Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: visrom
This is the aftermath of the Daraar series which actually didn't have any real Daraar. It is nice to see some people attempting a real Daraar story. I am very much curious to know how people create a real Daraar between duo without ruining either of their characters.

I read the first part till the fight between duo happened and it is interesting. I am unable to read everything thru mobile. Will continue tomorrow.

It will be really nice to see all writers of our forum attempt their own version of Daraar. It will be interesting to see how everyone treats this. 😊

Sorry... after waiting now i think to THANK this Person with my Heartiest Regard😊... Thank U DII...😳

i was Waiting for Ur Critical View which Helped Me to write Better😊... but Ur Like Button also Boost up My Energy😳... THANK U for Ur precious moments and Thank U for Liking the Story... Lord always Bless His Shower of Affection upon U.. 😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

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Monika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

too good GD...😆😆😆 👏👏👏

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Loved It !!!! Really Very Funny !

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Mini :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

😆😆😆
Wowww dada:)

What a story:)

Loved it:)

hahahaha...

👏👏👏

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587298

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

lovely story😊😊 and very funny😆😆😆

Edited by Mansi. - 13 years ago

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

That was awesome!!! Subah hanste hanste shuru ho gayi. 😆

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Sheen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Rocking story 👏

hame entertain karne ka thanks DADA 😊

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Hey Dada 😊,

Iam happy to read and finish early this time 😃.

This time I have a mixed response. I was a bit of surprised to find it a story sort of 😕.

I found the story really long.

Mujhey lagtha hain hain ki tum bohoth jaldi mein thi to post the story. Beech beech mein woh hospital incidents bohoth hurry mein likha gaya hain yesa mujhey laga.

I felt ki jab ek bar hospitalise hona accident hota... par bar bar again hospitalised made me laugh with the writing style...😆.

Woh Daya ka Pizza mangvaana was something unexpected 😛 Kyuni we never seen such thing on TV 😛

Mujhey Daya ka Abhi bulaana was nice to read 😊 ( never seen yet on TV)

The 10,000 bill ki baath bhi kaafi mazedaar raha 'cab mein safar kia ya plane mein ' 😆😛

Aur yeh kyaa Daya ka haath jar mein phas gaya 😆

Daya ka mein shaadishuda bolna was quiet naugty one 😛

Ultimately yes where is the killer ? 😆😆😆

Generally don't feel bad I found i difficult to go through because spelling errors theh... and I felt it was rushed very much... Agar slowly and steadily likha jaatha toh maza aa jatha ...

But I enjoyed reading it Dada..

That is the most important thing Right 😊 So GOOD JOB 👏👏👏👏👏

Keep Bringing more 😃😃😃😃

Edited by DreamyDeepz28 - 13 years ago