STORY CONTEST- 2(CASE OF THE MYSTERIOUS KIDNAPPER) - Page 13

Ok, we'll do this...we'll not consider the story as part of contest. We'll not allot marks or anything to it.

I want to read it surely. Post it. About marks everyone's choice (jo majority kahe)

Visrom Go Ahead with it..Do it now na please would love to read it 😛 😊

Hey thanks for the wonderful reviews Bhinder, Shagnika, Jiya! 👍🏼

@Visrom - Yeah I think it'll be best to post the story without alloting marks to it Visrom....We'd definitely love to read it and give our views on it 😃

Thats the best we can do... Would love to read another story n give our precious comments !!!! 😆 just kidding!!! 😛

I think that's a good way, would love to read another story. 😊

Actually the person has not finished. the person wrote half of it and then was busy so could not finish. S/he was saying that if nobody agrees, s/he will not contiinue. Lets see...

I eprsonally feel (No Offense to anyone) that the member posts her story as a thread by itself, u know separately- Otherwise there might b confusion... However, its up to u!!

My Reviews- (Plz dont mind @ Those who are my Friends!!!)


Story 1 is quite well-written. The climax scene seems to come from a professional writer! Ure style of writing is really nice and ure ideas are really fantastic... Short, action-paced and innovative! Keep it up! 👏

Story 2 is slightly complicated to understand... Maybe it will come out well on the screen!! The writer is really creative and has mastery over the language and style of narration and dialogues... 👏

Story 3 is also well written but it has certain complex scenes... However Abhi-Daya scenes are ejoyable... U seem to have caught the essence of their bond! Well-written and well-planned out! 👏

Story 4 is innovative, action-paced and really well-written. The writer has really gud writing skills! Tho slightly lengthy, ure story style and narration and climax scene is excellent! 👏

Story 5 is pretty long but an interesting story to read. I liked the plot and the writer seems to have really worked hard! But plz try to keep the story a bit shorter... Maybe some scenes were too long and could have been narrated instead of being put into dialogues. However its really well-written for a two hour special episode! 👏

Story 6 is also well-written! Short and sweet and creatively well handled and clear! Keep it up! 👏

Story 7 is really interesting, short and different. One suggestion- There could have been spaces between scenes and dialogues- it brought a strain to my eyes to try and figure out the story. But ure story is simple and cute. It seems its ure first story. And it was a bit strange to read the dialogues in english. Nevertheless a gud try! Do keep it up! 👏

Story 8 is another well-written, well-thought out, well-planned story! Do keep it up! The climax was rather gud! 👏

Story 9 is fantastic and ation-filled. Reminds me of some Golden Era episodes of CID! Professionally well-handled and thrilling to the end, the story was really interesting to read! Writer seems to have been inspired by some cases of 2003! Another S. Raghavan in making? 👏

Story 10 was okay-okay. Very simple handling, nicely done plot and gud climax. Not bad shot! D idea of a false roof was really gud! And bringing police, media and sniffer dogs lends a proper atmosphere to d story. U seem to b an Abhi fan, d way u have gv him most of d scenes... 👏

Story 11 is also well written and nicely action paced. Keep it up and dont give up writing! 👏


And A Big ⭐️ To Visrom For Organizing This Contest

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Originally posted by: drilabh

I eprsonally feel (No Offense to anyone) that the member posts her story as a thread by itself, u know separately- Otherwise there might b confusion... However, its up to u!!