CID Story: Case of the missing men

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Hasini

@Hasini_smile

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey astonish, ur story is great... nice plot, nice investigation and nice message... u gave lot of information too... good work.. thank you for the story... keep writing stories when u find time...

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Astonish, well written. I liked the investigation style a lot👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Hayeee...finished it. I was a lovely story...good to see that you include some moral in the story in the end. your previous story had one too. Your narration is very clear. Requires no effort to understand the plot.

BUT...you know what I am going to say...so I will not say it. 😉

It was a combo of Dangerous Lady + Double DNA (???) and AIC ...but enjoyed it. 😊

I want more from you...with lots of morals and gyan. I wish FW do something like this rather than waste energy on rope tricks and macho stunts.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

And BTW. Google is not 'God'. It is powered by humans. 😉

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: visrom
And BTW. Google is not 'God'. It is powered by humans. 😉

Google is GOD for me... One who answers all my questions is GOD for me 😊

I know its powered by humans... but thats why I admire all humans related to Google 😉

Originally posted by: visrom

BUT...you know what I am going to say...so I will not say it. 😉

What is it??? Some comment or compliment... If so i would love to hear some 😊 because i am clueless as to what it is!!!!!

Edited by astonish - 14 years ago

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Wow! wow! wow!
wonderful story Astonish di..
loved each and every part of it..
the investigation,the emotional scene and mostly the information was jus fab 👍🏼 thanks for such a story!
keep writing more..
Acha lagta hai...

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: astonish

Google is GOD for me... One who answers all my questions is GOD for me 😊

I know its powered by humans... but thats why I admire all humans related to Google 😉

😉😛

Originally posted by: astonish

What is it??? Some comment or compliment... If so i would love to hear some 😊 because i am clueless as to what it is!!!!!

Why Abhijeet in hospital?😒

no issues, just kidding.

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Haan yaar... That role suited abhi sir only... Kya karoon...
When i thought of that character abhi sir hi dikhe woh role mein...
Even i was wondering if i shule keep it that way... because even in the last story abhi sir ko phasa diya tha... But... I thought its ok

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Good story astonish!! Loved every bit though the motive for murder was favorite of FW there was addition from u r side which was very innovative.. Keep it up !! 👍🏼