thermal energy by the nuclear reactor
A temperature was formed as a result that burnt a heart sector
But no pains and no agony, though it filled me with satisfaction
Then i realized that i was suffering from a disease of addiction😳
Slowly a part of my heart started making a portrait
Which was given energy from fast neutrons gate
The picture became clear after the whole process was done
When i saw it clearly, inspector Rajat was standing with a gun😳😆
Edited by saman0 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I wanted to wrote more but couldn't due to health issues😳...However posting it atlast. Hope u'll like it esp Rajat fans😳😳😳

Senior Inspector Rajat❤️❤️❤️

On 29 june 2012, entered the personable character
He won my heart and left their a small nuclear reactor😆
Just then started some chain reactions
It at once generated electricity that produced heat sensations
That heat produced a warmth feeling
I started flying and touched the ceiling
Some fission particles produced kinetic energy in a portion of heart
This energy accelerated my body and then a process start
Kinetic energy was transformed to thermal energy by the nuclear reactor
A temperature was formed as a result that burnt a heart sector
But no pains and no agony, though it filled me with satisfaction
Then i realized that i was suffering from a disease of addiction😳
Slowly a part of my heart started making a portrait
Which was given energy from fast neutrons gate
The picture became clear after the whole process was done
When i saw it clearly, inspector Rajat was standing with a gun😳😆


😳😳😳. Fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u sooo much🤗
misha😛shreya😊saman😛jerry n iklover😛 4 ur lovely cmnts🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


awww Cutie Baccha...😳
Buht Umda, Buht he aala...👏
Zabardast Kalam...⭐️
Thank you so much...🤗

Thank u sooo much dada🤗 u always encourage me😊
i know,m not a gud writer bt yeah love writingEmbarrassed
once again thanks 4 ur appreciation🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excelent poems cutie, saman and others..👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic poem Saman... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
That is really lovely Saman. 😃

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