Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Ika

@-De.De-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Just read the both parts of your recent story.. it's really good and sad. Wow, Daya ko phansi, agar woh sach mein phansi char gaya na toh phir dekha... 🥺 But, really good story overall,👏👏 do continue, will wait for the next part.😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

omg dada
wt is dis🥺
daya sir ko fansi ka order suna dia😭
cant imagine
jaldi next part post kro..bhut suspence bhra hua hai😲
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ABHIJEET (interrupts in complete rash): halaat… (exit with painful tone) DAYA kya Main ye samjhun kay Teri Zindagi mein Meri jagah koi Aur lay chukka hay jo Tujhy itna Pyara hay kay Tu Apni Jaan bhi Us kay liyey dao per lagany ko tayyar hay…!!!

😭🥺

complete asap😡

Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

@ GD :

commenting on the 27th august update, the entire court scene has been very well done 👏👏, now waiting to see KD's entry in the next update, so update soon.😊

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mahrukh

@mahrukh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Woow woow woow.. its a great part... awsome.. suspense is well maintained.. n the whole court scene was great.. especially those abhijeet line.. "daya kia main yeh samjhun k teri zindage mai meri jaga Koi aur lay chuka hai jo tjhy itna piyara hai k tu apni jan bi Us k liye dao pay lagany ko tiyar hai..." its the most awsome lines... Hats off to u... Waiting egarly for next part..

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: neeme
VIS part 1 is on page 72 ..

@GD, Till then u r updating this story parts..Post previous part Link or Page number first in ur post and then continue Next part..it well be helpfull for those members who missed previous part...

so sorry VIS DII... for Late Reply, My Net is not Working Properly

the First chapter of this Story MASTER SHORT..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/cid/2871821/silent-promise-concluding-part-pg-147?pn=72

the Second Chapter of this story MASTER SHORT...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/cid/2871821/silent-promise-concluding-part-pg-147?pn=76

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: Maxxx
Very very emotional story 😭
Bhai ko Fhansi 😲
Awsome story DADA... you are the best 👍🏼

BHAI ko Phansiii aur DP per AAMIR KHAN...😉

BUHT NAINSAAFI HAY... ray...😆😆

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587298

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Omg! What is this! This is terribly shocking!😲
Daya sir ko phansi😲 isse bura aur kya ho sakta hai i mean for daya sir and team😭 feeling very vad for trio specially for daya sir😭
Its a wonderful story...write next part soon and save Daya sir from phansi

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

sorry 4 late lateefi😆😆
amaging story dada ⭐️
aisa lga jaise main THEATER main baithu hu aur 3 hour ki SUSPENCE movie dekh rhi hu😃👏⭐️⭐️
hats off u👍🏼
emotions commedy suspence pains smiles everything is perfect😳
adalat scene to aise lge jasie KD pathak ki real adalt chal rhi ho😛
shudh hindi ne thora sa dimag ka halwa kia😆
end is mindblowing⭐️
aur tumari achi kismat tum bach gyi😈
agar daya sir ki fansi cancel nhi hoti to tum pakka HANG ho jati😡😆
thaku dada🤗
👏👏

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SavageMinion

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 13 years ago

#580

GD that was lovely. I could almost see everything play out in front of my eyes! Like truly!!! I loved how you proved Daya sir innocent. Well written. 👏