MY FIRST STORY

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hi guys i am gayatri this my first story dedicated to all my frnds

SCENE:1
First there are some apartments with A B C blocks i person named raju goes in to his home then after some time there is a long shout .sab log bahar aakar dekthe hain ke bahut sara khun hai raju ke ghar ke bahar sab log dar jatta hai aur CID ko bulathe hain
IN THE BEREAU
freedy enters with anger
when viivek asks he says thuhe kyun bolu main thum ne mera zindgi karab kiya main...
viivek : main ne kya kiya sir(wit a questioned face)
freddy: tumhe ne to kaha ki main house change karu
viivek: toh
freedy: kitini assani se kaha raha hai toh uss ghar ne mere zindagi chin le
then DUO entres with acp
kya ho raha hai yaha
viivek complaints abt freedy
abhijeet: kyun kya hua daat kyun rahi hai viivek ko
freddy : dekeye ne sir viivek ne mujhe ghar change kar le ne ke liye kaha par lekin uss ghar mein sab kuch problem hi hai
abhijeet : accha viivek tume ne aisa kiya kyun😉 by winking
viivek: mujhe kya pata ke vahan par isa kuch hoga
abhijeet : tik hai fredy ke liye ek accha ghar dund le ne samaj gaya
viivek : s sir
then a phone comes
daya: kya khun kaha ek apartment mein tik hai hum aatte hain
freedy : mujhe to sara shaak viivek par hi hai main kud aap na ghar dund tha hu
freedy acp calls then he runs
SCENE 2
in the raju house
acp : dondo acche tareh se doondo
viivek kajal nikhil search f finger prints but they cant find it
nikhil: pura ghar dek liya sir ek bhi saboot nahin mila
acp: aisa kya ho sak ta hai
abhijet : sir idhar dekhiye
acp: ha abhijeet
abhijeet: idar kuch nshan hai sir
acp: kya
abhijeet :kuch sport shoe ka nishhan agta hain sir
sachin: sir main ne sab log se puch liya who log na kisi ko aandar aate hue dekha na kisi ko bahar jate hue dekha isa kaisa ho sakta hai sir
acp : matlab khooni andar isi kidi ki se aandar aya aur isi se bahar bhi gaya
aur who bahut chalak hai usne sara sabut mita diya
sachin : kaun aisa kar sakta hai sir
acp : koi dost ya dushman
abhijeet : par padosi ka kahna hai ki koi dost ise milta aata nahin aur y aanadh hai
acp : tik hai body ko foresenic leke chalo
SCENE 3
in the bereau...
acp: pata nahin raju ko kis ne mara hai khooni itni saavdhani se saare sbbot kaise mita diya
abhijeet: hum phir se uss ghar ko check karna padega aur raju ke office main bhi kahana hai ki yo kisi se milta nahin
acp haan wahin tho itni ajeeb aur moody aadmi ka khoon koi kaisa kar sakta hain
then a phone comes saying tht in same apartment one more khoon
SCENE 4
daya: iska naam prem hai is ko bhi ues tarah se mara gaya bilkul raju ki tarah
viivek : sir ye dekye hain yaha par
abhijeeet: ye photo main tho raju aur prem hai
sachin : aise lag raha hai ki ye dono ek dusre ko acche tarah se jjante hain
abhi: hai sachin par ye dusree log kaun hai
viivek : sir ye log bhi isi apartment mai rahate hain
sachin kahin in dono ka jaan bhi katra main tho nahin
kajal: sir is window me bhi aise bhi nishaan hai bilkil uss sport shoe tarah
abhijeet : chalo is 2 log se bhi milte hain
SCENE 5
kya aap nishant hai
nishant ; ha boliye
abhijeet : ky aap ise pahachan te hain
nishant: no main ne ise pahale kabhi nahin dekha
freedy : juth tum ne in dono ko jannte hain
nishant: nahin ye photo kaha se mujhe ata nahin
mera yakeen kijiye mera jaan kathre mein hain aur aap mere upaar sakh kar raha hain
sachin : tik hain
all the people leaves frm there
in the bereau...
kajal: ek badi baat pata chali sir raju prem nishant karan in sab log ko ek jayaddat hai pura 25 crore ka
freedy: good work kajal
(to be continued)



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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry r the mistakes as it s my first story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Started off with 2 khoons. Typical NK style...please continue.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u i will continue it soon vi wt is nk style

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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
wow nice story plz continue it ... inti intresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice work so far, Gayatri. 😊 Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Nice attempt Gayatri di :)
Looking forward for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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looking forward for the next part dear...gr8 start!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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acctually i am busy i will post it on saturday
😊 plz be patient
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure dear take your own time..no hurry😊

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