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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Forfriends

HMMM waise Abhijeet shooting at Daya is not which is hard to imagine all thanks to FW...


But please isse YSPT na banana DADA

I am excited to know further...

only can guess that Daya is trying to save someone... may be a girl DEEP or That DOLL... but just a guess...

waiting for next part...


Please update soon

About this part I will just say it make me seat at one place and read it with out even taking off my eyes from lappy screen for a minute...

Gr8 Going Dada... keep rocking



Originally posted by: Forfriends

OMG DADA... I am Freez... can't even imagine...


this part is heart pinching...

currently in stunt situation...

Adalat sceen is very well written...

Please update soon...

I will not able to concentrate any where till Daya sir proves innocent...


🤗


Originally posted by: Forfriends

Hey DADA wow very nice...


means just gr8

when I am reading KD part it feels like watching real Addalat...👏👏

Lots of DUO movement as usual make me smile in the end 😊 😉 😳

Daya sir finally proves innocent make me relax 🤗

pata hai Kitani tension thi... kahi aap aapne bhai ko fassi pe na chadhado... 😡 😈

or toh or bad me reentry karwa do Ekata style me... 😆 😉

Thanks for not making it YSPT ⭐️




FF I also Quoted All Ur Feedbacks on My Whole Story...😳
to be Honest I did not Understand why U think that I hanged BHAI and then He will Back like EK style...😆😉
and the Most Shocking Line of Ur Feedback is this YSPT Stuff...😲😲
I dunt know why You think that might be I'll do it as YSPT😕, U remember the First Chapter na, the Evidences presented by IG and Inspector YASH and then BHAI tension and Silence, all did not give U any Clue about YSPT...😕
my Last Story named PERFECT PLAN was YSPT but there was NO CASE... only an Incident !!!😊
Thank you for UR Lovely Feedback... 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

OMG...!!.!
Whats that????
Inna sara suspence😲😲
N aadhi story😡😡

Jaldi complete kro..warna tension me halat kharab ho jayegi..

anyway its awseome as usual..⭐️⭐️
So true said about Deep😉😆
Bechare mere Daya sir..😭😭
I wish its not a YSPT..😆

Complete it ASAP..



Originally posted by: ..Candy..

What a story Dada...!!!!
A perfect mixture of Emotions,investigation,comedy,thril,action n what not..!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
The emotional scenes were as usual heart touching❤️❤️
Even the conversation b/w duo in Jail made me cry😭😭
And KD's hindi made me totally 😕😕
Itni hindi toh Ramayan me bhi nhi suni..😆😆

but one confusion..u refered "Vaster" to clothes na??
as far as i know..its VASTRA..😕😕

nyway..Story ws Awesome...!!!
now time for bone breaking😉
🤗🤗🤗


Hmmm So PARO...😉
Two Feedbacks... haan..😡
ek kahan gaya???😆
about KD Sudh Hindi creating Confusion in PARO Munna Dimagh...😆😆
about Ur Correction...😊
Thank You Baccha😳
as I only depend on AUDIOBILITY, so Mujhy sunny mein VISTAR hee laga...
but really Thankful that U corrected Me as it was a Big Linguistic Mistake na...🤗
Thank You for UR Lovely Feedbacks...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreela

Kya hai yeh GD?😲 itna suspence mein koi rakhta hai kisiko? agar jaldi se next part post nehi kiya, toh achha nehi hoga!😈

for this part, what can I say yaar! you are awesome as always.👏👏👏 specially the last line, "Now no one can distinguish, it's Daya's blood or Abhijeet's tears", brings tears in my eyes also!😭 loved it!❤️ hope for no YSPT! waiting for the next part. and for now,


and remember-


Yaar why U all think about that YSPT...😕😕
its GD Productions na Not FW Productions...😉😉
Thank you for Ur Lovely Images...😳😳

Originally posted by: shreela

it's heart-breaking GD!😭 plz post the next part ASAP. KD ki entry next part mein hogi kya? is part mein toh defense ko kuch bolne ka mauka hi nehi mila!


kyunkay Hum nay usay Bolny ka Mauqa diya jo Nahi...😆😆


Originally posted by: shreela

As a story, it's excellent GD! the duo moments are really very sweet and emotional.👏👏👏 The Adaalat part is also quite impressive.😃 I understand that you worked really hard for the story. very nice GD!👍🏼


Thank You so much🤗, yes such Hard work...

