CID Story: Case of the missing men

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Really loved reading your story. One gets lots of knowledge after reading your story and good moral at the end. Loved your research and the way you build story on your research.😃

Simple beautiful build up of whole plot. 👏👏.

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

wow astonish u really astonish me!! well researched and good story! well done and kp it up!

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Astonish ... read it at last 😆 ...

I must admit that you're one of the finest CID story writer I've known !! The hardwork you put in really shows ... the research you do ... and the way you present it .. that's what makes anything a success !!! I loved reading this story of yours ... too good yaar !!

hehehe promo se daraa diya tha ... and like the promo Abhi sir in the hospital ... 😒 ... hehehe but achche story ke wajah se sab maaf 😛

Google Zindabad ... 😆 ... though I still stick to one thing that kaii baar google mujhe dhoka de deta hai 😆 ... but na ... musibat meinn ho toh bhagwaan ke saath saath google ko yaad karo 😆

Anyways ... I must admit that you've done a fabulous Job !!! I loved it !!!

Note to FW : here goes another addition to the list of writers you should take from IF 😉

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kelly32

@kelly32

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

I just finished reading..simple plot is explained wonderfully..you have woven all points of your research beautifully in the story..good job..👏

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Thats a wonderfully written story after a lot of planning and research work !! Awesome job astonish !! 👏👏 The amount of effort you have put into this is really really praiseworthy !! The hospital scenes were handled in a much better way than present FW !! Complete justice to the story with proper dialogues and perfect characterizations !! You substracted the unwanted team members from your story for your convenience and that surely was a refreshing change from the ghisa-pita episodes !! Overall, a wonderful experience reading a simple, well handled story !! 👏👏👏

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Thank you.

Yeah I had to remove some people from the story... because

1. My story didn't need so many people... and

2. I hardly find any dialog which I can give to the new members...

You can say this story belonged to those days where there were only men in CID😆

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

😆 Whatever !! It was lovely imagining the story without them 😛

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Well done.Great Job.
LOVED THE STORY❤️
VERY INTERSTING STORY!AND LOTS 2 LEARN ALSO!

HW I WISH THIS IS TAKEN AS AN EPISOE IN CID!

THANK U VERY MUCH 4 THE STORY...

U R A GENIUS...!!!!!!!!👍🏼

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Just wonderful Astonish 👏 👏...though the scientist & his experiment part is already seen in the CID but ur whole story is quite different & ur research is too good...i really liked the map...keep it up 👍🏼
Sorry for the late reply...

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

hey ASTONISH...

first i say XTREMELY SORRY abt my LATE kiya XTRA LATE FEEDBACK in UR STORY due to sum personal n professional issues... but YESTERNIGHT (its my own term😉)... ii tried to erase my GUILT... and with complete free mind read UR story...
very very WELL DONE👍🏼... WOW⭐️... wat a RESEARCH👏!!! the ELECTROLYTE fumes... the CHEMICALS... the LAST patch of GLASS CHAMBER... the ARCTIC era... U wrapped the RED FOX quite nicely... the distribution of team was good... thanx for NOT torturing us wirh SACHIN, KAJAL n NIKHIL 😆...
i m really THANKFUL for UR story which really boost me up to do sum better in future... cum up with more buddy...

Edited by gadhadada - 14 years ago

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