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Posted: 12 years ago
DADA n Neeme Di
both of you guy's out standing 👏👏
very emotional story 😭
me bohot kuch kehna chahti hu but mere pas word hi nahi he🤔
I love you guy's🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

@READERS... its a Small Clearification... the Symptoms of HEROIN in Excessive amounts rests for 3/4 days and the symptoms of METHAMPHETAMINE rest in body for 3/5 days so I mixed both days and then do this... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowwieee... It was really a gud one...infact brilliantly informative
Thanks Dada n neeme...luv u bth n waitng for ur nxt venture... 😉
Edited by maggi.masala - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey DADA and Neemi


Very Nice Idea... A different plot... social awareness and Most Important... DUO relation... ACP's fatherly touch... One singing special movement shared by TRIO...
When i read only last part got confused in the end... so once again read the whole story...

The Story which gives so many tears once again... some of Khushi and Some of Gum...

Now come to story...

Abhijeet as a short tempered persona and Cop was right at his point... also Daya does not have any proof that he is taking medicine not drugs... so he believe Daya is taking Drugs... but then he did all for goodness of Daya... help him to return in normal life... Thats just amazing... you both portray all emotions of Abhijeet Very well... The gr8 Friendship bond...

ACP sir Very nice side of ACP sir as a father who is there for his both sons at same time... he pampered Daya and give support to Abhijeet... He attend Daya as per situation some times by showing anger... some times care and some times entering in to fun zone... very nice one

Daya... Frankly speaking after reading story I did not feel that what ever may be the plot... that Daya taking drugs by himself or He is taking treatment secretly does not make much difference as till end story Impact will not change which push you to believe that Daya is taking drugs... In the end when clarification come... its sooth my heart that Daya my idol did not do any thing wrong...
The tough part in story is to portray Daya's behavior in rehab center.. and you both done it fably and easily... Hats off to you guys...👏👏👏

I agree that CID cop as a human being can be addicted of drugs too but to be addicted or not is depends upon the person his will power... If a person hates one thing very much... there are 99% chances that he never be addicted to that thing... bu of course 1% chance is always there...
Others characters are good as well...

Ufff kafi bada likh diya... chalo story se toh chota hi hai...😆

finally thank you for sharing this kind of different stories 🤗
Edited by Forfriend - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luved da storg x da emotion love n care by da team members and support xit made me very emotional x fank u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Crystalx

Neeme and GD - I am speechless. Your stories are getting better and better each time you both write and I will just give one word for this story which is Awe-Inspiring as this was the best part in your story. I was overwhelming with emotion. Finally you made Daya get better and i just truly love the last scene, I am totally touched by your story because you added the drug effect in it which i already said it can effect anyone even a CID officer. I had a smile on my face because you two ended this story at the prefect point which no one else can do and i got my overdose of abhijeet and daya's friendship from you which was incredible. now i wont mind that FW won't show duo this friday. hats off to you the emotional part is heart touching as always and investigation part was impressive. GD and Neeme i totally respect you for this. I just love all your stories and i am trying to read every single story from the beginning of this thread. What can i say about your friendship, you both worked two hard on this story and i can totally see that. GD don't blame yourself that you didn't like the topic of this story because it was a fantastic story and a wonderful topic that you both chose, Us readers got to learn so much from it. Write a new story please i am addicted to your stories.

What a Long and well detailed Review.. Thanks Alot for so much praise for me and GD..🤗 i m Very much Thankfull and afcrods GD is at 7 Sky 😳😆.. We both was not satisfied bcz we changed the PLOT at the last moment and According to that Changed so many things at Different points in the story.but yah Hardwork is there.. And More of GD hardwork not mine.. Thanks so much for liking all the Parts..and Liking the concept.and Our EMOTIONAl scenes Work. and abt ur addiction.. Oh uss ka Treatment karana para ga😳😆😆
And GD means was not that she did not like the TOPIC of this story.. Asa hota tu yah Story b na hoti..her meanings was that I m not satisified with her work this time as she thinks..and thats y she is not happy ... But the Truth is i was not happy bcz We changed the real PLOT.. i have No problem with GD's work..
@Deep, Shreya. Max,Maggie and hal96 THANKS SO MUCH GUYS🤗
Edited by neeme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RiDzDAYAlover

