mY dEfleCtiVE ShaDe GamE oVEr!!! - Page 3

OMG...this is the most awesome story i have read in my life....gadhadada, you're really great...how did u ever make such a story....totally cool...i am fully speechless....full of suspense, thriller, action...please hurry up with the next level...i'm REALLY waiting for it......this story made my day....i am having exams now, and the tension of studying was reallly getting to me but you totally relaxed me with this story

KEEP up the gr8 work and keep the stories coming 😃😃😃

And a standing ovation for this story....can't stop praising it.... 👏

awesome story, very beautifully written. have no words for it👏
keep writing and waiting for the next level😊

Dear gadhadada an edge of the seat story... from your first one you have made strides. Nice to see that. The way you put the weakness of the CID officers was interesting. But, one question gadhadada, if you are going to bring up the other's weakness at level 1 you have to keep on showing new things always and new things sometimes may not work. So go careful with new things.

hey ALL....
specially NIMI, NEEME DII, NOTEPAD, MALLIKABALU, ASTONISH... and all.....
yaar mujhay YAQEEN he nahi aa raha kay AAP sub READERS ko meri STORY itni achi lagi.....
even i changed my OWN STYLE.... and its bit DIFFICULT...... but NEEME DII U was CORRECT.... the OUTPUT which i thought in my MIND ..... wil COME.... and its really calm my feel.....
its JUST a RELAX BUSTER!!!!!!!
my all EFFORTS n HARDWORKING...... really vanished after all URs APPRECIIATION.... PRAISE.... even STANDING AVAITION (from NOTEPAD)......
UFFFFFFFF...... i FELT myself at CLOUD NINE...... even MY 3 POST on FORUM and all GOT XTRA ORDINARY FEEDBACK n APPRECIATION....

BUNDLES, TONS, STACKS, LOADS, BUCKET, CARTONS of THANKS.... THANX.... THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!

@ Gadhadada - very well written 👍🏼........ eagerly waiting for level 2.

THANK YOU very very much AADRIKA......
really.....

hey PPL

yaar itna saara PASEENA....
my HEAD getting WET minute after minute
with ALL UR FEEDBACK.....

my SKIN TONE changing into
PALE.... with ALL URS EXPECTATION....

READERS EXPECTATION on XTRA HIGH ALTITUDE....

my nerves felt that PRESSURE which my CHARACTER had felt in those scary CHAMBERS....
lots of NERVOUSNESS.... TENSION....
QUERIES.... ANGER.... YAWN.... DISTRUBANCE.... HOPE!!!




there is a SMALL HUMBLE REQUEST.....
PLZ dunt EXPECT MORE......
really.... NOW ME SCARE n SHOCKED......😲
cz READERS FEEDBACK (as in FORUM POST or PM) tensed me......
bhae... itni EXPECTATION HIGH na rakkhein.....
either i'll DIE.................🤢
plz yaar KUCH REHAM KARO.....
BACCHY KI JAAN PER😉
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


from:
WRITER!!!!

@gadhadada

hey yaar hats of uuuuuu👏

new member's ist post for uuuuu😉😉

are yaar hamari nhi to chick16 ki request hi kbool kr lo...........
please post next level...
dear dere 's nothing to criticise....nd its extraordinary story....
or kitni feedback chahiye 😍😍😍😍