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Just finished reading the story. Good work Deepika, I enjoyed it. 👍🏼 A small summary of my pros and cons -

The plot was realistic and something unfortunately not uncommon in the present, so it was possible to relate to it. Friendship between the new characters, interactions between the team and especially the forensic parts were properly written. Daya sir caring for the two girls was good, and the duo scenes were nice, though a little saccharine.

But I should mention that the story should've had suspense or a sense of danger after the initial shooting. Some college students also have links to dangerous criminals and you could've used this in the plot, for example instead of the attempted suicide you could've had an attempted murder. There was a bit too much of emotional thing going on, especially in the reactions of the officers - even if they feel it, you should depict them as reassuring, rational and alert. 😊 Also, try to write the non-dialogue parts in English.

Just my humble opinion. Keep writing and I'm sure you can do even better!

Di So so sorry 😊😭😊😊😊. for late reply😭... Actually maine aapki story pahle hi pad li thi but comment nahi kar payi so sorry...

Mein apne ek dost'se kehti hoon ki woh mere saath Bekal fort chale...Toh woh kehthi hai woh upar mere saath nahi aayegi neeche park mein rahegi toh mein maan jaathi hoon aur useh company keliye saath chalne'ko kehthi hoon...Thodha bura laghta hai ki meine Dad'se jhooth bola par phir bhi unseh milke ka mauka zindagi mein sirf ek baar miltha hai na...Abhi mein bohot betaab si ho rahi hoon CID se milne ke liye... Mera dill jorr jorr se dhadhak raha hai...❤️ mein jaldi'se tayyar ho jaathi hoon... Jitni jaldi ho sakeh utni jaldi aavoongi kehke maa se ghar se nikalthi hoon...Bus stand'se

Meri dost milthi hain aur hum donon saath mein train chadthe hai... Dekhthe hih dekhthe train Bekal fort pohonchthi hai...Ab mere dill ki dhadkan bhi tez hone lagthi hai...

Dheere dheere apne dost ko neeche park mein chodke bohot nervously upar fort ki aur jaathi hoon... Mein dar darr'ke upar jaathi hoon aur isliye dekha nahi ki waha koi action scene chal raha tha...Dekhthe hih dekhthe achaanak'se ek glass ka toothne ki awaaz aathi hai aur kuch cheez mere haathon ke andar ghus jaathi hai... Dekhte hih dekhthe mein behosh 🥱 ho jaathi hoon... khoon dekhke...

Mein jab hosh mein aathi hoon toh kisi bus mein hoon...Mere haath mein kuch ghusa huva hai abhi bhi... mujhe jor'se dardh ho raha hai aur mein useh nikalne ki koshish kar rahi hoon...achanak koi andar ghus'ke aatha hai...Mein dekhthi hoon ki Jaswir kaur aur Yeh Shraddha'ji aathe hai...😲

Jaswir : Haai abhi bhi dard hai kyaa??
Shraadha: Yeh kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hain.? Gungi toh nahi??
Jaswir : Ho sakhtha hai...
Shraadha'ji aur Jaswir'ji ki comments sunkeh bhi mein kuch nahi boli kyunki mein soch rahi thi kuch der tak yeh drama continue karoon...

Jaswir'ji bohot pyaar'se mere haathon ko apne haath ke upar rakhke mere haath'se woh glass piece nikaalne ki ksohish karthe hai aur mein cheekh utthi hoon... thodhi derr baadh jab woh asafal ho jaathe hai toh ...

Aur mein phir akeli reh jaathi hoon... Mein sochne lagthi hoon ki mein bhaag javoon...Yaha pe aayi thi autograph lene aur abhi yese condition mein hoon...Dad'ko bataaya bhi nahi...Neeche meri friend soch rahi hogi ki mein kaha gayi... !!!

