Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Mehak

@maggi.masala

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Wow... It was very much engaging...it had evrythng suspense, thrill, action, emotion, comedy, tragedy...in short a very gud one...i rate 2nd part the best...thanx a lottt Dada

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Parul

@..Candy..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

What a story Dada...!!!!
A perfect mixture of Emotions,investigation,comedy,thril,action n what not..!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
The emotional scenes were as usual heart touching❤️❤️
Even the conversation b/w duo in Jail made me cry😭😭
And KD's hindi made me totally 😕😕
Itni hindi toh Ramayan me bhi nhi suni..😆😆

but one confusion..u refered "Vaster" to clothes na??
as far as i know..its VASTRA..😕😕

nyway..Story ws Awesome...!!!
now time for bone breaking😉
🤗🤗🤗

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SRUTHI

@SRUTHI.N

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#583

simply superb ... 👏DADA

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Gwendchotabhoot

@Gwendchotabhoot

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#584

dada bhut achi thi story

aapki sudh hindi padhkar

na bhut maza aaya

story was a treat with

emotions,investigation and comedy

hats of to u

u really rocked

lyk always

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Hey DADA wow very nice...

means just gr8

when I am reading KD part it feels like watching real Addalat...👏👏

Lots of DUO movement as usual make me smile in the end 😊 😉 😳

Daya sir finally proves innocent make me relax 🤗

pata hai Kitani tension thi... kahi aap aapne bhai ko fassi pe na chadhado... 😡 😈

or toh or bad me reentry karwa do Ekata style me... 😆 😉

Thanks for not making it YSPT ⭐️

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Tami_

@Tami_

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Its superb I can imagine everything and Abhi Daya encounter was very teary😭😵

almost am gone to crying

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#587

As a story, it's excellent GD! the duo moments are really very sweet and emotional.👏👏👏 The Adaalat part is also quite impressive.😃 I understand that you worked really hard for the story. very nice GD!👍🏼

Now time for questions:-

1. why did Daya sir take all "ilzaam" upon him? you wrote, that he promised the girl not to reveal her identity. but it's a common principle of law, that in any case of s***al assault, anonymity of the victim must be maintained (case ref. Bodhisattwa Gautam Vs Miss Subhra Chakraborty AIR 1996 SC 922). so, Daya sir can easily reveal the truth, specially when the court punishes him with death sentence.

2. why did KD appealed in Supreme Court? they had to go to the High Court first na?😕

3. a lawyer can summon anyone, whom he thinks is related to the case. and the person is bound by law to attend the Court for the case he/she is summoned. so KD did not need to call her for a false case.

besides these, your story is awesome as always.😃 tonight I m going to have a sound sleep.

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#588

This is a perfect Story 👍🏼 👏

DADA aaj aap bach gaye agar aap Bhai ko fansi pr chada dete to mera or aap ka jhagda ho jata 😈

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#589

very lovely very good story as always DADA...

i just love to see how much efforts you take for each and every story...

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri
GD you just didn't have a shootout between the duo? Awesome yaar!!!! But I'm sad now. Abhijeet sir crying and Daya sir dead?

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri
GD this is awesome. Like really, really, really awesome. The suspense is so good. Please do continue soon. 👏 I can't imagine what the team is going through right now. Phansi to Daya sir!!!! 😲

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri
GD that was lovely. I could almost see everything play out in front of my eyes! Like truly!!! I loved how you proved Daya sir innocent. Well written. 👏

SHERYA I quoted All Ur THREE Feedbacks on all Three Chapters of My Stories😃... I m trying to do Some Hat kay😉, even in This I did much work on ADAALAT part as compered to CID😊, cz ab CID mein itnay LOOPHOLES hotay hain kay Mera bhi ek do chal jata hay...😆

I was expecting Some Critic Points from Ur Side yaar😉... kya yaar hr baar Tareef😳... itni Tareef say pata hay MERAY SEENG aur DUM nay kitna saar Weight putup ker liya hay😆... buht Out of Figure ho raha hun Mian...🤣

chalo Thora Criticism bhi Karo fatafat...😆😆

Thank you so much for Ur Lovely Feedback SHERYA... 🤗🤗🤗