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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: polly_03

@ GD :

so here i come finally. since i had a lot of pending unread pms from you, i finally decided to take out time to read them all in one go. and i DID it⭐️ !! since you have posted two stories in the FC and requested people not to comment over there, so i will post my comments here only.😊

WOW wat a 3G Speed yaar😆.😆... Thank You for Ur Comments either Post Here or There...😳😊
and for all your stories and the vm on pg.47 (i hardly know the characters to whom you have dedicated this vm to, except Dr.Anjalika ofcourse, coz i have never seen these episodes ever ) , i have just one word to say,

Me also getting some information about the Characters used in that Vm Boss...😉 Main bhi itna Phata Purana Nahi hun yaar...🤣🤣
SUPERB !!👏

Shukriyaa😳😳
specially this line from the funny story " Where's the Killer ?? "
Girl (to Daya) : kya aap mujhse shaadi karenge ??
omg , JUST EPIC🤣 !! it had me in splits !!🤣🤣
waise aaj kal ladkiyan (including female officers ) Sr.Ins.Daya pe kuch jyada hi meherbaan ho raha hai, nai ??😉😆
haan dekho na jub kay BHAI still wearing that Blue Bhaangaar Shirt...😉😆
keep it up !! and keep pming !!😃

Sure Pareshan karna tou Mera Pura Kaam hay...😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ firstly i'm so mch sry fr not to visit here earlier bcz
ek tuo may Cid Forum First page ko regularly check nhi krti 😛
n oper se due to personal bzy ness PM bhi miss kr gae thi 🤓 ,hope u understand😉
i found the PM regarding ths story jst 2 dayz back in my msg dabba n felt so mch shamed to comment here ,bcz PM wz too OLD 😛 around 20 days back 😛az U know always may sb se aakhir may he jaagti hu😛 , bolay tuo bht dare se 😆


hehe stilll tht mummy COP NIK didn' t stopped His Bha bha 😆
welll i think HE is vry mush careee fr His DAD Sir😛 😉 ,





KOMAL'z Objectionz :
" tum nay tou kaha tha Ins DAYA buht Sweet hain" KOI SHAQ ☺️
"bus Apny Kaam say Kaam" ! hmmm kya karen Shareeef jo hain ☺️😉
"Wo Smile kahan hay?/? jis ki Story Tum sunati thi'?? hehe Smile tuo hay Madam, bs kahi kho gae thi , khoojney ki dair thi, jo GD k Badey Bhai ne khoj li 😍
"Dressing Sense bhi nahi' jo milta hay pehan kay aa jata hy"😡 well is may Daya Sir ka kya fault hay 😕, is ka entire CREDIT😛 tuo FW walo ko jata hay 🤣🤣
" Bandy ko Bolna tak Nahi aata " hmm actually na Banda bada he bindaas hy😉, personality dekh kr baat krta hay😛 , jb bolney pr ata hay naa tuo samney walay ki BOLTI bnd ho jati hay 😈

ii mst say may be Kaveri had a Crushed on Ur'z Bhai 😛 , thtz why she Iniciated His Sweet Smile ,😉, wht say 😈 !!!

NO DOUD ! " He is Handsum n Sweet 😍 , HE can Hipnotyz az many az HE can in a Single Glimpz of HIs Million $ Smile 😳☺️😍


i found DUO here a much Cuter az before ☺️ , i luved to read all Leg pullings sceneario btween DUO frm top till bottom 😳 well i enjoyed ths Story vry mch 👍🏼
the Rahul'z exit part n Komal'z cell phone part wz 🥳ENDING of ths Story wz Hilarious😃


Thank u DADA for making me Smile ,Via ths Wonder ful Story 🤗🤗
U may sum tymz becum a reason of Increasing my STARz 😳

Edited by vevah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vevah

@ firstly i'm so mch sry fr not to visit here earlier bcz

ek tuo may Cid Forum First page ko regularly check nhi krti 😛

ufff SAD...

