Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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megha verma

@vermamegha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

very nice story but plzzz post next part...

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Kya hai yeh GD?😲 itna suspence mein koi rakhta hai kisiko? agar jaldi se next part post nehi kiya, toh achha nehi hoga!😈

for this part, what can I say yaar! you are awesome as always.👏👏👏 specially the last line, "Now no one can distinguish, it's Daya's blood or Abhijeet's tears", brings tears in my eyes also!😭 loved it!❤️ hope for no YSPT! waiting for the next part. and for now,

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TSTPheonix

@TSTPheonix

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

hiii...i m new member...😊

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TSTPheonix

@TSTPheonix

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

very nice story plzzz post next part...

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Pari

@fairy1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: pracheetiv
hiii...i m new member...😊

Welcome...😊 Hope to see your active participation 😉

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mallikaBalu

@mallikaBalu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

'll read after wed and let you know GD. busy with too many things. Thank you for the PM.

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670778

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Dada ji
lgta tera chashma mere hatho hi marega
DEEP ka dimag khiska hua hai kya?
Hehehe
jocking apart
fabulous story dada
m sure party main jin gundo ne DEEP ko tang kia tha
uniki koi KARASTANI hai
bt eagrily waiting 4 opening of ur PITARA
abhi sir ne daya sir pr goli chalai
aisa likhne se pehle mere CHASME enemy ki DONO TANGE kyn nhi toot gyi
dont wory ye shubh kam main jaldi apne hatho se kr dungi
tum bs ftafat story complete kro
cant wait anymore

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Reshma

@RiDzDAYAlover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

m thrilled yaar... whts this going on?? 😲 😭 😭 😭 😭 i just can't wait for next part !! pls plsss post it fast !!!! please i beg... 😭😭

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Haleemah

@hal96

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Pleezzz post it fast x want 2 knw wat happensx waitin eagerly

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#540

@ GD :

just went through the story. and i'm totally shocked😲 , it's not that Daya sir is being framed for the first time, rather he has come out of all allegations with full diginity every time, but even then he never behaved like this ..placing gun on the ACP's head😲 !! the only thing comparable here is the jungle scene from the AC series where abhijeet & daya point guns to each other under the effect of drugs !! update the next part soon. i'm sure that these murders and the subsequent allegations on daya sir has something to do with the people in the party mentioned in the begining of the story .

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