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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Mini.S
i read that story where abhijeet was kidnapped and held in a glass room..another was AKI type i think deba di wrote, another where cid team was at a politician's house partying and freddy had a major role.also that nakul centric ones by ika di..
vis di ...am serious ..this story of yours is gonna be my 5th story here..pakka..just try not getting it looong..if possible ..

Sorry Mini...I have already made it 12 pages and still have a few more pages to go. It's not coming out the way I thought...

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Mini

@iMini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

ok 😊
ill try reading it in chapters..and take as much time as you wish to write it vis di..no hurry..youll get it as you like..

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hi All,

Finished the story.

Some of the circumstances are from real life incidents. Therefore please excuse me for coincidences and accidental discovery of clues.

I felt completely out of touch...I finished it today because I am busy again from tomorrow and will lose my train of thought if I postpone this.

All feedback - good or bad is welcome. I just want to know that people have read it..😃 Hope you enjoy it.

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halfbloodprince

@WindsOfHeaven

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome 😛
Loved every bit of the story, with just trio+Salunke. Concept was simply superb and I enjoyed duo and trio moments.
I had guessed Gaurav's the killer when his character came on the spot. 😛

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

A wonderful story Visrom. It was so descriptive i could see it with my own eyes on how the story was proceeding. I loved the way that ACP was so thoughtful about DUO as he knew they hadn't had anything to eat. It was a nice touch to add to the story. Showed there are human and have feelings and senses too. The other point that I liked was that you kept extra officers and characters away and just kept the story to the point. Visrom the way you connected each and every point to the whole case was simply mind blowing. Your style writing made the story so fab as it was was nicely described. There was no OTT or YSPT (except the promo) which also made the story fab. I would love to see this on screen. A really good investigative story.

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Vis di.. FANTASTIC story⭐️⭐️. No army brigade of officers😛, flawless writing,dialogue and description👍🏼, little and sweet duo and trio interactions😳😳, logical, simple, fast paced khooni story. Loved it a lot.. Would like to see it onscreen😊😊.
But di, in your promo the concept looked CID in danger.

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Thanks Shruti, Soni, Angeliceyes - for being among the first to read and comment. 😳

Angeliceyes...yeah...the promo was meant to be misleading...FW style - didn't I say it. 😉

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Great visrom...u completed it so fast...always i love to read ur stories..i will try my best to read it very soon...

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Debasree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: visrom
Thanks Shruti, Soni, Angeliceyes - for being among the first to read and comment. 😳

Angeliceyes...yeah...the promo was meant to be misleading...FW style - didn't I say it. 😉

😆 😆 induction of fw 😉