Aur ab intezzar ki ghadiyaan khatam huvee aa gaye woh jinhe mein milna chahthi thi... Daya Sir bohot dashingly Along with Aditya Sir,Shivaji Sir,Vivek,Hrishikesh and ofcourse Abhay...

sab ek saath aa gaye... Uff Apne Daya Sir aur Aditya Sir 😍❤️ ☺️kitne smart dikh rahe theh mein kyaa batavoon...😲😳 Shivaji Sir bohot sweeet smile de rahe theh 😊... Vivek,Hrishikesh aur Abhay ek friendly smile de rahe theh.. ❤️😊😊

Daya Sir gaana gaathe huve aaye... 😳 without any warning mere haath ko apne haath mein le liya 😲😳 ( kyunki mein behri aur ghungi hoon na unke idea mein 😉) aur kuch scalpel ya kisi cheez se woh glass piece nikaalne ki koshish mein lageh rahe...aur suprisingly unhone ek hih jhatkeh mein woh choti si glass piece ko araam se nikaal di...Surprise ki wajah 'se mein cheekh uthi aur thodeh aasoon

bhi nikle mereh 😭...sirf dardh se hih nahi..ek embarassment 😳 bhi huva ki mein ek ladki aur itne mardh hain... Shivaji Sir'ne socha ki mujhe bohot dard ho raha hai aur unhone mujhe bohoth pyaar se mere sar pe haath phera ( So sweet of him 😊)... Uske baadh Daya sir bandage laaye aur pehle Savlon lagaaya aur bandage baadhke diya...😳😊

Daya sir : Sir Yeh ladki ghungi aur behri hain ,warna dardh mein toh koi bhi apne maa ko bulaayega..
Shivaji Sir:Haan Daya warna yeh kuch na kuch toh bolthi...
Aditya Sir : Haan mujhe bhi yesa hih lagtha hai...
Vivek : Agar yesa hai sir toh iske saath koi aaya nahi kyaa??
Hrishikesh: Ho saktha hai ki uske saath koi aaya ho ...aur idhar udhar dhoondh raha ho..
Abhay : Haan Mujhe bhi yesa hih lagtha hai..

Tabhi Shraddha aur Kaajal aathi hai
Kaajal : Kyaa huva Sir? Kuch boli ki abhi bhi chup hai? Arey aapne glass nikaal di Daya Sir??
Shraddha : Haan meine kaha tha na Daya Sir nikaalenge..
Daya : Haan yeh dekho yeh tha iske haathon mein chupa...
Shivaji Sir : Abh Daya iska kyaa kare ? Hum iseh akele toh nahi chodh sakhte na??
Aditya Sir : Haan yaha iss jagah pe toh nahi...
Bohot derr tak yeh confusion raha aur woh mere hih baare mein bohot discuss karne lageh...

Mera sabar tootha aur mein bardaash nahi kar paayi... Mein phoot phoot ke hasne lagi...😆🤣

Daya Sir :Arey yeh itna hash kyun rahi hai?
Shivaji Sir:Kyaa huva??
Jaswir :Arey??

Sabki nigahe meri taraf..😲😳 (ghungi boli 😆)

Me : Mein ek doh ghanteh chup kyaa rahi aapne mujhe ghunga aur behra bana diya.. 😆
Jaswir : Toh tum ab tak kuch boli kyun nahi?? 😲
Daya : Haan jab mein tumhare haath'se woh glass nikaal raha tha tabh bhi tum kuch bhi nahi boli..😲
Me : Haan mein isliye chup thi ki mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki mein kyaa boloon..Mein toh yahaan aapse milne aayi thi... 😳😊
Hrishikesh : Achcha toh aap humein uloo bana rahi thi...😕
Me : Sorry mera yeh intension nahi tha... 😔
Daya : Toh apne baare mein kuch batavo... 😊

(To BE CONTINUED 😃😳)

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KYUNKI MEIN GHAR MEIN KANNADA MEIN BAATH KARTHI HOON ISLIYE ITZ ASSUMED THAT IAM TRANSLATING THE KANNADA TALK WITH MY PARENT AND

BROTHER IN HINDI. ALSO ASSUMED THAT THE MESSAGES HAS REACHED CID.

