STORY : Barsaat ki raat (complete)- on second post - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
👏⭐️ WONDERFUL!!!

😆😆 Awesomely scary promo yaar!! Truly FW style of misleading!! Was on the look out for that scene while reading!!!😊😆

What a Visrom style😉😛 rocking and fantabulous story!!😃😳

AWESOME TRIO-CENTRIC CASE!!!

Reminded me of some of the olden golden cases!!!😃😳

👏⭐️ Visrom stays one of my top 5 fav writers here!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
would love to read this story as soon as i find some free time 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Ohh.. Vis di, I really thought of a team in danger story🤣. You played an wonderful googly like Sourav Ganguly😛. FW itna dhamakedar promo ott or dramatic epi ke liye hi istemal karte😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Great work, visrom. 👍🏼 You've again proved that a plot doesn't have to be complex in order to be effective and memorable. I think the simplicity and straight logic was beautiful and helped us to focus on the trio-centric nature of the story. Reminded me of the Golden Era cases in many ways - the honest and warm dialogues, Daya sir's interaction with Sunil, the way they find out about the murder (instead of the usual "Hello, CID?" call) and ACP sir giving both of them sandwiches being highlights. 😃 Wish we could see this on screen. Kudos for successfully emulating those classic OTT promos. 😆 Always looking forward to your stories, and this is another lovely addition. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Loved the story. The twist and turn was really good. Finding out Garv was the killer was a nice suprise. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Such a simple concept handled so wonderfully ! A Treat for TRIO fans... I so wish to have seen this episode on screen. Reminded me of the golden era. This was the original ACP we knew once. After ages did I see him like this. There was nothing OTT about it yet trio relationship was shown so beautifully. I guess i haven't seen them in an auto since ages 😛 The plot itself was so simple, yet interesting. Nice job really. 👏👏 Thanks Vis for this Trio treat 😃 Dil khush ho gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Vis di a simple and straight story can always be awesome, amazing, and lovely. Your story was really like that. A trio-centric, classic story, that's what I felt on reading your story. I really wish FW would show this on screen someday. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
vis di.. amzing.⭐️..havent finished yet...but i prefer your story way more than the new re runs running currrently😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Will read soon Vis...😊
I am a bit busy... but will surely take out time to read it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just miss such Simple human effect stories in CID these days… on the contrary anywhere on television these days. Complete trio package, superb dialogue. The part I simply loved was real life incidences like taxis not ready to wait or autowala asking double money. Some really cute scenes that I liked were ACP sir saying Abhijeet Daya could have left and Abhijeet sir saying if they got to know that ACP sir is struck alone at the bureau wouldn't they come back? Or ACP sir offering sandwiches to sunil and duo or Daya sir teasing Abhijeet sir, tum dusri auto mein aana..

All in all a treat to read and imagine. Vis I am a big fan of your stories. Have read others in stories thread. Please keep on writing dear.

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