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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: meerubzara

superb
very well written
sorry like button is not working



thanks di😊
lol the like button is no big deal chill!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb stories...!!!

loved them...!!!



thank you so much dii!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
the number of crimes against women are drastically increasing. So to them i have written this little poem

POEM FOR ALL WOMEN


when will all this come to an end
when will we get a world where women can live in peace
talk to men with ease
a world where they will never be deceived

when will this come to an end
that India is progressing
how long can we pretend

neither in homes nor on streets
can Indian women live in peace
they are unsafe everywhere
and nobody seems to care

being a girl I can feel
the difficulties that these women feel
a whole life ahead
destroyed within a second

they are humans blood and flesh
with feelings just like men
unfortunately after such incidents
they can't start their life again fresh

everyday I pray
for a new world
where all women happily will say
"I am proud to be here today"

but never will this be possible
not until we will be responsible
to understand the pain of women and give them space
who are considered equal to men


give them respect
let them live
because one little incident
and they will repent
"o why am I woman?"

Neither today nor tomorrow
nor ever
until we give them respect
with fear they will shiver
whenever they are alone

rivers of Ganga, Yamuna all are considered feminine
so is mother earth and this country of mine
but yet we forget to respect
those who give us the wonderful gift of life

- Srishti Singh (poorvisinghcd)😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Aaha.. 😃
very nice..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: cutie006

Hi,😛 our youngest writer poo😊

Gud job 👏
i really enjoyed ur all stories.
well written & interesting
waiting 4 ur next story😉


hmm.. true..
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
very true nd clearly described poem..
its not an INDIAN woman's plight bt in general all women's plight..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
So true poo 😊
thanks and keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
superb poem...!!!👏👏
loved it...!!
very well written and very true...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
👏
👏
very very very nice concept
and very well written dear puru
its realy a great impt matter wich is of great relevance in todays time...
but obiviously u have done awesome work👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
thank you to all my didi's
Misha di(for commenting in both the poem thread as well as here)😛, Padma di, rosepink di, lil squirrel di , devil diva di, and sorry if i am forgetting anyone
i just want to give this message to all my sisters around the globe "take care and be brave in such situations, we are all with you"😊
and to my brothers "we should not discriminate between girls and boys. If u are a man who respects women then only you are a true man."😊
we should respect everyone 😊

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