Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 55

very emotional story..

OMG...!!.!
Whats that????
Inna sara suspence😲😲
N aadhi story😡😡

Jaldi complete kro..warna tension me halat kharab ho jayegi..

anyway its awseome as usual..⭐️⭐️
So true said about Deep😉😆
Bechare mere Daya sir..😭😭
I wish its not a YSPT..😆

Complete it ASAP..

This story has a different approach than your usual style and I appreciate it. Start was quite appealing as it was something like "Shootout". Loved the party coverage and the way Rahul teased Daya sir.

Duo interaction was outstanding as always. Daya sir's silence added a great suspense and I the part where Acp sir and Abhijeet sir question him, was carried out perfectly. I could imagine them uttering their dialogues and Daya sir standing still.

Shamsher's entry and dialogues were exactly matching him. Loved the end part where Abhijeet sir shed tears staring at Daya sir's blood with blurred vision. Waiting eagerly for the next part and KD's entry.

I'm sure Daya sir is hiding the real culprit behind his silence.

Great story!

The story is 😲😲
But its a nice concept! Great story! Great plot! Interesting dialogues! Keep it up👏

Thanks for the pm GD and for a nailbiting story...I am busy so will read and comment later

Incomplete story?? Not fair GD!

amzng story dada👏👍🏼

Finally finished reading your story GD

GD muj sa logon ka suspense Bardasht nae ho raha 😉🤣

Originally posted by: neeme

GD muj sa logon ka suspense Bardasht nae ho raha 😉🤣