n oper se due to personal bzy ness PM bhi miss kr gae thi 🤓 ,hope u understand😉
matlab Neglect My PM...😲😲

i found the PM regarding ths story jst 2 dayz back in my msg dabba n felt so mch shamed to comment here ,bcz PM wz too OLD 😛 around 20 days back 😛az U know always may sb se aakhir may he jaagti hu😛 , bolay tuo bht dare se 😆

obviously Ashamed hona hee chahayey... LATE COMMER...😡😡

hehe stilll tht mummy COP NIK didn' t stopped His Bha bha 😆
welll i think HE is vry mush careee fr His DAD Sir😛 😉 ,

haaa. KUM Care karay tou Humein ACHI CARE milay gi...😆😆😉



KOMAL'z Objectionz :
" tum nay tou kaha tha Ins DAYA buht Sweet hain" KOI SHAQ ☺️

KOMAL ko hay na, Sifarish per aayii hay😆, Short/Long BOTH sightness Problem...😉😆

"bus Apny Kaam say Kaam" ! hmmm kya karen Shareeef jo hain ☺️😉

Bilkul... MERI tarah...😉

"Wo Smile kahan hay?/? jis ki Story Tum sunati thi'?? hehe Smile tuo hay Madam, bs kahi kho gae thi , khoojney ki dair thi, jo GD k Badey Bhai ne khoj li 😍

kaas DO chaar Achi Shirts bhi Khooj lein...😆😆

"Dressing Sense bhi nahi' jo milta hay pehan kay aa jata hy"😡 well is may Daya Sir ka kya fault hay 😕, is ka entire CREDIT😛 tuo FW walo ko jata hay 🤣🤣

nahi Boss, thora tou Qasoor hay na...😭

" Bandy ko Bolna tak Nahi aata " hmm actually na Banda bada he bindaas hy😉, personality dekh kr baat krta hay😛 , jb bolney pr ata hay naa tuo samney walay ki BOLTI bnd ho jati hay 😈

acha I think jub is Bindaas Bandy ki KHAMOSHI Bolti hay na, tou sub ki BOLTI KHAMOSH ho jati hay...😉😉😉

ii mst say may be Kaveri had a Crushed on Ur'z Bhai 😛 , thtz why she Iniciated His Sweet Smile ,😉, wht say 😈 !!!

Correct Idea Sirjee...😈😈

NO DOUD ! " He is Handsum n Sweet 😍 , HE can Hipnotyz az many az HE can in a Single Glimpz of HIs Million $ Smile 😳☺️😍

koi SHAK...😉😉

i found DUO here a much Cuter az before ☺️ , i luved to read all Leg pullings sceneario btween DUO frm top till bottom 😳 well i enjoyed ths Story vry mch 👍🏼
the Rahul'z exit part n Komal'z cell phone part wz 🥳ENDING of ths Story wz Hilarious😃

Thank U...😳


Thank u DADA for making me Smile ,Via ths Wonder ful Story 🤗🤗
U may sum tymz becum a reason of Increasing my STARz 😳

chalo thats a CUTE Compliment that My Words Increase UR Precious STARS...😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Happy Birthday BARAY BHAI...🥳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6iEMhTBXqo[/YOUTUBE]



GD...!!!😈
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BOSS…!!!

DAYA just out His Head from His room and tell ABHIJEET who sat with RAHUL at Lounge in easy mode… DAYA said…

DAYA (to ABHIJEET): Boss… abhi Pizza Delivery wala aayey ga… zara usay Paisay day ker Order lay lena…

He just ducked His head inside and ABHIJEET pat on His head… RAHUL seeing Him in smile… ABHIJEET initiated…

ABHIJEET: mujhy aaj tak samjh nahi aatii kay is ki Salary aakhir jati kahan hay??

