ASHA in danger!!!!!(new story @page 34) - Page 2

CONGRATS POO...for this THREAD and on becoming a SENIOR MEMBER...!!

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

Lovely Poorvi...congrats on the thread. 😃

POORVI THANKING SHREYA (DI)😛

FROM ALL HER HEART, THANK U DII😳

Originally posted by: neha_dna

CONGRATS POO...for this THREAD and on becoming a SENIOR MEMBER...!!

👏😊

THANK U SOOO
MUCH NEHA DI🤗

congrats poo for becoming a senior member😛

Originally posted by: neerkhan88

congrats poo for becoming a senior member😛

Thank u sooo much aapi
Aap ka hi aashirvad tha mere saath bas isliye itni aage badh gaye
😃 😳

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

Thank u sooo much aapi
Aap ka hi aashirvad tha mere saath bas isliye itni aage badh gaye
😃 😳

Originally posted by: neerkhan88

aap yani meri aapi itne sweet ho to mein to sweet hungi naa
Rite didi

awww u r really sweet meri jaan🤗

aapi agar aap otne sweet ho to mein bhi to sweet hungi naa after all aapki sis hun
Btw did u c d pics i posted in poo disscussion corner 😳

Hey Poorvi 😉 ( Hope I can call you so)

I read your THE HAUNTED FORT story

You have done a

I just want to tell you that please don't post stories in a hurry without checking yaar because I felt lot of mistakes in typing
Want to also tell you dear don't use light bright colour for text it hurts the eyes to read yaar.

For the story it was nice... Woh Winnie the pooh idea
tumhein kaha seh mila mujhey pata hain 😛
I loved villain calling Bachaa 😆
I know even about that idea too 😛

I am confused ki waha 323 log mare theh ki 32? 😕
tumney alag number dia hain

The story plot was quite interesting to the middle
I wish it was more long
just to hold it a suspense 😉

If possible please increase font size

ya phir keep some space yaar

padhney mein kaafi takleef huveeh

Just want to tell you :


for the next coming stories 😃👍🏼
Thumbs up for ur story + best of luck 😛

Originally posted by: DreamyDeepz28

Hey Poorvi 😉 ( Hope I can call you so)

I read your THE HAUNTED FORT story

You have done a

It was so interesting yaar 😃

I loved the whole concept 👏

I just want to tell you that please don't post stories in a hurry without checking yaar because I felt lot of mistakes in typing
Want to also tell you dear don't use light bright colour for text it hurts the eyes to read yaar.

For the story it was nice... Woh Winnie the pooh idea
tumhein kaha seh mila mujhey pata hain 😛
I loved villain calling Bachaa 😆
I know even about that idea too 😛

I am confused ki waha 323 log mare theh ki 32? 😕
tumney alag number dia hain

The story plot was quite interesting to the middle
I wish it was more long
just to hold it a suspense 😉

If possible please increase font size

ya phir keep some space yaar

padhney mein kaafi takleef huveeh

Just want to tell you :


for the next coming stories 😃👍🏼
Thumbs up for ur story + best of luck 😛

aww di soo sweet

call me whtever u like i.e poo, puru, poorvi, srishti srish, pooo or whetever yaar, lol
hmmm u are rite yaar, i did make many mistakes, i corrected a few of them, but then i don't know i was struck by laziness, sorry di i will immediatly edit it and make the corrections, hope u liked my other threee stories as well

winnie the pooh n bachaa wala idea mujhe kahan se mila sab log jante hai😳
I wish GD reads the story i want to see what she has to say after reading that lol😉
the bright colour thing even vis di told me
i used a little less brighter colours but if it is still hurting the eyes i will not use the colours, i just use the colours as it attracts peoples attention to it, but if it is hurting the eyes i won't

and i will make the necessary changes n yes everyone told me to write longer stories with more suspense and i will definatly do that for my 5 story pakka

n yes i will definatly increase the font as well as the space

i apologise for those mistakes

btw di what u posted was ur honest opinion thank u sooo much for dat, many people don't do that, one of them later told me that they feel ki i will get upset or angry so one thing i want to clear ki i will not at all get upset yaar, instead i want to know about mistakes so that i don't repeat them again

thanks soo much deepz di n i just love those cute animations yaar, sirf ek winnie the pooh missing he😆
just kidding thanks again di n i hope u read m next story as well

and i promise it will be more better😊

congrax senior member poo.. 👏 for award and this THREAD...
Ur stories are awoesome...👏
sorry I m late here