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Guyz, dis is my first poem ever.. I hv never written any poem b4 dis. Plz bear wid my amaturish attempt..
Dedicated 2 my DUO:
TWO KIDS
They say there's a child in every man..
My eyes always search for that kid in a man.

I keep on looling and Oh what i foud!!
Two wonderful kids who r emotionally bound..

The first kid 'man' is strong and bold.
But inside he has a heart of gold.
He slaps,smacks the evil and breaks up the doors,
but still he's a child who is innocent to the core.
A child who is cuteness personified..
He can do anything for his big brother's pride.

The second kid 'man' is a stark, stern guy.
Watch out, u may get lost in that sparkling eye.
He shoots out the crime, every criminal is his foe.
But if u look inside, his heart is full of love.
He loves is brother more than anything else.
His shining eyes speak far more than he tells.

Two of them r iron men for world, but still they are very much kids at heart. The kids who love,live and make life full of joy...
Once u see them, they get in ur heart, one is GREEK GOD, other is SHINING STAR of the sky!!!!

P.S- Hey ppl i knw i m nt a poet. U cn suggest me ny improvements. I m ready 4 rotten tomatoes n eggs.. 😉

No rotten tomatoes...the poem is really cute...😊 It's how you look at duo...and it's nice to read.

hey good attempt PK...nice poem.

Thanks a lot visrom di and jiya di...

Originally posted by: pvkd

P.S- Hey ppl i knw i m nt a poet. U cn suggest me ny improvements. I m ready 4 rotten tomatoes n eggs.. 😉

Don't say like this, you deserve a big round of applaud for this poem. I really appreciate the way you described Daya sir. Great attempt, keep it up. 👏

Greek god! 😍

This is an absolutely adorable poem ... very cute ... I loved the first 2 lines the most in both the stanzas ... a very nice and sweet one .. great going !!

Thank u very much bhavna di.. 😃

Nice and sweet poem, pvkd. 😊

very nice poem pvkd...👏 👏