RAHUL: Safe hoti hogi… saaray Kharchay tou Tum hee uthatay ho is kay…

ABHIJEET: haan Personal Kharchy… warna House Rent, Grocery, utility Bills sub mein DAYA share karta hay… per phir bhi RAHUL… Mujhy tou lagta hay koi Kufya account hay Is ka…

RAHUL smiles… Doorbell Rings… ABHIJEET standup after taking Out His Valet and signaled RAHUL to take Crockery from Kitchen… meanwhile DAYA also came out after taking a Chilling shower… ABHIJEET brought the whole Meal at Dining table and all Three enjoyed that… the day ended up..!!!

Next Morning… DAYA checked ABHIJEET Absence First and then entered at ACP Sir Cabin with His Permission who was busy doing some File work… He initiates as…

DAYA: Sir wo kal ABHIJEET ka Birthday hay tou hum sub us kay liyey ek Surprise Party plan ker rahay hain… aap raat ko Ghar aa jayey ga…

ACP (with smile): matlab Tohfa bhi lana paray ga…??

DAYA (smiles): Sir lana tou chahyey…!!!

ACP: acha Theek hay… wesay khayal rakhna kahein FREDRICS is Surprise ki Band na baja day…

DAYA (laugh): nahi Sir… wo wesay bhi Kal meray sath PUNE ja raha hay…

ACP (confuse tone): magar Kal tou Party hay na…

DAYA: Jee Sir per Hum log ABHIJEET aur FREDDIE ko yehi bata rahay hain…

ACP smiles on His Plan and moved His Head whereas DAYA moved out… here FREDDIE told ABHIJEET that Tomorrow Morning He Himself, VIVEK and DAYA moved to PUNE… ABHIJEET shock to Hear this… He asked DAYA in Bureau as…

ABHIJEET: DAYA Kal Tum PUNE ja raahy ho??

DAYA: haan Yaar… ye JAGDESH MEHRA ka Case tou jaan ko hee aa gaya hay…

ABHIJEET: magar kal jana Zaruri hay Kya??

DAYA (innocent look): kyun… Kal kya hay???

ABHIJEET look at Him in Mixture of Shock and Hurt Emotions and without a Word moved Outside… DAYA really feel Sad but just to the Success of His Plan… He did not take any Risk at This Phase… at Night after 12 am… ABHIJEET waited for anyone SMS, CALL, Email, Wishing Card even Flowers but Nothing He received… He remembered that DAYA mostly Reminding His Birthday before a week and making Plans where to go Outside… Listing those Restaurants which Opened New at this period or missed by DAYA's Eyes but Today…!!!

Here DAYA is at RAHUL place… He is really Upset as He knew that ABHIJEET Waited for His Wish… He spent much Time there and standup after assuming that ABHIJEET was Slept… He reached at residence… look ABHIJEET at His Bed in Sound Sleep… moving Out and moved to His Room…!!!

Next Morning ABHIJEET still checked All His Accessories that might be DAYA did something after His Sleep but found Nothing even DAYA also Not there just leaving a Note paste at Fridge Door to move Early because of PUNE Visit… He came in Rash but after few minutes His Rash turned into Sadness… He moved to Bureau after get Ready and without a Breakfast…!!!

He spent much Hour here… seeing Nobody take any Interest even TAREEKA also came to Bureau but did not wish Him… just discussing some Reports to ACP Sir and moved Out.. He also expected some Wish from ACP Sir but He is looking much busy Roaming inside and outside… He became so Sad… before Evening One by One Members leaving the Bureau… DAYA called Him after reaching at PUNE so He knew that he will be Late… He left Bureau after 8 and moved to Sea side… Here after 10 He got VIVEK call that they had an Accident during Back to MUMBAI… All are Safe but DAYA sir had a Broken Ribs… DR treated Him and they all waiting for Him at Residence… ABHIJEET after this call moved in Jeep with the speed of Bullet… did not find Quillas so thought maybe it was at Garage.. He moved inside with His Own Key and found a Big Happy Surprise… His all Team including His best Buddy cum BHAI without any Reminisce of Wounds welcomed Him with HAPPY BIRTHDAY Wish…!!!