(ABHI CONTINUATION)

Me :Sir mein ...
Achaanak Phone bajtha hai mera..Aur mein phone attend karke call end hone ke baadh kehthi hoon

Me :Sorry Sir...Mujhe jaana padega 😔.Mein akeli nahi aayi thi.Meri dost neeche park mein thi.Aur abhi woh keh rahi hai ki woh ghar jaana chahthi hai..Lekin agar aap kal rahenga toh kya mein kal aasakthi hoon..
Shivaji Sir: Haan kyun nahi...Haina (Sabse) Kal shoot hain na yahaan...
Aditya Sir : Haan kal aao aaram se baath karenge...
Me : Toh Sir mein kal jaroor aavungi...
Daya Sir : Arey apna naam toh batathi jao!!
Me : Mera naam hai...Deepika ... (kisi film dialogue jaise hai 😆)

Toh mein ghar jaldi jaldi jaathi hoon aur chup chaap rehthi hoon... Aur kyunki mein phir Bekal fort jaana chahthi hoon isliye meine phir se dad'se reques karne ka socha...Aur iss baar sach bataaya...(apne chot ko mein chipakeh unseh baath kar rahi hoon...)

Me : Appa mein jab aaj bekal fort gayi na tab meine CID apni Sony TV' ke actors ko dekha...
Dad : Toh ??!!
Me : Appa mein unseh milna chahthi hoon unka autograph lena chahthi hoon...Appa please... Meine kaha hai unseh ki mein kal aavoongi...
Dad : Paagal hogayi ho kyaa?? Woh anjaan logon'se milne javogi tum..??
Me : Isliye toh keh rahi hoon Anna ko saath bhejne keliye...Please Appa...Please... 😭

Dad pehle bohot bhav khaateh hai mujhe bohot rona aatha hai aur bohot raath hone ke baadh kehthe hai.
Dad : Achcha jao lekin akeli nahi Anna'ke saath hih rahogi ...Theekh hai??
Me : Ok... Promise Anna ke saath rahoongi...
Dad : Achcha kal 9:30 ke train mein jaana.
Me : Okay .

Achanak Appa'ko chot dikh jaatha hai aur woh poochthe hai:
Dad: Yeh haath pe kyaa huva??!!
Me : Mein actually waha thoda slip huvi thi,Toh haath pe chott lag gayi aur waha se meine pati lagaadi detol sab daalke.
Dad: Waha dhyaan se dekh ke chala karo...
Me : Theekh hai Appa aayinda dhyaan rakhoongi...

Agleh din mein Anna ke saath bohot mast aur jolly hokeh apne Anna ke saath train board karthi hoon apne yaha'se...Yeseh hih dekhthe hih dekhthe Bekal fort pohonch jaatha hai aur Mein aur Anna (Bhaiya) pohonch jaateh hai...

Waha iss baar mein safely upar pohonch jaathi hoon... Par waha pohonch'ne par mujhe iss bar Crew'ke Member'se baath karni padthi hai...Par iss se pehle hih...

CM : Arey aap toh wahi hain na jo yaha behosh ho gayi thi...??
Me : Haa haa...
Brother: Haaa ????!!!!!!!!!!!! (Bhaiya ko yeh sab nahi pata ki mujhe chot kaise lagi)
CM : Achcha aaj tum yaha kyaa kar rahi ho??
Me : Mein kal sabse baath theekh tarah'se ho nahi paaya toh isliye unseh kaha tha ki mein unseh millna chahthi hoon...
CM :Okay tum yaha intezaar karo...Ab important scene shoot karna hai isliye...

