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cid_duo

@cid_duo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

@gadhadada..
hey b'day buddy when u post the rest story.......................

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey SHIVANI....

nice to hear from U.....
yaar batao kub post karun!!!
next level.....???

i think after a WEEK!!!
wat U n all suggest????????

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cid_duo

@cid_duo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey bhagwan utha le mujhe😆😆😆😆
what r u saying???????????????????
after a week🥱.....i will defintly die till than.........
please yaar apni bday treat smjh kr aaj hi post kr do👏
or kitna wait krvogi😉
please post soon...
nd once again happy birthday.......................

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

oh no......
NO Almighty LORD...... plz dunt pick UP my frnd so early😉
arry yaar abhi is story ko sirf 113 logun nay parha hay....
kuch aur feedback tou aany do.....
ta kay main aur buhat saara KHUSH hun....... aham....
hain na....
abhi mujhay buhat logun kay FEEDBACK ka intaizaar hay!!!
yaar koi CRITICISM nahi hay??? WHY!!!

chalo.... wait karo....
zyada marnay maarnay ki baatein na karo....
aaj ya kal wesay bhi DAYA Sir ki performance dekhni hay... JDJ per....
zabardast....
he is LOOKIN..... 3G..... hahahah....
superfast.... superhansome.... superdashing.....😉

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subha.

@subha.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

The story does have thrill and intrigue...👍🏼very well written @gadhadada

waiting for the story to be continued and completed further

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Good Work Gadhadada !!! Well written 😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

thanx alot.....
STAR 571.... and BHAVNAB DII......

two main IF WRITER GANG members.... PRECIOUS FEEDBACK....
WOW.....
meri aaj ki BIRTHDAY tou buhta hee MEMORIABLE ho gayii......

thank YOU..... very much..............

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Gadhadada, I'm badly waiting for your next.... pls. try to complete it ASAP!!!

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

ya RASHIDA.....

i'l post it SOON..... dunt WAIT BADLY................
thanx ALOT......

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

I dont knw where is my post which i edit before some mintues....

Well here is my review.....WOW! full of suspense,horrible......what to say...i think ur main intension was that we guys feel that tensions which was officers feeling in the story...So u achieved it...U really deserve 👏👏👏👏....Very different idea.....Great work gadhadada👍🏼 Really like itt...i am waiting for ur next level or anyother story...i hope it will come soon....

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