Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#861

cute one! very nice to read!😊🤗

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yashi

@.YaJuShI.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

srry dada n neeme di for being late i read it 2 days before bt cz of my sadu net i was unable to give feedback 😡

it was mind blowing full of emotion suspense n little bit confusions 😆

grt job hats off to u both 👏

@dada- ab hats to milne se rahi sablog utha liye un hats ko 😆😉

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aastha94

@aastha94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

sorry for the late feedback, i have been busy with studies. But what to say this is just mindblowing 👏, the way you portrayed each relationship was amazing. :')

I just wanted to say one thing; i think it would have been better if you kept the main storyline that daya sir was taking drugs himself right till the end of the story. it would have made the last chapter flow better; in my opinion. But like i say this is only my idea, i do not mean to hurt or upset anybody.

Hope you read more stories from you both x

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Tami_

@Tami_

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

cool nice work love it

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: aastha94
sorry for the late feedback, i have been busy with studies. But what to say this is just mindblowing 👏, the way you portrayed each relationship was amazing. :')
I just wanted to say one thing; i think it would have been better if you kept the main storyline that daya sir was taking drugs himself right till the end of the story. it would have made the last chapter flow better; in my opinion. But like i say this is only my idea, i do not mean to hurt or upset anybody.

Hope you read more stories from you both x

Thanks for The Honest Feedback😃.. Dear that was the Orignall Plot... That Daya taking Drugs by himself after that Kidnapping and Overdose of drugs during that time... But members can be Hurt with this..thats Y we changed the Orignall Plot... Which really hurts me actully and i lose the Interested from the story as well..And Completed it somehow..

And ALL Thanks for the Feed back and Liking Our Work..😊

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Haleemah

@hal96

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Love da story x i always love ur stories x made my day x 😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: neeme

Thanks for The Honest Feedback😃.. Dear that was the Orignall Plot... That Daya taking Drugs by himself after that Kidnapping and Overdose of drugs during that time... But members can be Hurt with this..thats Y we changed the Orignall Plot... Which really hurts me actully and i lose the Interested from the story as well..And Completed it somehow..

AASTHA due to My Scare and confusion, the Original Plot of NEEME DII was messed up by Me and She backed off from that... I m saying Sorry to Her and U all Readers too... 😭

I think now I lost my Confidence🤢... I m Sorry... 😭😭

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neeme

@neeme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: gadhadada

AASTHA due to My Scare and confusion, the Original Plot of NEEME DII was messed up by Me and She backed off from that... I m saying Sorry to Her and U all Readers too... 😭

I think now I lost my Confidence🤢... I m Sorry... 😭😭

It was My decesion too in the end.. And don't say Sorry anymore Plz...😡😡 Stop saying this..before i will stop working with u...😡

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: neeme
It was My decesion too in the end.. And don't say Sorry anymore Plz...😡😡 Stop saying this..before i will stop working with u...😡

haan karwana Paisay day ker kaam...😉😉😉