Bhaiya mujhse poochthe hai ki yeh sab kyaa hai toh mein unseh sab kuch bata deti hoon aur kehthi hoon ki woh Dad'ne kuch na baatayeh.Mein aur Anna doorh jaakeh waha bohot photo's keechtheh hai aur idhar udhar se photo keechne ka silsila yeseh chaltha rehtha hai... Lekin CM na humko bulaaya...intezaar 1:30 hogaya par kisi'ne nahi bulaaya humein... Thodi derr baadh Vivek ,Hrishikesh aur Abhay waha se gujar rahe theh... jab bhaiya meri aur ghuseh se dekh raheh 😡 theh ki kabtak hum yeseh baitenge...

Vivek :Deepika Tum yahaan?? Yaha kyaa kar rahi ho?
Me : Yahaan mein aapsabse milne aayi thi baataya toh tha kal... Aur aaj woh CrewMember se kaha toh intezaar karne ko kaha.Unhone bataaye nahi kyaa?
Vivek : Nahi toh??
Me : ??!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tabhi Vivek , Hrishikesh aur Abhay mujhe saath chalne ko kehthe hai...
aur waha shot sab ho gaya hai... aur woh araam se baathe hai...
Saamne baaithe hai our Trio in style ...Naariyal paani peethe huve 😎...

Shivaji Sir : Ohh!! Deepika... Tumne kaha toh tha ki aavogi abtak dikhaayi nahi di toh socha ki ab tum nahi aavogi...
Vivek : Arey Sir yeh toh subah'se aaye theh sir ...Woh humare crew'ne humein bataaya nahi...

Tabhi Shivaji Sir Poochthe crew'se something in Marathi...Toh woh kuch batathe hai...aur phir...

Daya Sir : Oh really sorry we kept you waiting.
Me : Arey Sir sorry ki koi baath nahi Sir...
Aditya Sir : Arey Deepika yeh kaun hai tumhare saath??
Me : Sir Yeh mere Anna matlab Bade bhaiya hai... My one and only Brother.. 😊.
Nikhil : Kal toh yeh nahi aayeh theh toh aaj...
Me :Woh kyaa hai ki kal meri dost thih na,par aaj koi nahi tha toh bhaiya ko leave lene ke baadh mein saath laayi Sir.
Daya : Arey Deepika ab tumhara haath kaisa hai?? Theekh hai na?
Me : Akhir aapne bandage lagaaya hai toh theekh hai Sir ab..
Bhaiya mere yeh sab baatein sunkar muskuraathe hai 😊.
Hrishikesh: Lagtha hai aajbhi kuch khaas baath nahi ho payegi...
Me : Woh kyun?!!!! 😕😔
ShivajiSir : Woh iss liye kyunki hum abhi abhi Hotel Grand international' keliye nikalne wale theh...
Me : Oh!!! Yeh toh mujhe pata nahi tha...
Mein thodi dher sochne ke baadh kehthi hoon
Me : Toh Sir mein chalu...
Aditya Sir : Arey Tum toh bura maan gayi...
Me : Arey nahi sir...Mein kyun bura maanne lagi...Sirf ek request hai ki kuch photo kheechna chahthi thi...

Saari photo keechne ke baadh jab mein hataash hokeh waapas jaa rahi thi biding farewell...Meri aankhen bhar aa raha tha 😭...Itne paas aur kitne doorh...
Achanak ek awaaz aayi Excuse me...Meine peeche dekha toh dekha ki saari team mujhe waapas bula rahi hai... Shaayad mere dill ki baaatein un takh pahunch gayi... Abhi bhi aasu thodeh theh chehre pe... Par phir bhi

muskuraane ki koshosh ki... Unsabmein'se Shivaji Sir bol uthe...

Shivaji Sir: Tum itna takleef leke yaha thak aayi ho toh humsab chahthe hai ki tum humare saath chalo...Hum tumdonon ko ghar tak chodenge thaaki kuch baatein ho sakeh
Mein buss kuch nahi bol paathi aur dekhthe reh jaathi hoon...Mere bhaiya bhi chup ekdum...

