Originally posted by: Crystalx
My best feedback
GD on my 1000th post i would like to give you the best feedback ever
For this story I am speechless. I will just give one word for this story which is 'WOW' i cannot think of a better word then this as this was one of the best stories ever that you have written. This was beyond my imagination i was expecting some dramatized emotional story but you were true to your word and gave some twist to the plot. I was not that shocked that Abhijeet and Daya where sent to a secret mission regarding a dangerous criminal and it was full of suspense but i was more shocked when Abhijeet and Daya both got injured but both of them were safe thank GOD. i liked the way you added DCP's concern and safety for his daughter. Then the fun bit started when Abhijeet became Paresh and special mention to Abhijeet's sorry Paresh's favorite word "Motay Sipahee" and "Ayey Larky" and the other words he used to say Daya's name. They way Daya handled Abhijeet was awesome. I was literally dying with laughter in the middle of the night. When ever Paresh spoke. Especially in the house where Daya and Abhijeet were alone after Daya took him home from hospital, Every sentence that he said and you typed was extermely funny. My favorite was 'ABHIJEET (sad voice): Motay Sipahee ko tou Kambel bhi poora nahi aata''. Hey Bhagwan CID ke family ACP and Salukhe ke faces merged with each other as Papa, Dr. Niyati and Dr. Tarika merged together as his wife oh God sorry i cannot imagine that even though i tried very hard to think about it. lekin Tarika ne tho Abhijeet ko betray kar diya so wo uski biwi kesa bani. Abhijeet also mentioned about his beta but he did not draw his sketch i wonder if he did who would it be of. I also like the way in the later part of the story when Paresh turns into Abhijeet and looks after Daya but then sadly he turns back Paresh and uses his favorite words. I also liked the way you added the confusion on Abhijeet's face regarding his brother. You also added a bit of Behrupiya flashback which was excellent and well portrayed. The excellent way to get Abhijeet's yadash back recreating the scene again which was done perfectly by you. The last convo between Abhijeet and Daya was really funny regarding 'yummy in the tummy' Another excellent story by you GD. You have so much talent in you that i cannot explain.
I think i didn't understand yaar that at the start in the hospital why did ACP sir lie to the Doctor that Abhijeet became Paresh when he doesn't have a twin brother.
yaar i dunt want to give any new approach to this point cz FW nay bhi yehi aisay hee chora hua hay😉😆
Please no one give credit to me because this story has nothing to do with me. I just gave a simple idea and GD is the one who created this fab story.
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