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My reviews: Will add as and when I read them
No 6: The theme is to have serial killing + target Abhijeet, so there's nothing the writer can do about it. It's difficult to think of something other than the usual badla or psycho killer. This one was a psycho killer... I wish the writer had tried something else.
Some part was a bit unclear...like Abhijeet was tied down and used his tongue 😕 and all of a sudden CID team was there...it was a bit vague.
Otherwise the story stuck to the plot. Nice attempt. 👏
(One one place the writer has written Abhijeet 'roaring'...I was trying to imagine him 'roaring' 🤣)
No 5; This one has clubbed both plots...
Never mind...not cutting marks for this. The idea behind the killing, the unique gun...the 'murder' website...it was all very well done.👏 Only thing is...just 50000 for a murder? 😕 Jaan ki keemat itni kam? or did they have to make multiple donations of 50K each?
I loved this story...very clear, except that MS word had caused some typos like introducing some unwanted characters in some places. Maybe you should save in doc format and not docx.
The plot was very clear in the writer's mind. The illustrations were very good...nice insvetigation, nice explanation of 'EAGLE'. Nice twists added like Abhijeet's senior being killed and telling Abhijeet about the EAGLE.
The ending was good too...turned into plot 2. Nice innovative way of murdering using a mobile phone...wonder what will happen if you turn into a criminal. 😈
No 7: Very similar to plot 5...the drawings...the internet based crime, even the name - Manoj is common in 5 and 7..😆
Tried something other than badla or psycho...decent attempt.👍🏼
No 2: Very nice story...one thing about this writer is that it's very very clear...requires less effort from our side to understand...and this is a very useful skill you have...I am sure your exam sheets will also present very less confusion to the evaluator. 😉
Abhijeet in jail in disguise...it reminded me a bit of Demonstar's previous contest story. 😛 Nice tapori dialogues in the jail...😆 Just one thing...how did Jitu trust Abhijeet - who was a total stranger to him..so easily and tell him about his escape plans??🤔 There should have been some strong reasons to trust Abhijeet.
Then the ending happened too fast. 😆...there should have been more twists and turns and confusions.. 😆 Maybe I was having Demonstar's previous story in mind therefore was expecting a lot to happen after Abhijeet escaped from the jail. 😉
Overall nice interesting story...reading a story from this writer after a long time. 😉
Will read the others and comment soon.
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