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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

My reviews : Story 1 i already gave...

Story 3 :
I know the writer very well 😛 i faced lots of problems to understand the words
overall concept is not very bad but u can write it in different way then it can be more good...specially i dnt like the false engagement...anyway good attempt 😊

Story 4 :
OMG !! @vis u wrote it 😲 i cant match this Abhijeet at all & i was thinking who is the writer 😆 kya yaar !!! the concept was so good but AKD ne kya kar diya 😆

Edited by debasree04 - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Story 1: as I knew that its Writer First attempt, really a Brave Step👏👏... Very Nice One😳😳, the Riddles are Good and the Phone Clue was Excellent👏👏👏, FREDDIE Sir Inclusion was Awesome👍🏼, Somehow Story little Lengthy and the Theme was Sidlined as well😊, but I love to Read, the Watch Bomb was... chalo baccha chalay ga😆😆... Very Good Attempt...👏👏👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Story no 3:

good amount of research has gone into this. 👏

You have properly justified the ACP's daughter theme. but was the shaadi track with Daya necessary? 😆

If the dna report did match and ACP knew that he had no daughter, then wouldn't he have done a second check??? even for medical issues, people go for second opinion...then why didn't ACP??? 😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: debasree04
My reviews : Story 1 i already gave...

Story 3 :
I know the writer very well 😛 i faced lots of problems to understand the words
overall concept is not very bad but u can write it in different way then it can be more good...specially i dnt like the false engagement...anyway good attempt 😊

Sorry abt the False Engagement and i dunt understand, what WORDS creating problem for you in Understanding😕... wesay I m Sorry again...

Originally posted by: visrom
Story no 3:

good amount of research has gone into this. 👏

You have properly justified the ACP's daughter theme. but was the shaadi track with Daya necessary? 😆

If the dna report did match and ACP knew that he had no daughter, then wouldn't he have done a second check??? even for medical issues, people go for second opinion...then why didn't ACP??? 😛

DII, darasal koi aur Idea nahi tha, FW inspiration😆.. its just a Trap, ACP Sir might be thought that the Girl is young so cant handle the sudden Jhatka...😉

abt Second Opinion, ACP Sir did not believe on those reports which the Daughter brought with Her, He Scanned all on Fresh bases not only Re Reviewed on that Reports and CID Forensic reports are there so who thought about Second Opinion...😊

BTW Thank you so much... really... Thank You😃😃

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Sorry abt the False Engagement and i dunt understand, what WORDS creating problem for you in Understanding😕... wesay I m Sorry again...

C'mon yaar dnt say sorry all time...its just my view & i m not at all expert so dnt take it personally...

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Story 2 :

I really don't know how to praise you...my god...whenever i read your story i find it is outstanding...you are awesome writer...I wish FW has the writer like You...😉
what a story !!! i just love it...i wish if it can air on TV...overall concept is just too good...Farukh story is superb...actually everything in it is just mind blowing...⭐️👏
Keep writing 👍🏼

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I read story 1 & 2, being a new member i could not figure out the writer..
Story 1-
very nice story with suspence maintained til the end,like the twist in the end,paheli idea ws great,like the importance gvn to freddy along with duo,gud job..👏..
story 2-
story ws lengthy but i like the way every aspect was related,ACP sir's charcter ws at its best,very nice of hm,i like the way he handled that girl..duo and freddy as usual rocked..u hav a gr8 talent,kep writng..👏

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

hey just finished readng story 3 & 4
story 3-Wondrful story with proper balnce of suspnse, bonding and emotions, i like the chemstry bw acp and priya, acp and salunkhe..wow daya as a groom for priya. the story completely revolvd around acp sir's daughter, so fully justified the topic..some dialogues were really nice nd i loved the bitter social fact that was highlighted..hats off to the writer..gr8 job, keep writng 👏 👏 👏

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

story 3-one more thng the writer really researchd wel for medical topics, me being a science studnt the reference in the end ws vry informative..so thank u..😊 liked the scene whr abhi sir kept gun on priyas head nd the dialogue- soch lo sharp shooter hu was wow 😳
story 4-
again a very nice and intrstng story, purvi ws gvn importance acha laga 😊, abhi sir ka bhaviour thoda rash tha, but really loved the investgatn of our sharp shooter, over all gr8 story of our dear trio 👏 👏 👏