Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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megha verma

@vermamegha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

very nice story...👏👍🏼🤗

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little_squirrel

@little_squirrel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

What is this chulbuli and her billi kahani?!😊

i mean y is it related from my name?

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: little_squirrel
What is this chulbuli and her billi kahani?!😊
i mean y is it related from my name?

check it😊... its CHOTI BILLI n U are CHOTI GILHERI😆 (ur UserID)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cYFozkRouOo[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by gadhadada - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: -Shruti
Omg! Just loved this story, like your previous ones. I liked this idea of transfer as it was quite different than the usual investigation and murders. Duo bonding was expressed beautifully and I loved every bit of it. I wish Abhijeet sir had slapped nikhil :P

Daya sir's sudden decision to go away was expected from his sensitive nature :(
Scenes of duo and Rahul were simply awesome. Abhijeet sir's idea was brilliant, to bring back Daya sir :D

Overall, a fresh and great story!

OML!!!! kya Baccha... itna Gussa😆... kay NIKHIL ki Pitai wo bhi Baray Bhai kay Shub Haathun say...😉

yup I tried to make something without any Investigation😊... haan Teasing by Frnds are always Chiiling for Someone😳... kaash aisay scene On Screen bhi Nazar aatay...

Thank You Pyaray, Guddy aur Sohnay Bacchay...🤗

Originally posted by: Anjuchathy
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dada u r the best

arry so main SRK ko bata dun about that kay😉

I m the Best!!!😈😆😆

Thank you ANJU😳

Originally posted by: vermamegha
very nice story...👏👍🏼🤗

Thank You Verma...😳

so Nice of U.😊..

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nidhi

@abhijeet.bhai

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

itni new aur achi achi stories ki factory to siraf GD tum say hi mil sakti haan i loved that restorent part and abhijeet sir's volet i thought ajj to daya sir abhi sir ka volet khali kara ker hi choray gay 2 pounds jo barhana hai 😈

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587298

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

A cherishing story GD👏👍🏼 Otherwise we don't get to see such light moments in CID these days...So you write such kind of stories, it looks good.👍🏼

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

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Originally posted by: abhijeet.bhai
itni new aur achi achi stories ki factory to siraf GD tum say hi mil sakti haan i loved that restorent part and abhijeet sir's volet i thought ajj to daya sir abhi sir ka volet khali kara ker hi choray gay 2 pounds jo barhana hai 😈

NIDHI, soch raha hun tumharay hath ye Factory bech dun😉... ab Daam kya lago gi... ye dekhna hay.😆.. shayed tabhi aaj kal BARAY BHAI nay BHAI kay sath aana KUM ker diya hay😆...

Thank You Boss...😳

Originally posted by: Mansi.
A cherishing story GD👏👍🏼 Otherwise we don't get to see such light moments in CID these days...So you write such kind of stories, it looks good.👍🏼

Thats True yaar😊, ab tou lagta hay ye Cherish Moments bus Stories tak he reh gayey hain... thank You for Liking My Stories... 😳

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

lovely story dada...keep it up

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Pari

@fairy1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

GD again you left me speechless!!!!Very well portrayed DUO's part and that AC DUCT part reminded me of the rona dhona of NIKHIL 😆

And now we all have to depend upon u along with other writers on IF for

DUO scenes,chit chat.Well done!!😉 👏👍🏼😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: sherdilali
lovely story dada...keep it up

Lovely Feedback SD😉... keep it up... 😆

Originally posted by: fairy1
GD again you left me speechless!!!!Very well portrayed DUO's part and that AC DUCT part reminded me of the rona dhona of NIKHIL 😆
And now we all have to depend upon u along with other writers on IF for
DUO scenes,chit chat.Well done!!😉 👏👍🏼😃

Thank You for Liking that part...😳😳

Yes U are bit True cz Now its almost Impossible to Find it in Epi's...

Thank You again...😳