my next story @ pg 4: Duo ki Dosti - Page 4

hey SHAKSHI dear

Hey it waz a nice story, short, simple and sweet.. 😊
Really liked it... U deserve a round of applause 👏
Gud job.. Keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: DreamyDeepz28

Hey Saakshi dear

Story Fantastic hai.I loved the story short and sweet. Kabhi bhi Daya aur Abhijeet ko choti baath pe itna naaraz hokeh nahi dekha.Daya-Abhi toh itna jyaada time naaraz bhi nahi reh sakhthe ... Daya ko Abhi se gale lagateh huveh bhi nahi dekha jyaada especially naraaz hoke sab theekh ho jane ke baadh 😉.Daya ka 'tum meri jaan ho' yeh dialogue naya hai.Freddy ka yeh dialogue 'Daya sir ki jaan ko pesh kiya jaye' bhi naya dialogue hai. Actually jab "(daya's cell rings) "yeh mein story mein padh rahi thi tab yesa laga ki mera sixth sense mujhe keh raha hai ki bacha Arpit kidnap honewala hai. Tumhari story mein aur ek baat yeh hai ki tumhari story mein Vivek,Sachin,Kaajal,Purbi and Sonaali missing hain.Tumhari yeh kahaani mein ek aur baath yeh ki kaha bhi jaaye Daya ya Abhi ACP'se kehkar hih jayenge na?😲.I felt that Abhi getting injured and Daya getting injured is very reapeatative now a days.You have included Daya sir smiling i think 2 times... its really nice to read and imagine him smiling 😍 ...which is actually beautiful to say... kyunki khudh Madhuri'ji ne hih taarif kiya tha na😉..😍 😍.What i loved most about your story is that you have got more duo moments which actually is nice to read 😊.Totally good story 👏👏👏

(I hope you didn't feel bad about any comment of mine 😊)

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

hey SHAKSHI dear

change thread title as MY SECOND STORY.. DUO KI DOSTU at pg 4...

ppl cud not undersand u hv posted 2nd story...

Originally posted by: daya_angel

nah nah no ways..

bt muje acha laga ki tumne meri story ke eke ek dialogue ko itne dhyan se padha...

i really like it...

actually maine aur sab k dialogues isliye miss kiya coz aj kal duo miss rehte hay.. aur sab bolte rehte hay... so i tried sumthng new...

thanks 4 such a long feedback..

SAKSHI really NICE...👏👏
but U did not clearify abt ARPIT!!!😕
and also tried to clear that on ABHI Sir request DAYA sir called his school after taking the number from his mom and confirmed abt his DISAPPEARANCE...
the LAST part was NICE... sum sweet DIALOGUES there... especially wen in CAFE... 😉
DAYA SIR said to ABHI Sir that...

Daya: han yr muje aisa kuch tumhare chehrey par bhi dikhai de raha hai.

its so CUTE... so cute teasing...😉

Originally posted by: daya_angel

yaa di i have done it...

n story to btao kaisi h..

n one request punjabi me comment karna...okk😆

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24

sorry shakshi

will read tomorrow😃

yup

ihde vich kehnh vali kehri gal hai

comment punjabi vich hi milnhge😉

pr tuhanu punjabi smjh aa javegi na😲

Originally posted by: DreamyDeepz28

Hey Saakshi dear mein toh meri story mein bhi aise comments expect kar rahi thi.. but bohot kum friendz ne iss style mein comment kiya...

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SAKSHI really NICE...👏👏
but U did not clearify abt ARPIT!!!😕
and also tried to clear that on ABHI Sir request DAYA sir called his school after taking the number from his mom and confirmed abt his DISAPPEARANCE...
the LAST part was NICE... sum sweet DIALOGUES there... especially wen in CAFE... 😉
DAYA SIR said to ABHI Sir that...

Daya: han yr muje aisa kuch tumhare chehrey par bhi dikhai de raha hai.

its so CUTE... so cute teasing...😉