Now time for questions:-

Sure😉... Sure...😆

1. why did Daya sir take all "ilzaam" upon him? you wrote, that he promised the girl not to reveal her identity. but it's a common principle of law, that in any case of s***al assault, anonymity of the victim must be maintained (case ref. Bodhisattwa Gautam Vs Miss Subhra Chakraborty AIR 1996 SC 922). so, Daya sir can easily reveal the truth, specially when the court punishes him with death sentence.

yaar I just Realize that DAYA sir had this feel/Idea that might be the Girl would be involved in that Drug Part after being Arrested... DAYA Sir did not see her Assault, its Her Statement, He knew about the Shootout and Drug Racket, there is an Confusion in his Mind that might be Police, Media meandring the Girl Presence with DAYA sir in a Wrong Way and after that just to Prove Her as well Himself Innocent is Difficult, He also see DAVID body who was Murdered by the Girl, He knew DAVID, He also thought that at any time the DAVID and His Connection Revealed... basically He just wanted to Hide the Girl and who knows the Girl saying Right or Wrong, if He took the Name of Girl and in Medical the Girl proven completely Wrong, He just Protect the Word Relegious/noble and its the Sake of Country na, U knew How much Issues bore by Him if He only signaled the Family or Girl, atleast at some extent He revealed the Name na, atleast against His Own Team or might be during Trail...!!! 😊

2. why did KD appealed in Supreme Court? they had to go to the High Court first na?😕

Sorry Complete Error... yaar dekha nahi, Ghalti say High Court kay bajayey Supreme Court likh diya...😊

3. a lawyer can summon anyone, whom he thinks is related to the case. and the person is bound by law to attend the Court for the case he/she is summoned. so KD did not need to call her for a false case.

Yes a Lawyer summoned anyone😊, but He also prove that in which Case he summoned to that Witness, I just say that they hide the Case cz after knowing the area and date, might be the Girl creating any problem and also her Family at Her back na till than...😊
besides these, your story is awesome as always.😃 tonight I m going to have a sound sleep.

WOW wat a Sound Sleep😆😃... KD I m so Sorry, just because of My Net Messing, I did not Discuss some of These Law Points with U😭... I wrote this in July but did not read it again...


Thank You KD for such a Critical Lovely Feedback🤗🤗.🤗.. I really need it...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


FF I also Quoted All Ur Feedbacks on My Whole Story...😳
to be Honest I did not Understand why U think that I hanged BHAI and then He will Back like EK style...😆😉
and the Most Shocking Line of Ur Feedback is this YSPT Stuff...😲😲
I dunt know why You think that might be I'll do it as YSPT😕, U remember the First Chapter na, the Evidences presented by IG and Inspector YASH and then BHAI tension and Silence, all did not give U any Clue about YSPT...😕
my Last Story named PERFECT PLAN was YSPT but there was NO CASE... only an Incident !!!😊
Thank you for UR Lovely Feedback... 🤗🤗🤗



Hmmm kya kare DADA yeh FW walo ne na YSPT naam ka daar bitha diya hai man me... 😔

sari achi stories ko YSPT bana ke chodte hai... Bas issi liye...😊

about hangging ur BHAI... U know very well what i am referring this time...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

Dada ji
lgta tera chashma mere hatho hi marega
DEEP ka dimag khiska hua hai kya?
Hehehe
jocking apart
fabulous story dada
m sure party main jin gundo ne DEEP ko tang kia tha
uniki koi KARASTANI hai
bt eagrily waiting 4 opening of ur PITARA
abhi sir ne daya sir pr goli chalai
aisa likhne se pehle mere CHASME enemy ki DONO TANGE kyn nhi toot gyi
dont wory ye shubh kam main jaldi apne hatho se kr dungi
tum bs ftafat story complete kro
cant wait anymore


Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

omg dada
wt is dis🥺
daya sir ko fansi ka order suna dia😭
cant imagine
jaldi next part post kro..bhut suspence bhra hua hai😲
😲

ABHIJEET (interrupts in complete rash): halaat' (exit with painful tone) DAYA kya Main ye samjhun kay Teri Zindagi mein Meri jagah koi Aur lay chukka hay jo Tujhy itna Pyara hay kay Tu Apni Jaan bhi Us kay liyey dao per lagany ko tayyar hay'!!!


😭🥺

complete asap😡


Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

sorry 4 late lateefi😆😆
amaging story dada ⭐️
aisa lga jaise main THEATER main baithu hu aur 3 hour ki SUSPENCE movie dekh rhi hu⭐️
hats off u👍🏼
emotions commedy suspence pains smiles everything is perfect😳
adalat scene to aise lge jasie KD pathak ki real adalt chal rhi ho😛
shudh hindi ne thora sa dimag ka halwa kia😆
end is mindblowing⭐️
aur tumari achi kismat tum bach gyi😈
agar daya sir ki fansi cancel nhi hoti to tum pakka HANG ho jati😡😆
thaku dada🤗
👏👏



Thank You...🤗
Yes if U read the Complete Three Chapters in One Sitting...😉
U feel it as a Movie ran at Theatre...😆
I experience it wen read DEMONSTAR NOVEL...😳
really Thrilling Experience even My Story is Not the Passing of His Masterpiece...😊
chalo Thank You that U feel Relax after getting Back DAYA Sir...😉😆
Thanks a lots for ur Lovely Feedbacks...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gwentlend

dada sorry

i was busy
thats why i couldnit give feed back on the first part

very nyz story
really heart breaking one
plz update next part soon
really eager to read


Originally posted by: gwentlend

dada bhut achi thi story

aapki sudh hindi padhkar
na bhut maza aaya

story was a treat with
emotions,investigation and comedy
hats of to u

u really rocked
lyk always


Ohhh... Lovely Line Baccha😳
Nice U lyk the Prayog of KD's Shudh Hindi...😆😆
Thank You so much🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SRUTHI.N

simply superb ... 👏DADA


Simply Superb Feedback... SRUTHI.N😊
Thank You so much...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maggi.masala

Wow... It was very much engaging...it had evrythng suspense, thrill, action, emotion, comedy, tragedy...in short a very gud one...i rate 2nd part the best...thanx a lottt Dada


MAGZ... yes the way I presented the Suspence😉,... 2Nd Part was the PUnch chapter😳 as the First chapter just build the Story and Last just Wrapped it...😆
Thank You so much GURYA...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tami_

its really intresting plz update soon


Originally posted by: Tami_

Its superb I can imagine everything and Abhi Daya encounter was very teary😭😵

almost am gone to crying


Ohhh Thank You for Ur Precious Tears...😳😊
Thank You so much TAMI for Feedbacks...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maxxx

very emotional story..

every time u did a fabulous job 👏
waiting for including part


Originally posted by: Maxxx

Very very emotional story 😭

Bhai ko Fhansi 😲
Awsome story DADA... you are the best 👍🏼


Originally posted by: Maxxx

This is a perfect Story 👍🏼 👏

DADA aaj aap bach gaye agar aap Bhai ko fansi pr chada dete to mera or aap ka jhagda ho jata 😈


MAXXX... yahan BHAI ko Phansi laga raha hun and U said you are the best 👍🏼...🤣🤣
Jhagra... nahi aisa hona nahi tha, kyunkay agar Main aisa karta tou pehlay hee Baray Bhai kay Hathun Meri Maut ho jati...😉😆
Thank You so much MAXXX😳😳😳

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