He moved Forward with Happy Glowing Face…. All give Him Space to Cut the Cake… He looks around and Whisper DAYA who stand beside Him…

ABHIJEET: DAYA thora Wait ker letay??

DAYA: hain… itna Kum tou kiya hay… ab aur kiya karun… (ABHIJEET look Him in Confusion) (he whisper in Naughty tone) WEIGHT…!!!

ABHIJEET (punched on His tummy and said): wo… wo TAREEKA JEE nahi nazar aa rahi??

ACP (interrupts): kya hua ABHIJEET… Cake tou kato…

SALUNKHY (added): aur kya… itni Bhook lug rahi hay Boss aur Tum abhi bhi Der ker rahy ho..!!

ABHIJEET: nahi Sir… wo main tou…

He looks at DAYA who tried to Hide his naughty Smile… after seeing ABHIJEET tough look… He Whispered Him…

DAYA: Dr. TAREEKA ki Frnd ka Accident ho gaya hay… wo usay dekhnay chali gayii hain… Cake kat lo Boss… un ka aana Mushkil hay…

ABHIJEET: Us ki Frnd ko bhi aaj hee Accident karwana tha…

DAYA smiles… ABHIJEET look at Him… take a Deep Breath… DAYA lighted the Candle… ABHIJEET before blowing… just Close His Eyes on everyone Suggestion to Wish Something.. He opened His Eyes and see TAREEKA in front… saw Her… Shock and then Smile and Blow the Candle with Cut the Cake… after having Good and Memorable moments.. Everyone moved out… DUO sat on Lounge… ABHIJEET Unwrapped his Gifts which Presented by His Team members One by One… Both passing Remarks on Gifts as well… suddenly DAYA asked…

DAYA: Boss Wish kis ki ki thi??

ABHIJEET: jis ki ki thi… wo aa tou gayii thi…

DAYA: batana nahi chatay tou alug baat hay per jhoot tou Nahi bolo…

DAYA stand up… ABHIJEET just clutched His Wrist and said in Teary Tone…

ABHIJEET (teary tone): MAA ki…

DAYA shocked… Sat on His Knees in front of Him… Pulled Him and Hugged Him with Tight Grip…

ABHIJEET (in hugging): pata nahi yaar.. kahan say aaj itni aajeeb sii wish…

ABHIJEET voice Cracked… DAYA just trying to Sooth Him… ABHIJEET Relaxed after few minutes… Leave DAYA… wipes His Tears and Refreshes His Tone as…

ABHIJEET: wesay Shahab ka Gift kahan hay???

DAYA (standup): arry day tou diya…

ABHIJEET (looking all Gifts and say): kahan??

DAYA (naughty smile): HUG… (wink) pata hay kitnay log Wish karty hain Is Gift ki…

ABHIJEET Smiles… DAYA moving to His Room… ABHIJEET Stopped Him and ordered…

ABHIJEET: ja kahan rahay ho??? (signaling all mess) ye sub kaun sametay ga??

DAYA: arry.. (shock) kiya Mian…!!

ABHIJEET: tou aur kiya… Main… (naughty shade) Main tou Birthday Boy (DAYA starts laughing) (ABHIJEET in harsh) haan zara Bara ho gaya hay ye Boy… per aaj Main koi kaam nahi karun ga… samjhay… ye sub Tujhy he karna hay… (warn tone) abhi karo ya baad mein…!!!

DAYA: kya Boss…!!!

ABHIJEET: yehi Tumhari Saza hay Kal raat say is Party kay Pehlay tak Meray Mood ko Off rakhny ki……

After that He moved inside… DAYA picking Things from Floor as He knew at any Cost He will complete His Punishment…!!!