WONDERFUL STORY!!! just speechless.. it was perfect package of emotions,bonding, DUO friendship n what not!! juss too good !!!! story reminds me of song, "APNA KOI KAISABHI HO APNA HAI WO DUJA NAHI..." luv u DUO... :'''') actually drug addicts in our country are treated lyk aliens!! even though they want to have treatment none encourage them.. none in their own family too cares for them.. its truly VERY sad!! :( n its so damn sweeet of ABHIJEET ACP SIR N WHOLE TEAM INCLUDING RAHUL... they taught the real concept of relation.. actually.. CID TEAM ROCKKKZZ ALWAYZ AND FOREVER!!! Really DAYA is very lucky!! 😊 @GD n NEEME you both are just awesome!! mindblowing story..!! each and every emotion is exiplained so damn awesomely...!! YOU GUYZ JUST ROCKKKZZ!!!! i just can't explain how much i love your stories!!

I simply Love Ur Response😳.. Thank u so much for wonderfull Tone and Liking our work🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Hey DADA and Neemi



Very Nice Idea... A different plot... social awareness and Most Important... DUO relation... ACP's fatherly touch... One singing special movement shared by TRIO...
When i read only last part got confused in the end... so once again read the whole story...

The Story which gives so many tears once again... some of Khushi and Some of Gum...

Now come to story...

Abhijeet as a short tempered persona and Cop was right at his point... also Daya does not have any proof that he is taking medicine not drugs... so he believe Daya is taking Drugs... but then he did all for goodness of Daya... help him to return in normal life... Thats just amazing... you both portray all emotions of Abhijeet Very well... The gr8 Friendship bond...

ACP sir Very nice side of ACP sir as a father who is there for his both sons at same time... he pampered Daya and give support to Abhijeet... He attend Daya as per situation some times by showing anger... some times care and some times entering in to fun zone... very nice one

Daya... Frankly speaking after reading story I did not feel that what ever may be the plot... that Daya taking drugs by himself or He is taking treatment secretly does not make much difference as till end story Impact will not change which push you to believe that Daya is taking drugs... In the end when clarification come... its sooth my heart that Daya my idol did not do any thing wrong...
The tough part in story is to portray Daya's behavior in rehab center.. and you both done it fably and easily... Hats off to you guys...👏👏👏

I agree that CID cop as a human being can be addicted of drugs too but to be addicted or not is depends upon the person his will power... If a person hates one thing very much... there are 99% chances that he never be addicted to that thing... bu of course 1% chance is always there...
Others characters are good as well...

Ufff kafi bada likh diya... chalo story se toh chota hi hai...😆

finally thank you for sharing this kind of different stories 🤗

Thanks So much For the Wonderfull Response..🤗 The Points u highlighted again.. Now i m really feeling we are sucessfull to show the actuall Duo frendship and ACP sir Fatherly Touch😳😳 That was the main thing we want to cover.. Abhijeet the COP (touch behaviour) and Abhijeet a Frend (Caring behaviour) and same for ACP sir (scold behaviour) and Fatherly touch (concern behaviour) at the same time... and somtimes We showed other team members and frends Behaviour too.Basically we want to show How FRIENDS & FAMILY Members should behave with the patient.and Here CID team is Daya's family and Friends.
We Changed the PLOT..but We really not changed the Drug addictor behaviour, symptoms, treatment, mentally or Physicall behaviour at all.. that is all true abt any Drug Addictor... that was the need of the PLOT and that is same.. Thank you Once again for liking our work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sooorrryyy for late feedback ...Neeme and GD - I am speechless... what a story once again ... its fabulous ... the way u portray duo emotions friendship ... its just awesome ... i loved it very much ... plot was brilliant ... it gives a lot of awareness ... n GD u wrote it very very brilliantly ... hats off to both of u ... n i wish u come up with an other great story soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahrukh

so sooorrryyy for late feedback ...Neeme and GD - I am speechless... what a story once again ... its fabulous ... the way u portray duo emotions friendship ... its just awesome ... i loved it very much ... plot was brilliant ... it gives a lot of awareness ... n GD u wrote it very very brilliantly ... hats off to both of u ... n i wish u come up with an other great story soon...😃

Thank You So much Dear 😃

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