STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom - Page 12

waiting to read more and more and more 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Originally posted by: aparakshitij

I like the way u r building up the suspense.Also,u r utilizing their i.e. characters' plus points very well,like Abhijeet sir is very sharp.U have highlighted his presence of mind and sharpness in the scene where he distracts the kidnapper.Well done!👏?Waiting for HD's arrival..

it seems better than ac finale.good jod.

visrom the is actually goin good superb lekin jaldi continue toh karo
u r really superb writer
keep ti up

Finished...or rather I should say wound up. Bit of a problem at my end....sorry about that.

Do read and give feedback, good or bad.

I couldn't go to Paris or rather I didn't want to...I wanted CID team to be in Mumbai on Dushera day. 😛

Lovely Action packed climax, I loved the SMS, when i read "main abhi..." I knew Daya Sir would realise. Sad we lost the youngster. So much better than the garbage we saw. The end seemed a bit rushed but good none the less. Glad you did not go to paris.

👏mindblowing story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hatts off tu u visrom👏👍🏼

Superb throughout....👏👏👏....... surely a "VISROM story "😃....

I LOVED IT......it had the CID element in it....be it the emotional scenes, the twists, the suspense, the action, chase, disguise... ALL IN ONE!.. a perfect DUSSHERA special...How much i wish AC finale could give equal amount of joy and satisfaction!!!!!.

Feeling sad for Anil, joined CID at the cost of his life😭..But cant help it. It was necessary to show something that HD had his men succeeded in.....
Abhi sir's message and interpretation by Daya sir was surely very well thought of! 👏 ...and Freddy asked about the 2 new cops very sweetly.. Indeed a very sweet character he is!😊

And ACP sir's last thought was really well written. Ended on a very sweet and warm note.😳

Above all, Hats off to you for trying your BEST to explain the unexplainable unfinished story by FW.....⭐️

Managed to finish reading it !!! Read it from beginning to end all together !! Well what should I say ?? It had almost everything that I wanted to see in a climax !! Action,emotion,understanding between officers-everything !!

The motive behind MM doing this has been justified !! Mainly I loved the last stanza when ACP sir thinks about the accusations !!!

Well sms part was superb !!! "main abhi theek hoon" made me instantly know Daya sir will know it !!!

Now the last scene !! Well written !! Action filled Just I found it happening a bit to fast but was not at all bad !!! All in all you gave me a true Aakhri Takkar Visrom !!!! Thanks for this !!

Excellent Story!!!!!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