He moved earlier to Bureau as He told it to ABHIJEET Last Night… ABHIJEET wakes up… before taking Shower He opened His wardrobe to Select the Outfit… after Opening He was in Shock Phase… the Wardrobe is filled with so many Bight Color Shirts, Tee Shirts, Jersey, Formal Trousers and Jeans… His all Old outfits including those Boring Coats were Not Presented there… just a Note which Paste on Wardrobe Inner Door side contained…

Boss!!! Ye Tumhara Birthday Gift hay… agr Shirts ki Coller Size ya Trousers/Jeans kay Waist ya Length mein kuch adjust karwana ho tou ye us Shop ka Card hay… DAYA..!!

ABHIJEET: DAYA… (with emotional tone) Tu bhi na…!!!

He takes out a Formal Trouser with Ink Blue Shirt and moved to take a Shower… He reached at Bureau… Guard looks at Him and trying to Frame His Query, Excitement, Praise whatever but Failed…

ABHIJEET (to Guard): kya hua???

DAYA came Behind and said in Naughty Tone…

DAYA: wo Tum Coat mein Nahi ho na… Bechara Pehchan nahi pa raha…

Guard Smiles… ABHIJEET punched on DAYA Arm and Both entered… ABHIJEET feeling the Praise Look of His Team Members… ACP Sir who was at His cabin Door looks at Him and asked to DAYA….

ACP (to DAYA): DAYA… ABHIJEET nahi aaya kya…???

ABHIJEET really Embarrass… All Giggles including DAYA… ABHIJEET said in Shy tone to ACP…

ABHIJEET (to ACP): kya Sir… Aap bhi…!!!

All Smiles… FREDDIE took DAYA inside Interrogation Room for Interrogate with a Culprit… ABHIJEET moved down to take a File which He missed in His Jeep… at Downstairs A guy collide Him in Hurry and just asked after that Unexpected Smash to ABHIJEET…

GUY: wo yahan Mr.DAYA kaam kartay hain na???

ABHIJEET: haan… aap kaun???

GUY: mera Naam RISHAB hay… Mian Quick Bank say aaya hun… darsal Mujhy Mr. DAYA say kuch Official Kaam tha… aap plz Mujhy Guaide ker dein gay kay wo kahan milein gay???

ABHIJEET bit Confuse because He knew there is No Account of DAYA at this Bank.. here only ABHIJEET Personal Account which He only Used for Personal Usage… He asked in Suspicious tone…

ABHIJEET (after a while): darasal DAYA tou hay nahi abhi… Main Us ka BHAI hun… aap Mujhy bata saktay hain kay kya kaam hay aap ko DAYA say?? Mera naam…!!!

RISHAB (interrupts in hurry): oh acha… ye tou acha hua… dekhyey aap ye Envelope Mr. DAYA ko day dijyey ga aur Kahyey ga kay unhun nay apnay Signature mein Dot nahi lagaya hay tou ye Check is Account mein Jama nahi ho sakta…!!!

ABHIJEET took Out the Check from Envelope and after seeing the Detail… ask in Shocking tone…

ABHIJEET: ye Account…!!!

RISHAB: Jee ye Account Kisi Mr. ABHIJEET ka hay… her Month Un kay Account mein Mr. DAYA kuch Amount Check kay through dalwatay hain… magar kal Jaldi mein Un ko jana para tou Ghalat Signature kay Karan ye Bounce Back ho gaya hay…

ABHIJEET (teary tone): aur kub say Ye Checks ABHIJEET kay Account mein jama ho rahay hain???