Toh jaise thaise sab log van mein chad gaye aur humsab baait gaye toh mein aur bhaiya eksaath baaith gaye.Mein abhithak pooreh hosh mein nahi aa paayi hoon ki mein CID'ke saath waapas aa rahi hoon...Ghaadi chal padthi hai... Aur sab conversation start kar dethe hai...Achaanak'se van's rukh jaathi hai...Aur pata chaltha hai'ki saari van's except ek kharaab ho chuki hain...
Aur majbooran sareh cast ko ek vaan mein adjust karna padtha hai...So everyone Shivaji Sir,Daya Sir,Aditya Sir,Dinesh Sir,Narendra Sir,Vivek,Abhay,Hrishikesh,Shraddha,Jaswir and Ansha

sab ek hih van mein aa jateh hain...Jaise hih sab andar chadthe hai mujhe ek smile de rahe hai. Ghaadi chal padi aur Ab mein phir'se ghungi behri ban'ke baathi thi... Toh conversation start ho gaya:

Daya Sir : Arey tum chup kyun ho?? Kuch toh bolo... Tumhe achchi khasi lift de rahe hai humsab...😆
Shivaji Sir : Haa haa Daya yeh toh kuch bol hih nahi rahi hai...
Me : Mein toh iss intezaar mein thi ki jabaap mujhe bolne ka mauka dogeh...
Daya Sir : Haa toh kuch bolo kal ka baaki reh gaya tha na..
Me : Mera naam Deepika hai mein yahi Railway station ke pass ke ek ghar hai waha rehthi hoon..Abhi mein 2nd year Mcom kar rahi hoon... Mein waheen hoon jisne aapko India-Forums ki taraf'se message bheja...
Vivek : Oho toh woh tum thi... The DreamyDeepz...

Mein sharmaajathi hoon... 😳

Me : Sir aapko yeh messages sab padkeh kyaa laga??
Shivaji Sir : Bohot achcha laga ki CID'ke itne fans hain joh humsab'ko itna chahthe hai...
Daya Sir : Haan Sir inn messages'ne toh humein rula hih diya...
Hrishikesh : Toh tum India-Forums ki member ho... Hmm aajkal isme se bohot logon se miley hum... Shagnika Jigisha, Bhavana, Debasree, Saadrita, Shreela, Neharanii...
Me : Haa woh sab toh miley lekin mein apse sirf yeh aakhri baar milsakhti hoon.. Kyunki Mere yaha aap yeh pehli aur aakhri baar aayenge...
Shraddha : Yesa kyun keh rahi ho??
Me : Sach hih toh hai... AApsab special episode ek hih baar hotha hai aur baar baar nahi na...
Shivaji Sir : Tumse milne keliye toh aa sakthe hai na.
Me : Aap sirf mujhse milne ke liye Kerala aayenge...?!!!!!!!!!!
Daya Sir : Ofcourse ... Mein le aavonga mein yaha mangalore aathe waqt le aavoonga...Theekh hai??
Me : Ok sir ...
Dinesh Sir : Tumhari story meine padi.
Me : Kaisa laga aapko Sir?
Dinesh Sir : Kaafi achcha hai...
Abhay : Par Meri shaadi karvadi Sir issne toh...
Me : Arey sab occupied theh toh sirf aap bachche theh toh isliye aapko iss story mein yeh role diya...

Bhaiya mujhse khusphus karke baath karthe hai aur mein unhe samjhaane ke chakkar mein dheere dheere bolthi hoon...

Shivaji Sir : Koi baath nahi Abhay Issne tumhaari shaadi karvaayi na .Toh hum iskee shaadi karva deteh hai...
Me : Sir aap bhi ...😳

Achanak bhaiya ko phone aajaatha hai aur woh phone pe baath kar rahe hothehai.Tabh mein kehthi hoon..

