ASHA in danger!!!!!(new story @page 34) - Page 3

Originally posted by: misha.as

congrax senior member poo.. 👏 for award and this THREAD...
Ur stories are awoesome...👏
sorry I m late here

thanks di😊😳
don't worry u not late
there are many who have not even seen this thread😃

Originally posted by: gadhadada

POO😉

Yesternight I read Ur Story but yaar Mera Lappy nahi chal raha tha tou Main FB nahi day paaya...😡

I love the way U portrayed the Casual Conversation between Girls...👏

Mera khayal hay Mujhy Casual conversation Apni Stories mein daalny kay liyey tum say 2/3 Classes leeni parein gi...😃😃😃

the Starting was Fabulous👏👏👏... feels TASHA Sleepy Voice⭐️, KAJAL excited tone when exchanging about that SLIGH FORT...⭐️

then the Meeting which started little Late due to WINNIE THE POOH Late Entry...😆

then ASHA MAAM entry was really Dhansoo👏👏👏... the way She pointed out Girls Gang Mistakes and Errors and then Involved Her Sharp Mind in Planning is Really Fabulous...⭐️⭐️

Some how I m not Satisfied with the whole FORT scene yaar...

Next time try to stretch the Event😊😊... wesay I love ASHA MAAM Bullet Shot...😈

BTW Baccha, I dunt think that ASHA MAAM took that decision rather Arrest Him...

The Maniac Guy did not tell why He was doing that, how did he smuggles and all...😕😕

at Initial level U also put some Police Work out too...😊😊😊

The Best Part... NO Mans allowed in UR Story except DCP...😉😉😉

ye kya baat hui...😆

Fabulous... Keep it Up...👏

thank u soo much GD
i have been really clumsy this time yaar, everyone has told me about that fort part, wait i will edit the story
i am glad u liked everything else
actually was feeling very lazy towards the end
and
NO MEN EXCEPT THE DCP BECAUSE I WANT TO DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT
EVERYONE WRITE STORIES MAINLY ON THE DUO AND ACP
SO THE GALS ARE COMPLETLY DIFFERENT
AND MAYBE THEIR IMPORTANCE MIGHT INCREASE😊

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

thank u soo much GD
i have been really clumsy this time yaar, everyone has told me about that fort part, wait i will edit the story
i am glad u liked everything else
actually was feeling very lazy towards the end
and
NO MEN EXCEPT THE DCP BECAUSE I WANT TO DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT
EVERYONE WRITE STORIES MAINLY ON THE DUO AND ACP
SO THE GALS ARE COMPLETLY DIFFERENT
AND MAYBE THEIR IMPORTANCE MIGHT INCREASE😊

hi purvi😊
gud dat u made a single thread 4 all ur stories,did u read my feedback in ur last thread😊

Originally posted by: rosepink.

hi purvi😊
gud dat u made a single thread 4 all ur stories,did u read my feedback in ur last thread😊

yup i sure did thanks
and i have excluded my first story in this thread😊
btw call me poo or puru

bt mjhe tumhe purvi bulana acha lagta h,chalo koi dusra naam sochti hu😉
btw kb aa rhi h tmhari new story, i m eagrly waitng

Originally posted by: rosepink.

bt mjhe tumhe purvi bulana acha lagta h,chalo koi dusra naam sochti hu😉
btw kb aa rhi h tmhari new story, i m eagrly waitng

jo bulana hai aap mujhe bula sakte ho di
meri new story ko abhi bahut time hai, koi story sujh hi nahi raha hai
btw i edited my girls cid team 4 ka scene 3 pleaseee read it😊

fantastic purvi👏
fabulous..d editd part ws wel xplanatory nd well written,only a small i feel cops nt alowd 2 shoot ny1 dirctly in d heart
i mean they cn shoot in arms or legs below knees,
rest evrythng was fab..chalo nxt tym dhyan rkhna
gud job👏
i must say u r a great writer..👍🏼

nd ya take ur own time for nothr story,v readers cn wait for long 4 sch a fab. writer😊