Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Woah..!!
What a story😃
Loved that AC duct part🤣
Bechare Daya sir...
But that Nikhil and Komal😡😡

Story was too good Dada..Loved it❤️❤️
Keep it up🤗🤗

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

😆😆😆 😆

Daya sir kidnapped woh bhi Abhijeet sir ke hatho...

Yaar ek bat batao Daya sir ko uthaya kaise... 😲

Very Nice story Dada... it made my morning too Haapy... and Smiling...

👏👏👏👏

U rock DADA

🤗

Edited by Forfriends - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: shreela
so sweet of u!😃

THANK YOU KD...😃

so Sweet of U too... 😳

Originally posted by: maggi.masala
Aah...a vry cute and relaxing story... Super cool as alwayz... 😎
Thanx a lottt dada...

Thank You GURYA...😳

Nice to see U Back😳

I m really feeling so Sooth...🤗

Originally posted by: cargopants
very good attempt 👏
something really soothing in this day by day destroying era of CID
keep it up 👍🏼

I m really ThankFul to YOU CARGOPANTS😃 (i loved Cargo Pants very much😉)

yup trying to Sooth after seeing all that...😳

Thank Again...😊

Originally posted by: gwentlend
dada
like always aapka stories ka to jawab nahi👏👍🏼👏
ab to duo ka saath ise hee milthe hai
aap FW mein writer bankar kyon nahi jaate
aap kehkar to dekhiye apne bhayiyon se😉
I really miss duo together😭

Thank You GWEN...😳

Tumharay Parhnay ka bhi Sawal Nahi😉

Main aur FW ka Writer...😲

haan ab Bhayun ko kehna paray ga...😆

yup we all Miss them as being Together...😳

chalo Thank You...😊

Ro Nhai pata hay na Tears kya hotay hain...😊

so Smile...😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: Crystalx
Really Fantastic story you made my day for the past few weeks when daya and abhijeet were not there i felt like crying 😭 and seriously i am not lying. the ac duct thing with daya and nikhil was really funny (even though i dont like nikhil scine he is like daya's chamcha and i don't understand about this society thing so tarika said to abhijeet that you and daya live together and its against the society and daya heard her and thats why he chose the transfer btw who is rahul did he use to be daya's friend i heard the name rahul as daya's friend in the case of the murderous affair but didnt rahul die becuase thats what daya said anyway good story

Thank You CRYSTALX😃 (I remember my Chemistry Labs with Ur UserId😆)...

No Comments for that AC Duct Scene...😉

yup about Ur Query, No its my Own Character as a DAYA Sir Batch mate, He is Not that Guy who was indicated in MURDERIOUS AFFAIR...😊

Thanks Again...😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Forfriends
😆

Daya sir kidnapped woh bhi Abhijeet sir ke hatho...

Yaar ek bat batao Daya sir ko uthaya kaise... 😲

Very Nice story Dada... it made my morning too Haapy... and Smiling...

👏

U rock DADA

🤗

thatswhy Baray Bhai took RAHUL with Him😆 and hope to get some Help from that Sub Inspector...😉

I m just trying to Chiil All Moods including Me...😳

THANK YOU BH...🤗

Khush raho...😃

apnay Kharchay per... 😉😆

Originally posted by: PARO..16
Woah..!!
What a story😃
Loved that AC duct part🤣
Bechare Daya sir...
But that Nikhil and Komal😡😡

Story was too good Dada..Loved it❤️❤️
Keep it up🤗🤗

Woah...😉

What a Reply...😆

Thank You Baccha...😳

wesay Frnds aisay hee Tease kartay hain na...😉

just simple Leg Pulling...😆

Thank You so much...🤗

Originally posted by: -Gautami

So sweet&cuute story.Daya and abhijeet were Fab.The cuute moment of the AC duct.I just adore this two & their friendship.

Thank You for Ur Sweet and Cute Reply...😳😳

so Adoring Feedback... 😃

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670778

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

thanku dada 4 sweet doze😊

its refreshing my mood😃

no words except🤗

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little_squirrel

@little_squirrel

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Really nice story..

so sweet..⭐️

i like this story part most on if..😊

Edited by little_squirrel - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24
thanku dada 4 sweet doze😊
its refreshing my mood😃
no words except🤗

Thank You so much DEEP...😳😳

Originally posted by: little_squirrel
Really nice story..
so sweet..⭐️
i like this story part most on if..😊

Thank U Liile_Squirrel...😳

wen I read Ur UserID, i remembers CHULBULI and Her BILLI Kahani... 😆😆😆

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halfbloodprince

@WindsOfHeaven

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Omg! Just loved this story, like your previous ones. I liked this idea of transfer as it was quite different than the usual investigation and murders. Duo bonding was expressed beautifully and I loved every bit of it. I wish Abhijeet sir had slapped nikhil :P

Daya sir's sudden decision to go away was expected from his sensitive nature :(
Scenes of duo and Rahul were simply awesome. Abhijeet sir's idea was brilliant, to bring back Daya sir :D

Overall, a fresh and great story!