Me : Sir Please don't mind bhaiya'ko thoda jyaada hih phone aathe hai kyunki woh computer aftersales karthe hai. Kabhi kabhi toh mein mazaak udaathi hoon bhaiya ko ki woh aur Mobile phone ek saath paida huve theh 😆...Tab bhaiya kehthe hai mujhse ki 'Tum bhi kuch kum nahi shaayad tum aur laptop ek saath paida huve hongeh...Tabhi toh hamesha laptop operate karthi ho... 😆

Tabhi Bhaiya'ka call khatam hone ke baadh bhaiya mujhe haath'se maarne ki koshish karthe hai... Tabhi sabhiko dekhke chup ho jaathe hai (Bhaiya aur mein hamesha aapas mein maarthe hai

jhagda karthe hai like usual bhai-behan)
Yehsab sunkeh aur dekhke pura team khoob hasthi hai... 😆
Phir'se bhaiya phusphusake baath karthe hai in Kannada

Aditya Sir : Yeh kyun khus phus karke baath karthe hai jor se bolo na...!!!
Me : Sir agar yeh Daya Sir aur Vivek Sir nahi hoteh yaha toh jor jor'se baath karthe Sir.
Abhay : Woh kyun??? Koi dushmani hai kyaa?
Me : Arey woh baath nahi humdonon Kannada mein baath kar rahe hain toh undonon ko samajh mein aatha hai Kannada...Buss isliye...
Aditya Sir : Toh kyaa huva tum dono koi secret thode hih bol rahe ho..
Me : Yesa kuch nahi par phir bhi...

Daya Sir : Humdonon ka Mulki ka relation hai hai na Deepika

Me : Toh aapko yaad tha jo meine letter mein likha... 😛

Mere bhaiya phir se shocked dekhthe hai... ki unko kaise pata mein Mulki mein padaayi ki...Toh mein Bhaiya ko bataathi hoon ki meine letter likha tha unko along with story aur thodeh messages from India-Forums.

Jaswir : Achcha Deepika yeh batavo ki tumne yeh likha hain yeh real life'se inspired hai ...Kyaa yeh sach hain...
Me : Jee yeh real life'se inspired hai...Mere dost ki real life ka incident..
Narendra Sir : Toh ab woh kaha pe hai??
Ansha : Mein bhi yahi jaanna chahthi thi ki ab woh kaha pe hai??
Me : Woh ab chain ki zindagi jee rahi hai...lekin uska life ka villain pata nahi kaha hai...Gaayab hain woh...
Shivaji Sir : Tunhaari story waakah mein achchi hai... Humaare liye bhi yesi story likha karo.
Me : Sir kyun meri taang kheech rahe ho aap??
Daya Sir : Nahi nahi sach mein kah rahe hai...
Me : Agar sachi mein keh rahe hain toh aapko mere Dad'se baath karni padegi.
Aditya Sir : Woh bhi karlenge...Ismein kyaa hai...
Me : Yehsab messages aur story aapke haathon mein pohonchane keliye Thanks toh mujhe Neha'se kehna chahiye...
Vivek : Achcha tumdonon mein kaafi achchi dosthi hai kyaa?
Me : Ji mein toh useh India-Forums mein miley jab woh dreamy talk likha tha...
Daya : Haan woh meine padhi ...Kyaa itni ichcha thi humsab'se milne keliye...
Me : Koi shak Sir?!!! Waise mujhe aapsabka autograph chahiye.Aur Dinesh Sir aur Narendra Sir Please apke original naam likhyega autograph pe...
Dinesh Sir : Yeh kaise pata tumhe?? Woh sab humein jo bhi IF'se aapko miley woh apne thread pe likhthe hai yeh sab baatein ...unka experience wagaira wagaira...
Narendra Sir : Hmm Kaafi dhyaan rakhthi ho tum... inn sab baaton ka..

Itni baatein karthe karthe hum mere ghar ke yaha pahoonch gaye... Aur meine kaha unse:

Me : Aap yahaan aa hih gaye hai toh please mere ghar pe aayiye buss 10 minute keliye hih sahi... Mere parents ko achcha lagega..