RISHAB: kum az kum Dus Saalun say…

ABHIJEET (tried to ralax): acha Main us say kahun ga kay wo aap ko Call ker lay tou Aap Detail bata dijyey ga… ye Bank wank kay Kaam ki samjh Mujhy Nahi aatii…

RISHAB moved His Head in Yes with smile and left the Place… whereas ABHIJEET moved to Guard and tell Him to give that Letter to DAYA after saying that He will call Mr. RISHAB who gave this Letter to Him through Guard… He ordered Guard that He never Speak that this Letter was given by ABHIJEET to Him… Guard nodded… while ABHIJEET moved out… in the whole way… He remembers His Chat with RAHUL…

mujhy aaj tak samjh nahi aatii kay is ki Salary aakhir jati kahan hay?? Safe hoti hogi… saaray Kharchay tou Tum hee uthatay ho is kay… haan Personal Kharchy… warna House Rent, Grocery, utility Bills sub mein DAYA share karta hay… per phir bhi… Mujhy tou lagta hay koi Kufya account hay Is ka…

His Eyes have Tears… He never ever found any Less Money at His Account… Every time He takes out Money from ATM… the Balance must be Remain… as He Invest some of His Salary Shares so He thought might be Their Profit Balances His Accounts… the whole Detail showed that DAYA Transact 1/3 of His Salary Amount on ABHIJEET Account and only have Some which He used to give His Share on House Rent, Grocery, Utility Bills etc… He dunt understand either He termed DAYA as His BHAI or LORD Precious Gift for Him…!!!

DAYA entered and after smelling something… changed His Direction towards Kitchen… He saw ABHIJEET taking out something from Oven and tried to check it after Clearing His Vision… DAYA came Forward and said behind him…

DAYA: ye Jal gaya hay Boss…!!! Wesay Tha kya…!!!

ABHIJEET: Pizza… (after a second) Jala Nahi hay… bus Thora Kaala ho gaya hay…

DAYA (shock): thora Kaala… !!!

ABHIJEET turned Back and Hugged Him Tightly… DAYA instantly said…

DAYA: Boss Tum kuch bhi ker lo… (naughty smile) Mian ye Jala hua Pizza tou kisi qeemut per Nahi khaon ga…

ABHIJEET left Him in Laugh after Punch on His Tummy and said…

ABHIJEET: Bakwaas band… Teray pass 5 minute hain Ready honay ko…

DAYA: arry 5 minutes mein kaun tayyar…

ABHIJEET (interrupts): 4

DAYA rushed fast for Changing… here ABHIJEET waited for Him after deciding to keep This News in His Heart like a Secret..!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
yipee is baar may jaldi tapak padee 😃😉
me bhagum bhaag here after receiving notification 😛😆

hey DADA 👍🏼
wonder ful Story 🥳

btw mje bhi yehi hr baar khataktaa tha k aakhir IS ki Salary jati kaha hay 😛 ???
it wz amazing DADA😳
offcourse ths type of Buddies r not called Brotherz ,they r no doud LORD PRECIOUS GIFT 😳

luvly Surprice 😉
even Dr. "T" forgot to wish 😲🤪😆
wese in Mohtarma ka Zikr nhi hota Story may tuo bhi chalta 😛😈


hehehe wait 😕
naa naa WEIGHT 😛 , already HE is abv 100 kg 😈😆
Us ki Frnd ko bhi aaj hee Accident karwana tha' 🤣
aah ! HE wished his Mom 😒 !

hug ! pata hay kitnay log Wish karty hain Is Gift ki'😍 ,


the Wardrobe is filled wth so many bright color shirts,t-Shirts,jersey,formal trousers and jeanz😲

kya dada apne Badey Bhai ko new cloths k sapney dikha rahey ho 😛


wht a luvly Secret 😳

GOD BLESS U Dada , 🤗



uff ! zabardust ! wht a Luvly VM 😳👏

sach may ajb se he ADAAIEN hain 😍

luvly Song 😳








Edited by vevah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dada amazing story 👏 hehe hume bhi special sa Daya ka gift chahiye😳😆

Great choice of Song and Caps superb 👏
Edited by ..MissBindaas.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooow great story as usuall... GD tmhara toh koi jawab he nae aur tmhary bhai's ka bi...
aur woh secret awsum tha... main itny days say wait kar rahe the tmhari story ka aur aj itna maza aya yeh story parh k... really u made my morning superb... :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely dada!
u can post it on the bday thread!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely VM GD...😊
will read the story shortly

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