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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Nice... Paddy ka daughter...😆

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

THIS THREAD OPEN FOR REVIEWS NOW. TWO MORE STORIES ON THEIR WAY.

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Okay so my reviews for Story 1 and 2 are here. I read them while on the plane, but now that I read the reviews that have been posted about them here, I don't think I have much more to add than what has been said, so I'll just add in a few of my own praises. 😆

Story 1: I loved how you wrote the story. Awesome work! 👏

Story 2: Go ahead and publish a book, I'll be the first one to buy it. 😳 👏

Edited by Shreya_luvs - 12 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I read Story 1 yesterday night...it is good...after watching that promo it makes me smile...😃

Peheli part is good...LION peheli is really good though i saw it in one old bollywood movie still i liked it...i like how u used Freddy sir in your story 👍🏼 duo is fab as always & i just want this duo in the coming grahan series 😳 i really thought that Shriya is actually...(i m not disclosing as it will finish the suspense)...really great !!! and i love the ending 😆😆 bechare Freddy sir !!! 😆

overall i enjoyed it !!! 👏😃

Edited by debasree04 - 12 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I read story no 2 first, so reviewing it.

I hope this writer some day writes a book...or maybe gets a chance to write a full feldged series story for FW...we will have some logical thrillers.

I liked how ACP's 'daughter' was explained. Thanks for not doing any emotional OTT drama. 😊 i know this writer won't do it anyway.

While reading it I felt like I was watching an action filled thriller movie on screen...I could see that car chase scene where ACP and Gayatri drive away right before my eyes. If we could see this with Satam sir on screen, it'll be fantastic.

The writer has done some research for this...those codes, the Arabic words...great job. 👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Story 2: Ufff what I say abt this masterpiece⭐️👏, although we all knew the Writer and when this Writer any piece of work coming on our way, right now its Diffucult to give this Writer Work any Big Takker... 😆

I like all the Information regarding Aircfart DW-395👏, then that Demon Mew👏, then the Poem with MAKHAR and AYESHA👏, the Explination of AHK👏... the whole Stuff...👏

love General Demain character😳😳😳 and to be Honest what a Classical portray of ACP Sir character🤗, the Trail, the Team efforts, ABHIJEET Sir confrontation with Gen to some extent😉... DAYA Sir Calm tone😳... FREDDY Sir Harry Porter stuff😊... I dunt know what to say as I really wanted to watch it on Screen👏... the Dialogues are remarkable👏... The car Chase and the Hijacker Conversation was fabulous...👏

I really want that FW hired U in their Creative team as early and at any Cost...⭐️

BTW, the Pradyuman daughter Theme was little Less😊 either the Lost Character bring back was Ok😊... but all an all, I really want Ur master piece on screen and U inthe Creative Team of any Classical Production House either its FW... 👏

Story 4: now I also Knew this Writer too😆, as I liked the Start👏👏, then the Investigation started, that NH8 stuff, the Hotel, the basement, the Daughter revealing👏👏👏, without any strong motive why ABHIJEET Sir Shak abt the Guy and the Girl is quite Weird😕😕, but somehow Story gripped out as ABHIJEET Sir did so many small errors😉😉, the if He has some Shak on ACP Sir daughter, but the way He investigate about it was quite ODD😔, the whole Smuggling case was there😊😊, the Pradyuman daughter Theme was sidelined, who was the GHAR KA BHEDI was also not revealed till the End😆😆😆... ACP Sir confront to ABHIJEET Sir about the Daughter issue was Nice👏👏... the Best thing was just when ACP Sir always suggest ABHIJEET Sir for taking some Rest... Why...🤣🤣🤣

I know my FB Hurt someone or some readers too, but main pehlay say Ijazat lay chuka hun tou NO CHINTA for Me... 😈

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Ab isme chupana kya? Story no 4 is mine...and I was very very very angry with Abhijeet when I started the story. I started it the week after Abhijeet ki Deewani. 🤣

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

GD, you want justification for Pradyuman's daughter??? Please visit funny stories thread in a couple of days.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: visrom
GD, you want justification for Pradyuman's daughter??? Please visit funny stories thread in a couple of days.

arry DII, mujhy Justification nahi chahyey, I said kay wahan Municipal Cooperation mein baray Bhai ka attitude buht odd tha, as its a Sensitive Issue tou un ko Bhai kay sath mil kr isy thora Silently Deal karna tha... honestly the Suggestion of Rest totally Hilarious and after reading that... main buht bus hansta hee raha...🤣🤣🤣

BTW, I'll definitley visit Funny Stories Thread in coming days regularly... najany aap ka Shahkaar kub aa jayey...😉

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

My reviews ! 😊

Story 1 : Good story. Liked how Freddy sir got a lot of importance throughout… And also how you avoided the rest of the team …! The pahelis were nice….its always interesting to read such stories. Specially, ACP's sms clues were very nice. The casual talks and jokes during the case could have been avoided, because they knew their ACP was in danger and in such a situation they wont be cracking jokes I believe. Duo behaved very much like them, it was good to see that… The concept of bomb in wrist watch is a bit weird… I mean you don't expect a very high intensity bomb as small as that, may be. Overall, it was good and entertaining... 😊Will expect more stories from you !

Story 4 : Its very much evident that AKD had a severe impact on you😆 ! lol… Nevertheless, Abhijeet's behaviour was not very unusual. We all know he does have a habit of taking up things in his own hands. I liked how you described Daya's concern for Abhijeet throughout. Yes the entry of media and DCP and all made it a little OTT…but then could not have helped it I guess. But yeah, I didn't want ACP to taunt Abhijeet about Roshni at the end… Chalo koi nahi..Mahabaleshwar waali baat ne khush kar diya J As always a sensible story from one of the best writers of IF…👏

Will add more when I read the other two... 😊

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