Sab aapas mein baath kehthe hai nahi nahi... bolthe hai...Aur mein jaise taiseh unhe apni baath mana hih leti hoon...Mere ghar ke gate pe hum hain aur saari team bahar khadi hai...Mera paaltu doggie ithne logon'ko dekhke bhokne lagtha hai... Kyunki poori team ko doggie pasand hai woh sab usseh kuch paas aakeh dekhteh hai aur baatein karne ki koshish karthe hai...Itne mein mere Dad aur Mom baahar aajathe hai aur CID'se baathe karne lagthe hain...Baathein sab hogayi ab photo kheechne ka avsar hotha hai...

Shivaji Sir : Yeh kuthe ko paalna jaroori hai kyaa yahaa?
Dad : Sir aap nahi jaanthe ki yaha bohot unsafe jagah hai kyunki Railway Station'ke paas hai isliye... Yaha toh jab kheth mein paani khaali ho jaatha hai toh bhikaari log tent lagaa dete hai

aur yahaan ghar mein ghusne ki koshish karthe hai isliye number lock lagaaya hai thaaki koi bhi andar na aa sakeh...Aajkal yesa zamaana hai ki bhikaari andar aakeh gala dabaakeh maarkar chori karthe hai...

Isliye safety keliye kutha palana pada ...Yeh doosra hai pehle jo doggie tha woh mar gaya... Kyunki hum bohot unsafe feel kar rahe theh isliye phir'se ek kutha paalne lageh.
Abhay : Doggie toh bohot thandurusth hai..
Dad : Woh toh hogah hih .Itna khayaal rakhthe hai har baath ka. Yeh meri beti ka duty hai iski dekhbaal karne ka.

Kuch derr baadh
Aditya Sir : Sir aapki beti toh achchi Script writer ban sakhti hain...Kyaa kahani likhi hai issne...
Daya Sir : Haan Sir Agar aapka permission ho toh hum chahenge ki aap iseh Story writer ke career mein utareh warna hum mauka dena chahenge isseh.
Dad : Arey yeh toh mera saubhagya hoga Par mujhe itne doorh useh...

Aditya Sir : Koi baath nahi Sir aap sochke baatayiye koi jaldi nahi.

Mein bohot surprised look dethi hoon kyunki meine socha tha ki woh mazaakh kar rahe theh 😲...

Brother : Mein toh samjaththa tha ki yeh sab Forum pe time waste karke kyaa faayda..Par ab samajh mein aaya ki woh CID Forum pe itna time kyun spent karthi thi.
Daya Sir : iss baath se yeh samajh lo ki sapne dekhthe rehna chahiye .Kyaa patha yeh sapney kab poora hoga.
Shivaji Sir : Achcha ab humein jaana hoga...

Buss Ab CID jaldi mein hai aur Alvida kehne ke mood mein hai... Tabhi
Me : Aapsab toh humein bhool hih jayenge kyunki hum phir kabhi nahi milenge na

Shivaji Sir : Arey humne abtak Bhavana,Jigisha,Shagnika,ko nahi bhooleh tumhe kaise bhoolenge

Shraddha : Haaa Sir humsab kabhi na kabhi jaroor aayenge milne...
Ansha :Haan Haan jaroor aayenge...

Saara team bolthi hai ki hum aapse milne jaroor aayenge...

Achanak meri maa akeh kehthi hain...

Mom : Arey aap log chai-waai piya binda jaa rahe hai kum se kam khaana khake jaayiye...

Daya : Arey nahi Maam abhi kaafi derr ho gaya...Hotel pe sab intezaar kar rahe honge...

Mom : Arey please chai toh kam se kam peejiye na.

Kuch derr baadh chai banake mom deti hai tabh...

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Phir achaanak

Mom : Arey yeh kyaa Chai thandi kardi phirse... Jaldi peelo warna doosra laathi hoon... Kyaa sapne dekhthi rehthi ho hamesha?!!!

Amma'ko kyaa pata ki mein kyaa sapne dekh rahi thi... 😉

TOH EVERYONE KAISE THA MERA SAPNA 😉😳

MUJHE SIRF EK BAATH HAI KEHNA... KEEP DREAMING EVERYONE 😆