STORY CONTEST- 2(CASE OF THE MYSTERIOUS KIDNAPPER) - Page 15

sunny is a good observer..good admire and critics...so had given really good review.😃

I am not so good observer last time I made mistake of reading first all stories then review. this time I took 2 stories a day and writing review simultaneously.

Thanks so much for the wonderful review Drilabh! 😃

And Sunny, thanks for such an honest and detailed review...really appreciate it 👍🏼

Finally my review(Bhinder ab khush ho na ?? )

First of all i'd like to say great work everyone,itne interesting and new ideas hain ki I think hum log bade bade writers ko peeche chod sakthe hai,looks like CIDians have turned into excellent detectives and criminals,dono ke hisson ko bahut hi achcha likha


Story 1 nice concept,mainly everything went inflow all scene were properly connected to each other but just felt ki ACP should have told someone about the plan because here he had his life at risk so I felt he should have told someone atleast about his plan,but I really liked forensic scenes jaisa hona chaaahiye waisa tha,so great work keep it up would love to read more from you 👏 👍🏼

Story 2 :- Nice attempt by the writer,story was in flow but I had a little problem with the language,light moments were very good but just wished you had added a little element of suspense as well,it would have turned out very good,investigation wise its a nice job done 👏

Story 3 One of my favourites,very good plot, a well planned story,went with the flow and looks like the writer is a creative person,mystery handled properly and ending was very good,in total a very good work,theme was very good 👏 👍🏼

Story 4 Good attempt again,very nice plot,well handled and thanks for the Abhi-Daya moments,suspence was well maintained just climax thoda thanda pad gaya otherwise very good,would love to read many more from you 👏 👍🏼

Story 5 Looked like the writer put in hard work,nice story, suspense well maintained,just one suggestion thoda lamba ho gaya,ACP sir was the highlight,keep it up and definitely want to read more after the contest 👏 👍🏼

Story 6 Again a very good work by the writer, suspense was well maintained,liked the idea of bringing ACP sir's past,everyone played their part with proper investigation,but last scene was surprising like a twist in the tail,keep it up would like to read more from you 👏 👍🏼

Story 7 Nice attempt,everyone played their parts,just felt suspense element was a little less but again a good job done,ending was interesting,keep it up 👏 👍🏼

Story 8 Clear,short and crisp,team work shown well,logic wise very good,keep it up want to read more 👏 👍🏼

Story 9 Very good attempt by the writer,suspense element was well maintained and a thrilling story,good job done,expecting many more from you in the future 👏 👍🏼

Story 10 Good job,enjoyed reading it,different and exciting,you are a good writer and want to see u posting more in the future,even though Abhi-Daya rift was sorted out but thoda bura laga but ye sab chaltha hai dosti mein 👏 👍🏼

Story 11 Nice job by the writer,unique motive and interesting,the first story I read so liked it,keep it up 👏 👍🏼

So in total great work by everyone,I guess we CIDians are the perfect creative team,all the stories had something special and exciting.
Visrom,give yourself a pat on your back,great job done,tumne itna achcha plot socha ki everyone had to write something special 👍🏼

Finally would say BP Singh sir have a look here yahaan talent ka bhandar hai,we'll give you proper investigation stories along with some special moments

Thanks Bhavana for reviews. I will keep in mind points mentioned by you and try to improve.

So you also successfully hide your own story.

😆 Yeah a lot finally one more review..Excellent one..kya observation ki hain yar hats off to you...Superb and is bat ki bhi mystery rahi hain which one is yours..thanks for review and sure i will try to improve next time

Great review Bhavana... 👍🏼

Bhavana as usual awesome review really motivating. Will definitely try to improve next time. Waise I will be obliged if some one shows the flaws in the story too.

Thanks for liking it and suuny,bhinder

As i said in my review hum log achche criminals bhi ban chuke hai CID dekhne ka faayda yahi hai ki hum suspence maintain kar sakte hai