Jiya's Poems Station-1..GOOD BYE ALL OF U

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Debayon Dutta

@debayon

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#991

Hey, Jiya Di, thanks for writing and dedicating poems to everyone....😃

Mein maafi chahta hoon ki yeh thread maine pehle nahi dekha.

Aapke liye do line toh likh hi sakta hoon:

Forum ki hain sabse pyari didi Jiya,

Unhone sabko hain dil behela diya,

apne sunder sunder kavitayon se,

aur apni meethi meethi baaton se.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#992

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter

Bas Jiya now dont be modest

who is geeting modest here....u not me sneha😕

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#993

Originally posted by: debayon
Hey, Jiya Di, thanks for writing and dedicating poems to everyone....😃

Mein maafi chahta hoon ki yeh thread maine pehle nahi dekha.

Aapke liye do line toh likh hi sakta hoon:

Forum ki hain sabse pyari didi Jiya,

Unhone sabko hain dil behela diya,

apne sunder sunder kavitayon se,

aur apni meethi meethi baaton se.

too good dby..u r also get

m getting faint today we got such a good poet today

1)Sunita

2)pricess

3)Monika

4)deby

5) Visrom

OMG 5..unbelivable...😲

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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#994

Incredible Poem Jiya. Indeed nice, stylish, innovative, extreme to the point and detailed.

Congratulation You for creating a excellent poem.

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Jeet Banerjee

@jeet.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#995

awwsum job jiya di again!

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#996

Thank you jeet and CID_HD for aapriciating my poems😃

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#997

One marathi charoli(4 liner on Rain)

Bahar bahut jor ki barish ho rahi hein...and I am enjoying that...aur muze ye panktiya marathi mein suzi

Pavasat bhijun mi ole chimb zale
Asusalele maze man janu trupt zale
Pavasane mala ase ved lavale
Mi tyachya premat aakanth budale....

mein hindi mein aap ke liye traslate karati hunab..thoda bahut meaning edhar udhar huva hein...m sorry...but aapako usa 4 liner ka basic meaning samjhega

Bharish mein bhigakar mein gili ho gayi

jaise mere man ki pyas bhuj gayi

barish ne muze etana diwani ho gayi

usake pyar mein mein dub gayi....

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